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The Mercy of Chance: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
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Five Sisters. One Entail. A Legacy Worth Fighting For.
Mr. Thomas Bennet’s untimely death brings not only grief to Longbourn—but, with it, the weight of uncertainty. The estate, entailed away from the female line, now faces a legal challenge from Mr. Collins, a cousin as odious as he is ambitious. But Longbourn has never been a house of ordinary women. With the quiet strength of their grandfather's guidance, the five Bennet sisters step forward—not as ornaments of society, but as defenders of their legacy.
Elizabeth confronts the peril head-on, navigating estate management and Regency law with unexpected allies, including the formidable Mr. Darcy. Their growing connection simmers beneath the surface as legal battles, social judgment, and personal pride threaten to keep them apart. He is the last man she thought she could love—until he becomes the one man she cannot ignore.
Jane, long admired for her beauty and composure, discovers a resilience even she did not know she possessed, especially when affection proves more complex than it first appeared. Mary, often overlooked, finds her voice in agricultural innovation and scientific study. Kitty, quiet and cautious, surprises them all with her clarity and instinct. Lydia, bold and impulsive, proves herself a steward of land and livestock, her talents emerging in the most unexpected places.
As Mr. Collins stoops to sabotage and subterfuge, the sisters must outwit not only him but the weight of tradition itself. With Mr. Darcy’s intentions increasingly entangled with Elizabeth’s, and the support of unlikely allies, the fate of Longbourn—and their futures—hangs in the balance.
In this rich, romantic reimagining of Pride and Prejudice, sisterhood and strategy take center stage as five young women challenge the expectations of their world—and claim their rightful place within it.
Five Sisters. One Entail. A Legacy Worth Fighting For.
Mr. Thomas Bennet’s untimely death brings not only grief to Longbourn—but, with it, the weight of uncertainty. The estate, entailed away from the female line, now faces a legal challenge from Mr. Collins, a cousin as odious as he is ambitious. But Longbourn has never been a house of ordinary women. With the quiet strength of their grandfather's guidance, the five Bennet sisters step forward—not as ornaments of society, but as defenders of their legacy.
Elizabeth confronts the peril head-on, navigating estate management and Regency law with unexpected allies, including the formidable Mr. Darcy. Their growing connection simmers beneath the surface as legal battles, social judgment, and personal pride threaten to keep them apart. He is the last man she thought she could love—until he becomes the one man she cannot ignore.
Jane, long admired for her beauty and composure, discovers a resilience even she did not know she possessed, especially when affection proves more complex than it first appeared. Mary, often overlooked, finds her voice in agricultural innovation and scientific study. Kitty, quiet and cautious, surprises them all with her clarity and instinct. Lydia, bold and impulsive, proves herself a steward of land and livestock, her talents emerging in the most unexpected places.
As Mr. Collins stoops to sabotage and subterfuge, the sisters must outwit not only him but the weight of tradition itself. With Mr. Darcy’s intentions increasingly entangled with Elizabeth’s, and the support of unlikely allies, the fate of Longbourn—and their futures—hangs in the balance.
In this rich, romantic reimagining of Pride and Prejudice, sisterhood and strategy take center stage as five young women challenge the expectations of their world—and claim their rightful place within it.
543 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 3, 2025
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May 17, 2025
I wanted to like this. The author has obviously done a lot of research about drainage issues and estate management. But that’s not why I read JAFF. I don’t care about the details of 19th century strategies for drainage issues.
There seems to be story arcs for each Bennet sister and their mother. It was too much. I remember getting to the 35% mark on my kindle and despairing of the fact that my kindle said I had another 9 hours of reading. If it had been a captivating story, I wouldn’t have cared how much time I needed to read it. I wouldn’t have noticed the time.
Unfortunately, the pace of the story continued to be agonizingly slow, and the parts that should have been interesting seemed farfetched. The whole story line about the “threat” of Collins fell flat. As long as Grandfather Bennet was alive, he owned the estate. Period. And he did not have to let Collins visit. Therefore, this part of the plot felt very contrived.
