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When the City Sleeps
With each fallen petal, I ask the fates, “did he ever love me?
Revenge is welcome here as all magic is legal in Nilport. Subin begins to unravel the mystery of her own death.
With her own life extended for only seven days,
Subin will have to choose if finding the truth at all costs is worth it even if it is her own life on the line.
Saved from the brink of death by arcane magic, Subin is transformed from a cast aside woman into an undead vessel fit to haunt the castle she sought to rule. But, there are no rules here in Nilport. His red eyes staring into hers, Lord Anargyros is the Lord Commander of the Midnight Remains that handles when bodies show up in the Nilport bay. Her love is so so far away from this place.
Subin realizes that her former lover let her die in a terrible way.
Revenge is welcome here as all magic is legal in Nilport. Subin begins to unravel the mystery of her own death.
With her own life extended for only seven days,
Subin will have to choose if finding the truth at all costs is worth it even if it is her own life on the line.
Saved from the brink of death by arcane magic, Subin is transformed from a cast aside woman into an undead vessel fit to haunt the castle she sought to rule. But, there are no rules here in Nilport. His red eyes staring into hers, Lord Anargyros is the Lord Commander of the Midnight Remains that handles when bodies show up in the Nilport bay. Her love is so so far away from this place.
Subin realizes that her former lover let her die in a terrible way.
67 pages, Kindle Edition
Published April 21, 2025
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November 23, 2025
ARC read:
The idea for this novella was really interesting but there wasn't enough time to tell a complete story. it needed at least another 200 pages and a couple rounds of edits. I think if the author took this and expanded on it while also utilizing copyeditor/proofreaders and beta readers it could be a really good book. As it is, the book was difficult to read and extremely confusing. It was written with a historical fantasy setting and with that the dialogue was written to match. The problem is that the dialogue was really confusing and certain words weren't used right. Which is why the main problem is the editing. Again, the idea behind the novella was really interesting and initially I was very excited for it.
The idea for this novella was really interesting but there wasn't enough time to tell a complete story. it needed at least another 200 pages and a couple rounds of edits. I think if the author took this and expanded on it while also utilizing copyeditor/proofreaders and beta readers it could be a really good book. As it is, the book was difficult to read and extremely confusing. It was written with a historical fantasy setting and with that the dialogue was written to match. The problem is that the dialogue was really confusing and certain words weren't used right. Which is why the main problem is the editing. Again, the idea behind the novella was really interesting and initially I was very excited for it.
December 23, 2025
When the city sleeps is a whole different vibe, isn't it? I went into it with no expectations, and I ended up really enjoying it! Not what I'm used to, but the author did an amazing job at transporting me into the story. And OMG, the Tim Burtonesque vibe is SO on point! I'm a HUGE fan of his work, and this totally captured that eerie, whimsical feel. I think the author totally nailed what she was going for, and I'm here for it!
May 26, 2026
I didn’t hate this short story but I didn’t love it either. The vibes were great and I think if the author had more time with developing the book it would’ve been a really strong read. There are a few errors and the story feels a bit choppy and rushed. The characters seemed interesting but we don’t spend enough time with them to learn enough about them. I would definitely love to read any future books expanding this world, but for now with this being a standalone short novel it’s a bit weak.
November 22, 2025
This was a good short read. It had a lot of different aspects that suck you in. Would have loved to have it be longer as the author wrote it really well.
April 2, 2026
⭐️⭐️ - the story has potential but is too choppy a read for my taste, almost DNF-d
The style of writing wasn’t my cuppa and I don’t usually leave 2⭐️ reviews when I’d rather DNF, but the story was under 90-minutes & I promised the author I’d finish it, so I did. If I had bought it, I’d have DNF-d it at chapter 3 (page 10/42).
What I liked about this short story:
- Unique story - not a retelling, not a trad fae or horror romance, something singularly unique with potential to be outstanding;
- the names and flipped genders - eg Nilport and the Pyro Captain was female;
- the magical world - the Undead protecting the harbour with the Witches against an advancing shipwreck; beings half flesh and half bone and salt water burning the undead - all excellent elements in worldbuilding;
- Loved the map - a sign this could be a fantastic epic adventure with more stories from this world to come;
- Some of the imagery was wonderful - when it was there;
- Nice twist on the undead queen!
- Also liked the hook at the end and am curious to find out how the situation would resolve.
