I disagree with a few of the risks she takes, or rather, the outcome or effect of some of those risks. (For instance, I wish "The Fish" did not contain the line "once you reported our fuck rescued a dozen Croatian children.") But I do absolutely love that she takes these risks.
I find the second & third sections stronger than the first, and almost all of her endings are knock-outs. Just great.
"Theories of Non-Violence" strikes me as one of the best and most important poems of the collection, so I'll repeat it here:
Theories of Non-Violence
A frightened rabbit kicks its hind legs so hard that it can
break its own back. Someone thought to record that pain
on tape. Someone said Shelve this under non-violent tactics.
Just a line item, buried in daily reports from the siege:
after blasting Ozzy Osbourne and dentist drills, before using
flash bombs and gunfire, they played Rabbit death scream.
Repeat loop. Officers wrote the wail was like a teakettle's whistle,
but endless. My father, in uniform, used to speak of war
in terms of the sword and the scalpel. Scalpel, meaning we kill
only who we meant to kill. Meaning, clean. Meaning, better.
Sword, meaning we kill anyone who gets in the way.
Even now, watching news of each new each new explosion, I wait
to see if our flag flashes onto the screen. If not there's that tiny,
cool blink. Well then. An old lover calls to tell me they finally
made him a doctor. First do no harm, they made him swear.
Then they said To save that man, you'll need a sharper knife.