The idea that others snubbed the Bennet sisters because they helped with the estate and their father was dead was also strange and unbelievable. They are still gentry, and it was farfetched to believe shopkeepers would treat them differently or that neighbors would shun them.
Read through KU.
There seems to be story arcs for each Bennet sister and their mother. It was too much. I remember getting to the 35% mark on my kindle and despairing of the fact that my kindle said I had another 9 hours of reading. If it had been a captivating story, I wouldn’t have cared how much time I needed to read it. I wouldn’t have noticed the time.
Unfortunately, the pace of the story continued to be agonizingly slow, and the parts that should have been interesting seemed farfetched. The whole story line about the “threat” of Collins fell flat. As long as Grandfather Bennet was alive, he owned the estate. Period. And he did not have to let Collins visit. Therefore, this part of the plot felt very contrived.
The idea that others snubbed the Bennet sisters because they helped with the estate and their father was dead was also strange and unbelievable. They are still gentry, and it was farfetched to believe shopkeepers would treat them differently or that neighbors would shun them.
Read through KU.
July 13, 2025
Naturally, I had to read a P&P variation that's premise has Mr. Bennet passing away in the opening pages, but his elderly father is still alive and encourages the Bennet ladies in an eccentric, daring way to survive on their own. Mary Alice Alexander is a new to me author who brings to bear her legal background and a strong feminist element to the then man's world of estate management.
The Mercy of Chance fascinated me from the earliest pages as the unorthodox lifestyle of the Bennets is introduced and details filled in. Grandfather Bennet is an invalid, but his mind is strong as is his will to see his daughter in law and granddaughters well-cared for when the time comes for the heir to take over. Each daughter took on a different facet of estate management- Jane is skilled with figures and keeps the account books, Elizabeth knows her drainage and water courses and crop rotation, Mary knows her soil composition and tracking the experimentations needed to find what works for this estate, Kitty tackles the gardens and still room, and Lydia is a whiz at animal husbandry particularly the estate sheep herd and wool production. Mrs. B is no slouch and runs the household and looks after her invalid father in law with the help of the Hills.
Because of these eccentricities of ladies running the estate, handling the sales and purchases with those in the market town of Meryton and the neighborhood, and living frugally, their gentlewoman status is called into question by half their neighborhood and their social status takes a blow.
A constant source of worry and strain is Mr. Collins' pushing and grasping behavior as the heir. If he can oust them and find a way to take charge earlier than his his right, he will. They have scrimped and saved to put a plan in place that will protect them from the ills of the entail and can't let Collins figure it out ahead.
Into this situation, Charles Bingley takes the lease at Netherfield Park. Along with him and his family comes Mr. Darcy to guide him in learning to run an estate. Darcy is stunned from his first encounter with Elizabeth Bennet and her expertise on estate work particularly the drainage issues at the place where the two estate land's meet. He is a man in a million who can learn to respect knowledgeable and independent women, but his sense of duty to family leaves him conflicted about pursuing the growing feelings he has toward Elizabeth. That said, he doesn't hesitate to step up and stand by the Bennets when he can.
The Mercy of Chance is a book I have mixed feelings about. I love the premise and general plot, I love the characters, and the way their relationships developed- particularly having an old, wise grandfather Bennet. I loved the details of estate management and later, the details of Chancellery law, and the eccentricity vs societal norms.
Alas, this book could have been cut in half.
There was so much repetition that I was loathe for one more instance of Elizabeth and her drainage on through all the sisters' areas being detailed every time a new character was encountered and then repeated with several characters multiple times with no real reason to go over it again- the reader hasn't forgotten since the last time, trust me.