What I was unhappy about when reading (and personally think the author could really use the help of a developmental editor):
- the storyline - it starts like an attack on a city (which is super good and actioney for a start), but then peters out into one unrelated scene and then another - I felt like I had jumped into a story that had a prequel somehwere (which I hadn’t read) and I was supposed to have lots of pre-knowledge (which I didn’t) - this definitely detracted from reading;
- Not a lot of descriptions - of characters, of scenery - I would have loved to try and imagine the wonderful world the author wanted to weave instead of catching glimpses of haphazard scenes;
- time & scenejumps - jolted me out of the reading experience, eg timejump of supporting the queen in her endeavours without explaining how the rot seeping from her body was handled or several bulky actions stuffed into one single paragraph and few sentences;
- Too much telling, not enough showing;
- Too many different things jumbled up into single paragraphs (versus single thought / single character per para) - this made the text and story really hard to follow;
- constant non sequiturs in dialogues - dialogues are always my favourite part in any book- but when two people are talking and what one says doesn’t follow from what the other says, this is super annoying;
- I was not fully sure what the genre was - with a little help, this story could equally be developed into an epic as well as a steampunk version of events;
- Headhopping (inner thoughts of one character one line and POV of another character in the next para);
- some characters could use the benefit of sounding different when speaking, eg the shopgirl should be more subservient and respectful, not on a par when speaking with a lord and a lady.
I would very much like to read the full story of the undead girl, but the version of the ARC I received for reading seemed more of an alpha version of the story - yet to be developed into a vividly descriptive & coherent book. The author does admit in the acknowledgements section that the story was written in 7 days and partly in bathrooms. This piece could definitely benefit from the attention of a developmental editor, a line editor and a proofreader - and could potentially blossom into a magnificent book.
At this point in time I have trouble recommending this read to anyone until the storyline, descriptions and characters are fully developed. It has all the potential of being a great epic or steampunk story - after considerable rework.
The style of writing wasn’t my cuppa and I don’t usually leave 2⭐️ reviews when I’d rather DNF, but the story was under 90-minutes & I promised the author I’d finish it, so I did. If I had bought it, I’d have DNF-d it at chapter 3 (page 10/42).
What I liked about this short story:
- Unique story - not a retelling, not a trad fae or horror romance, something singularly unique with potential to be outstanding;
- the names and flipped genders - eg Nilport and the Pyro Captain was female;
- the magical world - the Undead protecting the harbour with the Witches against an advancing shipwreck; beings half flesh and half bone and salt water burning the undead - all excellent elements in worldbuilding;
- Loved the map - a sign this could be a fantastic epic adventure with more stories from this world to come;
- Some of the imagery was wonderful - when it was there;
- Nice twist on the undead queen!
- Also liked the hook at the end and am curious to find out how the situation would resolve.
What I was unhappy about when reading (and personally think the author could really use the help of a developmental editor):
- the storyline - it starts like an attack on a city (which is super good and actioney for a start), but then peters out into one unrelated scene and then another - I felt like I had jumped into a story that had a prequel somehwere (which I hadn’t read) and I was supposed to have lots of pre-knowledge (which I didn’t) - this definitely detracted from reading;
- Not a lot of descriptions - of characters, of scenery - I would have loved to try and imagine the wonderful world the author wanted to weave instead of catching glimpses of haphazard scenes;
- time & scenejumps - jolted me out of the reading experience, eg timejump of supporting the queen in her endeavours without explaining how the rot seeping from her body was handled or several bulky actions stuffed into one single paragraph and few sentences;
- Too much telling, not enough showing;
- Too many different things jumbled up into single paragraphs (versus single thought / single character per para) - this made the text and story really hard to follow;
- constant non sequiturs in dialogues - dialogues are always my favourite part in any book- but when two people are talking and what one says doesn’t follow from what the other says, this is super annoying;
- I was not fully sure what the genre was - with a little help, this story could equally be developed into an epic as well as a steampunk version of events;
- Headhopping (inner thoughts of one character one line and POV of another character in the next para);
- some characters could use the benefit of sounding different when speaking, eg the shopgirl should be more subservient and respectful, not on a par when speaking with a lord and a lady.
I would very much like to read the full story of the undead girl, but the version of the ARC I received for reading seemed more of an alpha version of the story - yet to be developed into a vividly descriptive & coherent book. The author does admit in the acknowledgements section that the story was written in 7 days and partly in bathrooms. This piece could definitely benefit from the attention of a developmental editor, a line editor and a proofreader - and could potentially blossom into a magnificent book.
