I like Tessa Hale’s stories. I do. But at this point in her writing career, her romantic tone and emotional framing need to mature—especially when the plots are darker, the characters are well into adulthood, and the themes lean heavy.
There’s a lot to enjoy here. The worldbuilding in Eclipsed Empire is immersive, the pacing is sharp, and the emotional through-lines are satisfying. If you love found family, protective love interests, fated mates, hidden identities, and why-choose dynamics, this delivers. Hale has a clear talent for building bonds that feel emotionally sincere. The harem dynamics are thoughtful, and I was genuinely invested in how the group came together.
But here’s where I started to disconnect. While there are explicit scenes, the emotional tone of the spice still reads closer to new adult. These are grown men with jobs, businesses, and established lives. The heroine is younger, yes, but the overall dynamic between them feels out of sync with their ages. There’s an undercurrent of softness and emotional hesitancy that feels better suited to characters just figuring themselves out, not ones who have supposedly been through real adult trauma and loss. It’s not that the spice is missing—it’s that the writing treats sex like something tenderly new and vaguely experimental, rather than something these characters would realistically already understand and embody with more confidence.
The ending lands with a familiar Tessa Hale twist: a predictable cliffhanger. Not bad, just expected. I was hoping this installment would push her formula into more mature territory—emotionally, narratively, romantically—but it plays it safe. And while I’ll finish the series, I’m hoping to see more growth, both in how her characters are written and in how she frames their relationships.
Three stars. There’s heart here, and the character connections work, but the tone needs to evolve to match the maturity level of the world and the people in it. The potential is real. It just needs to catch up with itself.