Then, there is Darcy's blowing hot and cold for way too long. He lectures Bingley no less than three times for being wishy-washy with Jane's affections and needing to buck up since the lady and her family are wonderful, but he's just as guilty of stewing over whether he's willing to buck society and family expectation, too. Though, I'll concede that Bingley was a big-time doormat for his sister and he didn't even seem to care. I was glad Jane had another, better option offered. And, Lydia was a hoot. Her sharp set-downs with Wickham were worth the cost of admission.
But, yeah, didn't need the twenty times (and, no, I don't exaggerate and might have estimated low, there) discussion Lizzy and the gals' super-powered estate management ideas and skills.
So, the bones of this story and some of the fleshing out of it was fabulous and I was glad for this unique plot variation. Definitely think it is worth the read and will look to read more of the author.
The Mercy of Chance fascinated me from the earliest pages as the unorthodox lifestyle of the Bennets is introduced and details filled in. Grandfather Bennet is an invalid, but his mind is strong as is his will to see his daughter in law and granddaughters well-cared for when the time comes for the heir to take over. Each daughter took on a different facet of estate management- Jane is skilled with figures and keeps the account books, Elizabeth knows her drainage and water courses and crop rotation, Mary knows her soil composition and tracking the experimentations needed to find what works for this estate, Kitty tackles the gardens and still room, and Lydia is a whiz at animal husbandry particularly the estate sheep herd and wool production. Mrs. B is no slouch and runs the household and looks after her invalid father in law with the help of the Hills.
Because of these eccentricities of ladies running the estate, handling the sales and purchases with those in the market town of Meryton and the neighborhood, and living frugally, their gentlewoman status is called into question by half their neighborhood and their social status takes a blow.
A constant source of worry and strain is Mr. Collins' pushing and grasping behavior as the heir. If he can oust them and find a way to take charge earlier than his his right, he will. They have scrimped and saved to put a plan in place that will protect them from the ills of the entail and can't let Collins figure it out ahead.
Into this situation, Charles Bingley takes the lease at Netherfield Park. Along with him and his family comes Mr. Darcy to guide him in learning to run an estate. Darcy is stunned from his first encounter with Elizabeth Bennet and her expertise on estate work particularly the drainage issues at the place where the two estate land's meet. He is a man in a million who can learn to respect knowledgeable and independent women, but his sense of duty to family leaves him conflicted about pursuing the growing feelings he has toward Elizabeth. That said, he doesn't hesitate to step up and stand by the Bennets when he can.
The Mercy of Chance is a book I have mixed feelings about. I love the premise and general plot, I love the characters, and the way their relationships developed- particularly having an old, wise grandfather Bennet. I loved the details of estate management and later, the details of Chancellery law, and the eccentricity vs societal norms.
Alas, this book could have been cut in half.
There was so much repetition that I was loathe for one more instance of Elizabeth and her drainage on through all the sisters' areas being detailed every time a new character was encountered and then repeated with several characters multiple times with no real reason to go over it again- the reader hasn't forgotten since the last time, trust me.
Then, there is Darcy's blowing hot and cold for way too long. He lectures Bingley no less than three times for being wishy-washy with Jane's affections and needing to buck up since the lady and her family are wonderful, but he's just as guilty of stewing over whether he's willing to buck society and family expectation, too. Though, I'll concede that Bingley was a big-time doormat for his sister and he didn't even seem to care. I was glad Jane had another, better option offered. And, Lydia was a hoot. Her sharp set-downs with Wickham were worth the cost of admission.
But, yeah, didn't need the twenty times (and, no, I don't exaggerate and might have estimated low, there) discussion Lizzy and the gals' super-powered estate management ideas and skills.
So, the bones of this story and some of the fleshing out of it was fabulous and I was glad for this unique plot variation. Definitely think it is worth the read and will look to read more of the author.
May 6, 2025
Very long book, many plots to enjoy
A story of the 5 Bennet daughters and what takes place after their father passes on. The what-if here is none of the girls are silly. Instead, all sisters as interesting as Jane and Lizzy are.