At this point in time I have trouble recommending this read to anyone until the storyline, descriptions and characters are fully developed. It has all the potential of being a great epic or steampunk story - after considerable rework.
April 14, 2026
The opening chapters are a challenge. The narrative is told from a distant omniscient perspective that keeps the reader at arm's length, the chapter transitions are abrupt, and the world is introduced at a pace that can feel a tad bit disorienting. If this were a book I picked up casually, I may not have continued past the first few chapters.
I'm glad I did.
Once the story finds its footing, it becomes something genuinely special. Subin, the woman at the center of the mystery, is one of the more quietly heartbreaking characters I've encountered in recent fantasy short fiction. She arrives in Nilport clinging to the identity of a queen, insisting on her title with a dignity that is equal parts admirable and devastating, because the reader slowly pieces together that the life she remembers may not be the life she actually lived.
The standout character is Lord Anargyros, the city's security commander, who manages the rare trick of being compelling in almost every scene he appears in. Arrogant on the surface, yet he is gradually revealed to be one of the kindest characters in the story. He sends guards to sit with lonely women at social functions. He trims a giant witch's garden.
The social scene where Subin's true nature is exposed is one of the story's best sequences. A noble girl throws water on her, her tears run blood, and she kneels on the floor of a crowded room begging forgiveness from someone who came back purely to humiliate her. It is excruciating to read in the best possible way. The author understands that social cruelty often lands harder than physical violence, and the scene earns its emotional weight completely.
When The City Sleeps is not a perfect story. The opening needs editorial attention, the formatting in the ARC has issues throughout, and some of the dialogue reaches for lyricism at moments that call for something more grounded. But the bones of this story are excellent, and Lilse Asalt has instincts that technique and editorial polish will only sharpen over time.
For readers who love underworld mythology, morally complex characters, and stories about women who were failed by everyone they trusted, this one is worth the patience it asks for in the beginning.
January 25, 2026
My Rating: ★★★★½
ARC Read
When The City Sleeps by Lilse Asalt is a dark fantasy horror steeped in grief, vengeance, and fractured memory. Set in the lawless, magic-saturated city of Nilport, where revenge is not only permitted but welcomed, the story follows Subin as she begins to unravel the mystery surrounding her own death, armed with only seven borrowed days and a truth that may cost her everything.
This is a story driven by atmosphere and emotional weight. Subin’s journey is one of amnesia and emotional scars, where fragments of memory surface alongside the slow, horrifying realisation that the person she once loved allowed her to die in a brutal way. Her resurrection through arcane magic transforms her into something other, an undead vessel tethered to a city that thrives on corruption, secrets, and blood-stained magic.
Nilport itself feels alive; oppressive, morally unmoored, and drenched in darkness. Murder is commonplace, magic has no limits, and the line between justice and vengeance is blurred beyond recognition. The presence of Lord Anargyros, with his red eyes and commanding authority over the Midnight Remains, adds an eerie, unsettling dynamic. His role in dealing with the dead creates a constant reminder that death is never far from Subin, even as she walks among the living once more.
One of the strongest aspects of When The City Sleeps is its exploration of mental health and trauma. Subin’s emotional state feels raw and fragile, shaped by loss, betrayal, and the knowledge that her second chance at life is painfully temporary. The themes of miscarriage, PTSD, and body horror; though not explicit; cast a heavy shadow over the narrative, reinforcing the sense that this story is meant to be felt as much as read.
Emotionally, the book carries a quiet heaviness rather than outright devastation. There’s a persistent ache beneath the mystery, a slow burn of grief and resentment that simmers as Subin pieces together the truth. While there are romantic undertones, they remain distant and restrained, which fits the tone of the story and keeps the focus firmly on survival, memory, and revenge rather than spice.
My main critique isn't for the author but to myself as I read this after ending up in hospital due to a miscarriage; that is completely on me. I normally can handle the miscarriage trope but I wasn't able to handle it well this time. Apart from this, there were some threads that felt like they could have hit harder if given more space to breathe, particularly considering the strength of the premise and themes.
Overall, I would recommend When The City Sleeps to readers who enjoy dark fantasy with horror elements, murder mysteries, amnesia-driven narratives, and emotionally scarred heroines navigating morally grey worlds. This is a story for those who appreciate atmospheric storytelling, mental health representation, and revenge-fueled plots wrapped in dark magic and quiet despair. It may not be a perfect read, but it’s a haunting one that lingers long after the final page.
