"Honey, can we keep her?" I knew there was a chance I'd be seen, leaving my blinds open like that. But finding the note on my car, thanking me for that little show, and inviting me to come watch one for myself was unexpected. And hot. When I gave into my curiosity and peeked in on him, I never expected to be invited inside. Or to be joined by his wife.
A voyeuristic encounter turns into a hot, accidental MFF menage.
**Note- This story was originally written as one of the options in my 'Choices- An Erotic Select Your Own Seduction ' story. All of the paths in Choices- An Erotic Select Your Own Seduction are also available as normal short stories, for those who don't like the select-your-own style. Since they were originally intended as different paths in the choose-your-own-adventure, some stories do share portions of similar sections.
Approx. word count 5,300+ (Not including supplementary material)
Bonus excerpt of 'Taking My Husband And His Twin: A Swinging D Dude Ranch Short' is included after this erotic short.
Why is it that most female writers fail to give a vivid description of their female characters. In this one, she at least talked about how she looked, but failed totally telling the reader the hair color of the two women. She goes into great detail about the male lead. That being said, the action between the participants was incredible. Still left trying to picture them.
An okay short story, where the story is told in the blurb. The story is a good one, and as such hot, but the problem is that the narrative comes off as a bit inexperienced. It's likely due the the story's origin, as part of a 'chose-your-own-adventure' story. Those tend to have pretty rough cut language, so that parts can be reused. I would have liked to see the author or perhaps a good editor rework the text a few more times until it sizzled. To me this doesn't get more than lukewarm.
Jamie Klaire's "Accidental Menage" is a sexy short read. It has multiple events in it, all of which are hot. Definitely something you can read one-handed in a pinch!