The author must be kind hearted since most of the bad guys don’t receive their comeuppance. Much angst in the story but mostly a very posh tone.
A story of the 5 Bennet daughters and what takes place after their father passes on. The what-if here is none of the girls are silly. Instead, all sisters as interesting as Jane and Lizzy are.
The author must be kind hearted since most of the bad guys don’t receive their comeuppance. Much angst in the story but mostly a very posh tone.
May 23, 2025
An interesting change
I love the dynamics of a loving and proactive Bennet family.
When Gentlemen visit there is much for them to become enamored with.
Collins is particularly despicable.
A sweet read. Low angst.
I love the dynamics of a loving and proactive Bennet family.
When Gentlemen visit there is much for them to become enamored with.
Collins is particularly despicable.
A sweet read. Low angst.
November 13, 2025
Will keep trying…I think
I have read over 30%, and I am still at sea. After Mr Bennet’s untimely death, Mrs Bennet is left to run Longbourn with her father-in-law. I love that dynamic, and how early widowhood has curbed her love of lace. Mr Bannet Sr is aging, prompting the five daughters to become agrarian paragons. I’m down for that, too.
Unfortunately, the author doesn’t know what to do with those plot bunnies, so she tries to split the difference. The resulting muddle includes:
1. The townspeople side eye the family because the sisters are helping to run the estate, yet will attend an event at Longbourn.
2. Mr Collins invites himself to Longbourn. An inordinate amount of time is spent discussing how the sisters will look more dumb/feminine and how to give the impression that Mr Bennet fully runs the place. Why? I don’t know. Mr Collins can’t get his hands on the estate until Mr Bennet dies. Thus, this subterfuge is foolish. Even if Mr Darcy were to openly praise Elizabeth for solving a drainag—oh, wait. That does happen. Even if Lydia and Kitty were to argue with dishonest tradesmen—oop. That happens, too. Even if Jane and Elizabeth were to participate in and afternoon-long meeting with the tenants to plan the next year’s crops, even though Mr Collins is under their roof? Samesies. It. Doesn’t. Matter.
3. Kitty’s genius is given a star turn. I’m all for a smart Catherine, but not when it comes across as the author showing off. The reader really doesn’t need a demonstration of every single fact you learned about botany.
I have read over 30%, and I am still at sea. After Mr Bennet’s untimely death, Mrs Bennet is left to run Longbourn with her father-in-law. I love that dynamic, and how early widowhood has curbed her love of lace. Mr Bannet Sr is aging, prompting the five daughters to become agrarian paragons. I’m down for that, too.
Unfortunately, the author doesn’t know what to do with those plot bunnies, so she tries to split the difference. The resulting muddle includes:
1. The townspeople side eye the family because the sisters are helping to run the estate, yet will attend an event at Longbourn.
2. Mr Collins invites himself to Longbourn. An inordinate amount of time is spent discussing how the sisters will look more dumb/feminine and how to give the impression that Mr Bennet fully runs the place. Why? I don’t know. Mr Collins can’t get his hands on the estate until Mr Bennet dies. Thus, this subterfuge is foolish. Even if Mr Darcy were to openly praise Elizabeth for solving a drainag—oh, wait. That does happen. Even if Lydia and Kitty were to argue with dishonest tradesmen—oop. That happens, too. Even if Jane and Elizabeth were to participate in and afternoon-long meeting with the tenants to plan the next year’s crops, even though Mr Collins is under their roof? Samesies. It. Doesn’t. Matter.
3. Kitty’s genius is given a star turn. I’m all for a smart Catherine, but not when it comes across as the author showing off. The reader really doesn’t need a demonstration of every single fact you learned about botany.