ARC Read
When The City Sleeps by Lilse Asalt is a dark fantasy horror steeped in grief, vengeance, and fractured memory. Set in the lawless, magic-saturated city of Nilport, where revenge is not only permitted but welcomed, the story follows Subin as she begins to unravel the mystery surrounding her own death, armed with only seven borrowed days and a truth that may cost her everything.
This is a story driven by atmosphere and emotional weight. Subin’s journey is one of amnesia and emotional scars, where fragments of memory surface alongside the slow, horrifying realisation that the person she once loved allowed her to die in a brutal way. Her resurrection through arcane magic transforms her into something other, an undead vessel tethered to a city that thrives on corruption, secrets, and blood-stained magic.
Nilport itself feels alive; oppressive, morally unmoored, and drenched in darkness. Murder is commonplace, magic has no limits, and the line between justice and vengeance is blurred beyond recognition. The presence of Lord Anargyros, with his red eyes and commanding authority over the Midnight Remains, adds an eerie, unsettling dynamic. His role in dealing with the dead creates a constant reminder that death is never far from Subin, even as she walks among the living once more.
One of the strongest aspects of When The City Sleeps is its exploration of mental health and trauma. Subin’s emotional state feels raw and fragile, shaped by loss, betrayal, and the knowledge that her second chance at life is painfully temporary. The themes of miscarriage, PTSD, and body horror; though not explicit; cast a heavy shadow over the narrative, reinforcing the sense that this story is meant to be felt as much as read.
Emotionally, the book carries a quiet heaviness rather than outright devastation. There’s a persistent ache beneath the mystery, a slow burn of grief and resentment that simmers as Subin pieces together the truth. While there are romantic undertones, they remain distant and restrained, which fits the tone of the story and keeps the focus firmly on survival, memory, and revenge rather than spice.
My main critique isn't for the author but to myself as I read this after ending up in hospital due to a miscarriage; that is completely on me. I normally can handle the miscarriage trope but I wasn't able to handle it well this time. Apart from this, there were some threads that felt like they could have hit harder if given more space to breathe, particularly considering the strength of the premise and themes.
Overall, I would recommend When The City Sleeps to readers who enjoy dark fantasy with horror elements, murder mysteries, amnesia-driven narratives, and emotionally scarred heroines navigating morally grey worlds. This is a story for those who appreciate atmospheric storytelling, mental health representation, and revenge-fueled plots wrapped in dark magic and quiet despair. It may not be a perfect read, but it’s a haunting one that lingers long after the final page.
December 8, 2025
Arc: When the city sleeps from Lilse Asalt.
Revenge is welcome here as all magic is legal in Nilport. Subin begins to unravel the mystery of her own death.
With her own life extended for only seven days,
Subin will have to choose if finding the truth at all costs is worth it even if it is her own life on the line.
Saved from the brink of death by arcane magic, Subin is transformed from a cast aside woman into an undead vessel fit to haunt the castle she sought to rule. But, there are no rules here in Nilport. His red eyes staring into hers, Lord Anargyros is the Lord Commander of the Midnight Remains that handles when bodies show up in the Nilport bay. Her love is so so far away from this place.
Subin realizes that her former lover let her die in a terrible way.
A short but great story. Loved it from beginning to end. The author did great cause it's not easy to make a short story that contains everything.
Her writingstyle is easy to read, the buildup is good and the tension keeps you going with reading. Hope to read more.
Revenge is welcome here as all magic is legal in Nilport. Subin begins to unravel the mystery of her own death.
With her own life extended for only seven days,
Subin will have to choose if finding the truth at all costs is worth it even if it is her own life on the line.
Saved from the brink of death by arcane magic, Subin is transformed from a cast aside woman into an undead vessel fit to haunt the castle she sought to rule. But, there are no rules here in Nilport. His red eyes staring into hers, Lord Anargyros is the Lord Commander of the Midnight Remains that handles when bodies show up in the Nilport bay. Her love is so so far away from this place.
Subin realizes that her former lover let her die in a terrible way.
A short but great story. Loved it from beginning to end. The author did great cause it's not easy to make a short story that contains everything.
Her writingstyle is easy to read, the buildup is good and the tension keeps you going with reading. Hope to read more.
