now with 20% more words
There was a lot of analysis paralysis and overthinking of things. I found it can easily be skipped without missing anything. Good overall and will read the next in series yet wasting my time with unnecessary words and the terrible survival advice demanded star subtraction. Note to authors: Think like your readers who all would’ve checked out the building for heat, a kitchen, a stove and refrigerator before building a fire. The only reason the mc didn’t is because the author knew what was inside.
I would like to smack, not just the mc like he asked but all the authors who have no clue about survival, yet write like experts and are going to get people killed when the system actually arrives. This was so cringe like someone on tv shooting a computer monitor to shut down a server in another room. As a lifelong hunter; the temperature, the offal, and insects are way more important than this myth about draining the blood. Remove the heart and guess what happens as a result. Authors, take some time and educate yourself so you are not misleading all the readers. Lookup uncooked meat spoil time and then think of it sitting in the bacteria of the guts. Cringe.