June 1, 2025
Wonderful, in spite of timeline inconsistencies
Mr Bennett dies when his five girls are still young, and Grandfather Bennett educates them all in estate management, each one eventually finding their particular talents and interests. The Bennett family is somewhat ostracized in local society by neighbors who don't think young women are capable of completely running an estate. They have a core group of loyal friends, and they eventually prove their worth with others. When Darcy and the Bingleys arrive, he meets Elizabeth in the act of checking drainage works in the fields, and he quickly learns to esteem the Bennett women, and Grandfather, for their capabilities. However, Mr Collins is waiting impatiently for his inheritance, and decides that if he can prove Grandfather's incompetence in educating females, then maybe the process can be sped up.
I like this author, and I hope that she'll continue to create JAFF. The premise is original and interesting. I like the Grandfather character, and it's refreshing to have Mrs Bennett and all five girls cast in a favorable light. They're actually portrayed as almost super women, but it's fun. The romance, while lovely, seems at times to take a back seat to the exposition of the Bennett girls' talents. While there is an epilogue, not every loose end is tied up, and I wasn't satisfied with the disposition of Lady Catherine. Would have liked more of a comeuppance.
I deducted a star for a fair number of editing errors, but more importantly because the timeline didn't flow completely. There was even a situation with Lydia that mentioned the month of May, when it should have been October or November. At times it felt like chapters were assembled a bit haphazardly. However, the book is well written . I recommend it highly for a satisfying and enjoyable read.
Mr Bennett dies when his five girls are still young, and Grandfather Bennett educates them all in estate management, each one eventually finding their particular talents and interests. The Bennett family is somewhat ostracized in local society by neighbors who don't think young women are capable of completely running an estate. They have a core group of loyal friends, and they eventually prove their worth with others. When Darcy and the Bingleys arrive, he meets Elizabeth in the act of checking drainage works in the fields, and he quickly learns to esteem the Bennett women, and Grandfather, for their capabilities. However, Mr Collins is waiting impatiently for his inheritance, and decides that if he can prove Grandfather's incompetence in educating females, then maybe the process can be sped up.
I like this author, and I hope that she'll continue to create JAFF. The premise is original and interesting. I like the Grandfather character, and it's refreshing to have Mrs Bennett and all five girls cast in a favorable light. They're actually portrayed as almost super women, but it's fun. The romance, while lovely, seems at times to take a back seat to the exposition of the Bennett girls' talents. While there is an epilogue, not every loose end is tied up, and I wasn't satisfied with the disposition of Lady Catherine. Would have liked more of a comeuppance.
I deducted a star for a fair number of editing errors, but more importantly because the timeline didn't flow completely. There was even a situation with Lydia that mentioned the month of May, when it should have been October or November. At times it felt like chapters were assembled a bit haphazardly. However, the book is well written . I recommend it highly for a satisfying and enjoyable read.
May 7, 2025
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. In this rich, romantic reimagining, sisterhood and strategy take center stage as five young women challenge the expectations of their world, and claim their rightful place within it.
Five sisters, one entail, and a legacy worth fighting for. Mr. Thomas Bennet’s untimely death brings not only grief to Longbourn, but, with it, the weight of uncertainty. The estate, entailed away from the female line, now faces a legal challenge from Mr. Collins, a cousin as odious as he is ambitious. Longbourn has never been a house of ordinary women, with the quiet strength of their grandfather's guidance, the five Bennet sisters step forward, not as ornaments of society, but as defenders of their legacy.
Elizabeth confronts the peril head-on, navigating estate management and Regency law with unexpected allies, including the formidable Mr. Darcy. Their growing connection simmers beneath the surface as legal battles, social judgment, and personal pride threaten to keep them apart. He is the last man she thought she could love, until he becomes the one man she cannot ignore. Jane, long admired for her beauty and composure, discovers a resilience even she did not know she possessed, especially when affection proves more complex than it first appeared. Mary, often overlooked, finds her voice in agricultural innovation and scientific study. Kitty, quiet and cautious, surprises them all with her clarity and instinct. Lydia, bold and impulsive, proves herself a steward of land and livestock, her talents emerging in the most unexpected places.