January 2, 2026
A Heart-Touching Masterpiece that Reflects the Soul
Wow, just wow. I want to start this review by thanking the author for the opportunity to read this story as an ARC. To be honest, this story has touched my heart in an incredibly powerful way. Although I am not typically a Fantasy reader, I enjoyed this book so much that it stirred some very strong emotions within me.
The world-building of the magical place called Nilport, the plot, and the characters are all phenomenal. The central theme—that magic lives in our hearts and that where there's a will, there's a way—really resonated with me. The story of Subin is so beautifully crafted that I could see a reflection of my own soul in her journey. It is truly a stunning narrative.If you enjoy fantasy stories, then When the City Sleeps is a must read. I guarantee it will make you feel emotions that perhaps we keep hidden in the deepest parts of our being. I’m giving this 5 stars without a second thought. Excellent work and huge congratulations to the author for such a captivating book!
Wow, just wow. I want to start this review by thanking the author for the opportunity to read this story as an ARC. To be honest, this story has touched my heart in an incredibly powerful way. Although I am not typically a Fantasy reader, I enjoyed this book so much that it stirred some very strong emotions within me.
The world-building of the magical place called Nilport, the plot, and the characters are all phenomenal. The central theme—that magic lives in our hearts and that where there's a will, there's a way—really resonated with me. The story of Subin is so beautifully crafted that I could see a reflection of my own soul in her journey. It is truly a stunning narrative.If you enjoy fantasy stories, then When the City Sleeps is a must read. I guarantee it will make you feel emotions that perhaps we keep hidden in the deepest parts of our being. I’m giving this 5 stars without a second thought. Excellent work and huge congratulations to the author for such a captivating book!
May 12, 2026
When The City Sleeps by Lilse Asalt was my very 1st fantasy book…ever. Yay for new experiences!
I found the first chapter or two of the book a little confusing for me…my learning curve. The story moved forward, talking me gladly with it, to deliver a a poignant, highly creative tale set one of the most unique worlds I’ve seen.
Magic is legal. There are living, dead, undead, somewhere in between, witches, involved ravens, ships captains, Lords, and more! And of course mystery and affairs of the heart.
I can’t say too much as with it being only 67 pages, I don’t want to give things away. There are moments of hope, loss, denial, heartbreak, love, surprises.
The best way I can put it is that I think it would make a fabulous Broadway Musical. The sets, the costumes, the drama, tension, feels! That’s how I saw it run through my mind. A bold story with dynamic players.
I would have absolutely kept on reading if it had been longer. We can always hope that’s coming!
I found the first chapter or two of the book a little confusing for me…my learning curve. The story moved forward, talking me gladly with it, to deliver a a poignant, highly creative tale set one of the most unique worlds I’ve seen.
Magic is legal. There are living, dead, undead, somewhere in between, witches, involved ravens, ships captains, Lords, and more! And of course mystery and affairs of the heart.
I can’t say too much as with it being only 67 pages, I don’t want to give things away. There are moments of hope, loss, denial, heartbreak, love, surprises.
The best way I can put it is that I think it would make a fabulous Broadway Musical. The sets, the costumes, the drama, tension, feels! That’s how I saw it run through my mind. A bold story with dynamic players.
I would have absolutely kept on reading if it had been longer. We can always hope that’s coming!
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November 25, 2025DNF @ 30%
The concept of this novella is genuinely interesting... The “Game of Thrones meets Corpse Bride” vibe is strong, and there’s definitely a Tim Burton-ish atmosphere in the idea. I can absolutely see the potential for a dark, whimsical, gothic fantasy.
Unfortunately, the writing style didn’t click for me personally.
I struggled to follow the action, and the sentence flow made it hard to stay grounded in the scenes. This is purely a reader fit issue, not a criticism of the author’s imagination... The world and tone are intriguing, but the execution just wasn’t a match for my reading preferences.
I think readers who connect more naturally with this writing style will enjoy the dark aesthetic and the unique concept more than I did.
Grateful for the ARC opportunity. 💛
The concept of this novella is genuinely interesting... The “Game of Thrones meets Corpse Bride” vibe is strong, and there’s definitely a Tim Burton-ish atmosphere in the idea. I can absolutely see the potential for a dark, whimsical, gothic fantasy.
Unfortunately, the writing style didn’t click for me personally.
