3.75 for this fun and quirky book
Mara and Gus are at it again! Gus has it in his head that he needs to honor Grundleshanks for the sacrifice that psychedelic toad had made in book 1, and it lands them into a series of trouble that strangley only Mara seems to see coming. Gus loses faith in her, Paul is an ass, the morning sickness is out of control, and someone needs to change the litter box. What's worse, Gus's new beau is driving a rift between friends.
Here's what I didn't like: Holy scene breaks, batman! A lot of it felt like the author would write a couple hundred words, scene break, and then flow right into the same thing. Like I'm not sure exactly why the need for so many breaks were in this book. I don't even remember it being like this in the first one, but what was the point? The very next scene was just a continuation of the first scene. There wasn't a POV change, so that wasn't the reason. She went down the stairs? Is that why? I was thoroughly perplexed by the scene breaks, and it made the flow of a lot of the chapters choppy, and encouraged me to do something else instead of continually reading. Luckily, I'm as stubborn as Gus is. There's also some minor punctuation issues around dialog and action tags. (Paul's a real jerk in this book, and the rift between them feels natural, and I don't like him, but that's not a flaw). I pegged Forrest immediately, but only because I instinctively imagined him as a certain actor who has played that type of role a couple times.
Here's what I liked: It has the same easy, happy go lucky feel as book 1, and the same charm that... charmed me. I loved the toadstool, the banter between Gus and Mara. Grundleshanks, the on going aunt tillie theme.
Overall, this was a nice red, the plot was presented in a timely manner and had good pacing, but the unnecessary scene breaks hurt the flow of the books.