As Mr. Collins stoops to sabotage and subterfuge, the sisters must outwit not only him but the weight of tradition itself. With Mr. Darcy’s intentions increasingly entangled with Elizabeth’s, and the support of unlikely allies, the fate of Longbourn, and their futures, hangs in the balance. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. In this rich, romantic reimagining, sisterhood and strategy take center stage as five young women challenge the expectations of their world, and claim their rightful place within it.
Five sisters, one entail, and a legacy worth fighting for. Mr. Thomas Bennet’s untimely death brings not only grief to Longbourn, but, with it, the weight of uncertainty. The estate, entailed away from the female line, now faces a legal challenge from Mr. Collins, a cousin as odious as he is ambitious. Longbourn has never been a house of ordinary women, with the quiet strength of their grandfather's guidance, the five Bennet sisters step forward, not as ornaments of society, but as defenders of their legacy.
Elizabeth confronts the peril head-on, navigating estate management and Regency law with unexpected allies, including the formidable Mr. Darcy. Their growing connection simmers beneath the surface as legal battles, social judgment, and personal pride threaten to keep them apart. He is the last man she thought she could love, until he becomes the one man she cannot ignore. Jane, long admired for her beauty and composure, discovers a resilience even she did not know she possessed, especially when affection proves more complex than it first appeared. Mary, often overlooked, finds her voice in agricultural innovation and scientific study. Kitty, quiet and cautious, surprises them all with her clarity and instinct. Lydia, bold and impulsive, proves herself a steward of land and livestock, her talents emerging in the most unexpected places.
As Mr. Collins stoops to sabotage and subterfuge, the sisters must outwit not only him but the weight of tradition itself. With Mr. Darcy’s intentions increasingly entangled with Elizabeth’s, and the support of unlikely allies, the fate of Longbourn, and their futures, hangs in the balance. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
May 8, 2025
This was a marvelous story. If you are seeking a straight romance this may seem a little dry, but if you would enjoy reveling in the intelligence and strength of well-educated Bennet women (including Mrs B!), supported by their aging but progressive grandfather this book is not to be missed!
Mr Bennet Jr has passed away prematurely and the management of Longbourn is passed into the more than capable hands of the Bennet ladies, with Mr Bennet Sr’s support. Due to his advanced age he is unable to be hands on with the estate management but his mind is as sharp as ever as he continues to educate the Bennet’s daughters on agriculture, husbandry, water management, etc. The girls are apt students and probably better estate managers than most professional stewards.
When Bingley and Darcy lease Netherfield they are both intrigued with these knowledgeable young women. Seeing how their local society treats them due to their unconventional ways puts a damper on their personal interest, although Darcy does not totally disengage himself from their acquaintance. Collins’ antipathy towards educated women, spurred on by Lady Catherine, decides to challenge Bennet’s decision to put so much trust in the ladies’ abilities.
What happens when he takes his challenge of Bennet’s competence to court? Will he end up with being given the management of the estate prior to Bennet’s death? What will Darcy do about his family’s interference in the matter and his continuing regard for Elizabeth despite her unconventional behavior?
Mr Bennet Jr has passed away prematurely and the management of Longbourn is passed into the more than capable hands of the Bennet ladies, with Mr Bennet Sr’s support. Due to his advanced age he is unable to be hands on with the estate management but his mind is as sharp as ever as he continues to educate the Bennet’s daughters on agriculture, husbandry, water management, etc. The girls are apt students and probably better estate managers than most professional stewards.
When Bingley and Darcy lease Netherfield they are both intrigued with these knowledgeable young women. Seeing how their local society treats them due to their unconventional ways puts a damper on their personal interest, although Darcy does not totally disengage himself from their acquaintance. Collins’ antipathy towards educated women, spurred on by Lady Catherine, decides to challenge Bennet’s decision to put so much trust in the ladies’ abilities.