I struggled to follow the action, and the sentence flow made it hard to stay grounded in the scenes. This is purely a reader fit issue, not a criticism of the author’s imagination... The world and tone are intriguing, but the execution just wasn’t a match for my reading preferences.
I think readers who connect more naturally with this writing style will enjoy the dark aesthetic and the unique concept more than I did.
Grateful for the ARC opportunity. 💛
November 2, 2025
3.5/5
I'm not a fan of really short fantasy books. Mostly because its hard to build up a world, plot, and characters. However, while this one is not the best fantasy book I've ever read, it hit all the right spots. For how short it was, it was brutal. The descriptions were perfection if not gross in certain aspects. My only real complaint is the plot was super vague. Yet thats to be expected considering the story was 67 pages. This author is definitely talented in their writing. I do hope they end up writing longer books. Loved how quick this was and definitely gave me creepy old medieval city vibes.
I'm not a fan of really short fantasy books. Mostly because its hard to build up a world, plot, and characters. However, while this one is not the best fantasy book I've ever read, it hit all the right spots. For how short it was, it was brutal. The descriptions were perfection if not gross in certain aspects. My only real complaint is the plot was super vague. Yet thats to be expected considering the story was 67 pages. This author is definitely talented in their writing. I do hope they end up writing longer books. Loved how quick this was and definitely gave me creepy old medieval city vibes.
November 27, 2025
⭐️ 2.75/5
The premise of this book is absolutely unique and phenomenal. I’ve never read anything like it before.
The initial 20-30 pages were genuinely confusing. The world-building is so distinct that I struggled to understand it at first.
Just as I finally started to grasp the complex world and the story began to hook me, the book was over.
I truly believe that if this had been a 200-300 page novel, the author would have had a better option to: Explain the world properly. Develop the characters. Deliver a complete and satisfying plot.
It feels more like an extended introduction. A great idea that needed a larger canvas to reach its full 5-star potential ❤️
January 19, 2026
I like the idea of the story. That is why I'm giving it 4 stars.
I feel like this book was rushed, lots of repetition and unneeded words.vi didn't get time to actually connect with any of the characters or the world due to it being such a short story.
With that being said, if the Author took the time to rewrite as a longer book and took more time with the world building, the character development and the story itself I feel like it has the bones of a great novel. Just needs some fine tuning.
I'd still suggest it to anyone looking for a quick read, especially if you have been in a book slump and need something to get you back into reading. The author does have talent.
I feel like this book was rushed, lots of repetition and unneeded words.vi didn't get time to actually connect with any of the characters or the world due to it being such a short story.
With that being said, if the Author took the time to rewrite as a longer book and took more time with the world building, the character development and the story itself I feel like it has the bones of a great novel. Just needs some fine tuning.
I'd still suggest it to anyone looking for a quick read, especially if you have been in a book slump and need something to get you back into reading. The author does have talent.
February 1, 2026
ARC Read:
I think this story has a lot of potential. There were some grammatical errors throughout, and I do think more world-building and character development would have made the story feel more complete and immersive.
The first half was a little confusing for me, but just as I started to really understand what was going on, the book was already wrapping up.
That said, I really appreciated the deeper themes of love, loss, and the lengths a mother would go to for her child. Those parts were really powerful.
With a little more fine-tuning and expanded world-building, this book could be phenomenal.
I think this story has a lot of potential. There were some grammatical errors throughout, and I do think more world-building and character development would have made the story feel more complete and immersive.
The first half was a little confusing for me, but just as I started to really understand what was going on, the book was already wrapping up.
That said, I really appreciated the deeper themes of love, loss, and the lengths a mother would go to for her child. Those parts were really powerful.
With a little more fine-tuning and expanded world-building, this book could be phenomenal.
February 18, 2026
When the City Sleeps has a strong atmosphere and a moody tone that really works in its favor. The nighttime city setting adds a sense of intimacy and tension that pulls you in early, and the author does a good job creating a vibe that feels quiet, intense, and a little lonely in the best way.
The romance itself is emotionally charged and leans more into longing and internal struggle than nonstop action. At times, the pacing slows down more than I would have liked, especially in the middle, where the story feels like it lingers a bit too long on introspection. That said, the emotional moments do land, and the connection between the characters feels genuine rather than forced.
The romance itself is emotionally charged and leans more into longing and internal struggle than nonstop action. At times, the pacing slows down more than I would have liked, especially in the middle, where the story feels like it lingers a bit too long on introspection. That said, the emotional moments do land, and the connection between the characters feels genuine rather than forced.
