Needs better character and storyline development
It's an interesting enough story even if it follows trope fairly closely, but there are a couple of things that could really use work. First, the characters and storyline need development. The author drops the male lead's son in at chapter 10 with no introduction, no mention previous that Bronc had a child or an ex-wife or anything else, just poof out of the blue we have a new character. It's a fairly significant person to never have been mentioned or brought into the story other than storming into Juliet's apartment and starting to insult her for no discernible reason, at which point we're treated to a fight scene that feels like it's been wedged in on a whim with a crowbar trying to make it fit (news flash, it doesn't). To top off the king of all "what the hell just happened here" scenes, this all occurs at the same hour she learns she's a shifter, an Omega, and is eminently going to go into heat and have no choice but to be claimed by an alpha or get raped by a bunch of other guys. We learn a little bit about the male lead in the chapters previous but not much because there hadn't been much development of the male lead character. We get a lot of "mine," grunting, him ordering her do-this-do-that (yeah, odd that I don't think a woman who's been under an abusive man's thumb would find being told when to eat, sleep, how to wear her hair, etc., would be attractive), but not much background on Bronc or his MC. In fact we don't even really get an impression other than he's an alpha and he's decided she's his that's it.
Secondly, we're supposed to believe that somebody who's been so horrifically abused is just going to fall for a guy who looked into her past without permission (huge privacy and personal boundary betrayal) and could have exposed her doing it, besides basically severely limiting her choices given the way he's handled this situation? Yeah, not buying it. I don't know many people who wouldn't have been livid at that situation. Quite frankly, I would have expected her to run, I would have run at the point she woke up alone in her apartment after he revealed he knew who she was the night before.
Then there are some issues with the editing: punctuation, namely two periods at the end of a sentence at several spots. And lastly there's the huge reliance on metaphors trying to make this poetic and while some of it is kind of cool it just gets really tiresome after a couple of chapters. I'd rather the author develop the characters and the story instead of dropping important characters in willy-nilly and and relying on metaphors to capture readers' attention.