What happens when he takes his challenge of Bennet’s competence to court? Will he end up with being given the management of the estate prior to Bennet’s death? What will Darcy do about his family’s interference in the matter and his continuing regard for Elizabeth despite her unconventional behavior?
July 7, 2025
Quite interesting
A heartfelt story that lets you peek into the old-school mindset and see how social expectations messed with women's lives. Plus, a down-to-earth look at the rules back then and how they played out in real life.
A heartfelt story that lets you peek into the old-school mindset and see how social expectations messed with women's lives. Plus, a down-to-earth look at the rules back then and how they played out in real life.
May 8, 2025
a quiet shining example of perfection
Perfect canonical written example where true appreciation of our P/P and JA’s voice is rendered in book form. I can say honestly this is my second fav book EVAH (after P/P of course) LOVE the prose like flow, the familiar plot and characters, found this author’s perception of their qualities is as sharp as JA’s in the original. Reading this book is like wrapping a cozy, well worn blanket in front of a cozy fire when u want to relax and just BE. Truly this book amazed me with how it slowly worked its way so easily into my mind. Will def read again, numerous times; maybe as often and I read the original!
Perfect canonical written example where true appreciation of our P/P and JA’s voice is rendered in book form. I can say honestly this is my second fav book EVAH (after P/P of course) LOVE the prose like flow, the familiar plot and characters, found this author’s perception of their qualities is as sharp as JA’s in the original. Reading this book is like wrapping a cozy, well worn blanket in front of a cozy fire when u want to relax and just BE. Truly this book amazed me with how it slowly worked its way so easily into my mind. Will def read again, numerous times; maybe as often and I read the original!
May 10, 2025
Excellent work
As a voracious, perhaps obsessive reader of JAFF, it has become increasingly rare to enjoy a variation so thoroughly.
I urge those seeking the reviews before ordering through Kindle Unlimited to just go ahead and click to download.
I acknowledge there's some minor edits needed. But apparently, a major error has been rectified.
Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam are heroes.
Jane and Elizabeth shine. Lydia. Mrs. Bennett and the rest of the sisters are extraordinary women ahead of their time.
As a voracious, perhaps obsessive reader of JAFF, it has become increasingly rare to enjoy a variation so thoroughly.
I urge those seeking the reviews before ordering through Kindle Unlimited to just go ahead and click to download.
I acknowledge there's some minor edits needed. But apparently, a major error has been rectified.
Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam are heroes.
Jane and Elizabeth shine. Lydia. Mrs. Bennett and the rest of the sisters are extraordinary women ahead of their time.
May 10, 2025
Beautifully written, Perfect Bennets
A bit of a fairy tale: the Bennets are gifted and well mannered, the villains are both extreme and inept. I was a bit confused by the ladies showing their talents after carefully staging Longbourn to present themselves as vacuous females. The author is a talented writer.
A bit of a fairy tale: the Bennets are gifted and well mannered, the villains are both extreme and inept. I was a bit confused by the ladies showing their talents after carefully staging Longbourn to present themselves as vacuous females. The author is a talented writer.
May 5, 2025
Another great read!
What to say? The depth of this book was remarkable. So much was addressed, the greatest being the strength and intelligence of women, no matter when they lived. Yet, it did not diminish men although pointing out, through certain characters, their weaknesses. Mr Collins, so much a product of the times saw women as weak, and needing a male to guide in all things. Mr Bingley showed the worst side of his P&P character with his inability to think for himself and accepting the judgement of others stronger in character.
The story itself was entertaining and the sense of subsequent generations and family ties was very moving, a theme that was part of the whole of the book.
What to say? The depth of this book was remarkable. So much was addressed, the greatest being the strength and intelligence of women, no matter when they lived. Yet, it did not diminish men although pointing out, through certain characters, their weaknesses. Mr Collins, so much a product of the times saw women as weak, and needing a male to guide in all things. Mr Bingley showed the worst side of his P&P character with his inability to think for himself and accepting the judgement of others stronger in character.