November 19, 2025
When the city sleeps - short, strange and unforgettable
When the City Sleeps is a distinctive short novel that I found thoroughly engaging. It is based on the main characters of Sabin trying to find out why she died with the help of the lord commander. Despite its brevity, it delivers a remarkably complete and poetic story, compelling me to read it in a single sitting. The incorporation of undead and reanimated characters adds an intriguing layer that heightens the novel’s atmosphere and emotional impact.
I highly recommend this novel.
4 stars!
When the City Sleeps is a distinctive short novel that I found thoroughly engaging. It is based on the main characters of Sabin trying to find out why she died with the help of the lord commander. Despite its brevity, it delivers a remarkably complete and poetic story, compelling me to read it in a single sitting. The incorporation of undead and reanimated characters adds an intriguing layer that heightens the novel’s atmosphere and emotional impact.
I highly recommend this novel.
4 stars!
December 27, 2025
I received this book for free as an ARC and I loved the idea nd the premise but in this case it would have benefitted from being a full novel rather than a shorter novella I think. It had great vibes and I loved the direction, but due to how short it was it felt very vague. It was gruesomely descriptive at times, and was one of the better short novellas I've read, but simultaneously was broad and left me wanting for more details and time to learn and be in the world rather than ziplining through it.
Did Not Finish
March 10, 2026DNF at 24%
I received this novella from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Unfortunately, this one just wasn’t for me. By the time I reached 24%, I still had very little idea of what was actually going on in the story. The plot felt confusing and I struggled to connect with the events or understand the direction the story was taking.
Another challenge for me was third-person POV. This is a personal preference, but I generally have a hard time enjoying stories written in third person, and in this case it made it even more difficult for me to feel immersed in the narrative.
I received this novella from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Unfortunately, this one just wasn’t for me. By the time I reached 24%, I still had very little idea of what was actually going on in the story. The plot felt confusing and I struggled to connect with the events or understand the direction the story was taking.
Another challenge for me was third-person POV. This is a personal preference, but I generally have a hard time enjoying stories written in third person, and in this case it made it even more difficult for me to feel immersed in the narrative.
April 3, 2026
I received this book as an ARC read. It is a very interesting book and I think the touch of a map made understanding the kingdoms much easier.
While the concept is very unique, it was quite confusing towards the beginning of the story. The first two chapters were the hardest to read. I found that once I at least got to chapter three, that I was finally starting to get the story. Since it is such a short read, there was not much time to truly expand the story. I definitely felt like this could have easily been a longer and successful full story.
While the concept is very unique, it was quite confusing towards the beginning of the story. The first two chapters were the hardest to read. I found that once I at least got to chapter three, that I was finally starting to get the story. Since it is such a short read, there was not much time to truly expand the story. I definitely felt like this could have easily been a longer and successful full story.
November 11, 2025
When I started reading this book, I didn't get the gist of what I was reading.
But as I progressed, the story began to interest me, pulling me in and made me curious.
And I kept reading, at some point I was closing eyes, just so I don't see what's happening.
I was feeling the emotional pain of the character. I really loved reading this book, it made me feel something. That's why I read books. And Lilse did a good job. So I'll recommend this book.
But as I progressed, the story began to interest me, pulling me in and made me curious.
And I kept reading, at some point I was closing eyes, just so I don't see what's happening.
I was feeling the emotional pain of the character. I really loved reading this book, it made me feel something. That's why I read books. And Lilse did a good job. So I'll recommend this book.
February 24, 2026
Overall, I love the idea of this book. I think it was too much for a short book. We needed more worldbuilding and character development. It felt rushed to me. Subin's story is heartbreaking but we don't have enough time and emotions from her to really get to know her. The same for the Lord Commander. The characters are all so interesting and the world is unique and intriguing. This was a good short read that left me wanting more.
January 25, 2026
When the City Sleeps is beautifully written and emotionally quiet in the best way. The slow-burn connection, the nighttime city atmosphere, and the subtle depth of the characters really stayed with me. It’s the kind of story that lingers after you finish, especially if you enjoy reflective, mood-driven romance.
March 7, 2026
When The City Sleeps by Lilse Asalt takes the reader through an emotional journey of loss.
