Mmm, I wanted to like this, but I was too distracted by all the unanswered questions (not the good kind) I was left nursing to really enjoy it. The premise is really interesting and the plot too, but it was buried under a lot of personal drama that I just didn't find it in me to care for (and being a sucker for a dismissive MMC, I should have fallen for that like a shark for a fresh piece of chum, but alas). I made it to the end mostly out of sheer spite.
The female characters are done really dirty here, relegated to shallow stereotypes (which bleeds into the male characters as well, but not nearly as much) rather than interesting, multidimensional people. The text hates women for some reason (never explained), portraying them unfavourably in comparison to the men, and making them antagonistic with each other while they simultaneously fawn over the men (even when being openly lecherous).
The FMC was the worst offender of them all. She seems to hate everyone, herself included, and at several points I wished she'd just space herself and let me read my book in peace. Had she been murdered by the end of the book, it would have been incredibly satisfying (it's a romance, not gonna happen, I know).
I kept wishing the book would balance the science better with plot elements - either dig in more into the science and explain it in the moment (rather than me running to google things every five minutes to really understand the stakes) or just straight up gloss over it in favour of Plot Things Happening (Hollywood style). There was also some confusion with the welders getting mixed up, which vexed me an irrational amount, probably because of the FMC making me feel like I wanted to bitch slap someone.
The writing leans heavily into clichés, the dialogue is wooden in many places, the large cast not introduced in a way that makes them all clear and distinct individuals... but we've all been new authors at one point, still in search of our own voice and our own vision, and if she ever decides to turn this into a horror and throw Alex out an airlock, I'll be there with my revenge popcorn.