The narrative comes in the form of a novella, within 10 chapters, the story finishes. At the edge of the world, where magic is legal, a shipwreck brings the Undead Lord Commander Anargyros to investigate. He finds a woman hovering between life and death in the wreckage, one with evidence of childbirth. He takes her–Subin–in, and together, they journey to understand her past.
Asalt’s concept is immensely unique, and her imagery is strong. There’s significant politics, worldbuilding, and lore to unravel, which we only get a glimpse of. I wanted to know more about how society functions, why so many issues, what they battle against and so much more. If it’s a prequel to a larger series, then it’s doing intrigue justice.
Being a novella, it’s a quick read, however, pacing is undermined due to an unedited manuscript. An editor would’ve served the manuscript well, especially due to the uniqueness the narrative encapsulates. The dialogue’s cadence takes time to adjust to, which isn’t available because of the short story. While I understood the gist of what the characters try to convey to one another, I questioned what the relationship between the Lord Commander and Subin had been. She claims it’s his job to help people like her, yet the help he offers is…unclear in motive.
In terms of the underlying message…it’s grim. I can’t discuss it without spoiling it, but will say that it’s a situation that’s well known and played out. But Asalt brought the circumstances in a way that makes one feel attached to the injustice of it. The characterization within the chapters does gradually build, mostly on Subin’s side. The Lord Commander does reveal vulnerabilities and again, questionable why with Subin.
Overall, I’m glad I took this one. Despite the unedited narrative, it’s very compelling and had me finish in one go. It’s an important story told in a fantastical way, that honours the grimness of the circumstances. My favourite part of it all is that the Undead features as a protagonist.
I received an ARC copy for a free review.
The narrative comes in the form of a novella, within 10 chapters, the story finishes. At the edge of the world, where magic is legal, a shipwreck brings the Undead Lord Commander Anargyros to investigate. He finds a woman hovering between life and death in the wreckage, one with evidence of childbirth. He takes her–Subin–in, and together, they journey to understand her past.
Asalt’s concept is immensely unique, and her imagery is strong. There’s significant politics, worldbuilding, and lore to unravel, which we only get a glimpse of. I wanted to know more about how society functions, why so many issues, what they battle against and so much more. If it’s a prequel to a larger series, then it’s doing intrigue justice.
Being a novella, it’s a quick read, however, pacing is undermined due to an unedited manuscript. An editor would’ve served the manuscript well, especially due to the uniqueness the narrative encapsulates. The dialogue’s cadence takes time to adjust to, which isn’t available because of the short story. While I understood the gist of what the characters try to convey to one another, I questioned what the relationship between the Lord Commander and Subin had been. She claims it’s his job to help people like her, yet the help he offers is…unclear in motive.
In terms of the underlying message…it’s grim. I can’t discuss it without spoiling it, but will say that it’s a situation that’s well known and played out. But Asalt brought the circumstances in a way that makes one feel attached to the injustice of it. The characterization within the chapters does gradually build, mostly on Subin’s side. The Lord Commander does reveal vulnerabilities and again, questionable why with Subin.
Overall, I’m glad I took this one. Despite the unedited narrative, it’s very compelling and had me finish in one go. It’s an important story told in a fantastical way, that honours the grimness of the circumstances. My favourite part of it all is that the Undead features as a protagonist.
I received an ARC copy for a free review.
November 5, 2025
I thought it was a good story overall, and it really brought you into the world and the characters that the author is portraying. I feel like since it was a short story it was missing some elements of more of the progression of the story and some more facts about the characters.
January 16, 2026
All in all a super intriguing short fantasy book! My only wish is that the book would have been longer. I enjoyed all the characters and how the plot played out. Very heartfelt with haunting vibes. Very unique and one of a kind! I recommend this as a read in between longer books🤍
February 24, 2026
A dark, atmospheric novella filled with haunting magic and emotional weight. Subin’s trauma-driven journey and the eerie world of Nilport make for an intriguing read, though pacing and editing issues hold it back. I just wish it had been longer.
March 21, 2026
Arc Read I loved this book!!! The author wrote it really well I wish it would have been longer so I could be in the world a lot longer. I loved how it had an eerie feel to it. What a great book this was!!!
April 2, 2026
The start is really confusing, the whole story, I couldn't imagine the place where the story takes place.
The story is good though, has potential. Would have loved to see more of the revenge, not just one page.
The story is good though, has potential. Would have loved to see more of the revenge, not just one page.
December 29, 2025
Very good book. It was short but well written. I would have liked if it could have been longer but it still was a good read.
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