The story itself was entertaining and the sense of subsequent generations and family ties was very moving, a theme that was part of the whole of the book.
May 8, 2025
Fascinating detail
Intriguing twist in an alternate universe, where the grandfather Bennett outlives the sisters' father and mentors them successfully in estate management. Their combined interest in and capabilities in managing Longbourn create social challenges within the community as well as problems with Mr. Collins. Enter Darcy and Bingley to stir the pot and flavor the romance. Nicely written!
Intriguing twist in an alternate universe, where the grandfather Bennett outlives the sisters' father and mentors them successfully in estate management. Their combined interest in and capabilities in managing Longbourn create social challenges within the community as well as problems with Mr. Collins. Enter Darcy and Bingley to stir the pot and flavor the romance. Nicely written!
May 4, 2025
Perfect!!
This fabulous story is without a doubt the most perfect example of what true feminism is truly about. I especially enjoyed that Jane doesn't end up with Bingley, Lydia sees through Wickham, and every happy ending is fully developed and deserved.
This fabulous story is without a doubt the most perfect example of what true feminism is truly about. I especially enjoyed that Jane doesn't end up with Bingley, Lydia sees through Wickham, and every happy ending is fully developed and deserved.
May 9, 2025
Too long winded
While I enjoyed the general premise of the story, I found it much too long winded and, combined with continuity errors and typos/grammatical errors, this ruined it for me. Definitely needs decent proofreading and large sections cutting out, then it has the potential to be a good story. Until then, I’m afraid I can’t recommend this one.
While I enjoyed the general premise of the story, I found it much too long winded and, combined with continuity errors and typos/grammatical errors, this ruined it for me. Definitely needs decent proofreading and large sections cutting out, then it has the potential to be a good story. Until then, I’m afraid I can’t recommend this one.
May 10, 2025
What to say about this book, the premise was very orginal and for the most part well executed. But this book cannot have been read by others before publication. There were things within it that no reader would let slide without comment. In one instance we were told that proceedings would resume at 2pm and then we turn the page to read of the morning light during the said proceedings. A really good editor would help the plot to tighten up.imo
May 31, 2025
Utterly dull.
May 26, 2025
I did not like this book
The author needs some reward for over 600 pages, but the pacing was dreadfully slow. I gave it four stars for the effort.
The author needs some reward for over 600 pages, but the pacing was dreadfully slow. I gave it four stars for the effort.
May 20, 2025
Beautiful
I enjoyed this so much. Ms Alexander wrote of family, tradition, pride, judgments, and yes prejudice. The tradition of the Bennett family, their struggle and unity was not heartbreaking but inspiring. Darcy’s struggle and Bingley’s lack of strength was a part of the story that brought to the front the strength of Bennett character. I adore that this story was centered on Bennett Land and not Pimberly beauty.
This was not solely Darcy and Elizabeth story but a Bennett.
There was on place where the story become out of place. It went back to the storyline.
Amazing and Beautiful I’m making this a keeper!
I enjoyed this so much. Ms Alexander wrote of family, tradition, pride, judgments, and yes prejudice. The tradition of the Bennett family, their struggle and unity was not heartbreaking but inspiring. Darcy’s struggle and Bingley’s lack of strength was a part of the story that brought to the front the strength of Bennett character. I adore that this story was centered on Bennett Land and not Pimberly beauty.
This was not solely Darcy and Elizabeth story but a Bennett.
There was on place where the story become out of place. It went back to the storyline.
Amazing and Beautiful I’m making this a keeper!
May 14, 2025
A story of the Ladies of Longbourn and their considerable expertise.…
I enjoyed this different take on the women at Longbourn and how they are lead by their grandfather in using their considerable intelligence to improve and protect their dear home. Each sister compliments the others with respect.
The law is tested when Mr. Collins raises his nonsense on the entail.
I enjoyed this different take on the women at Longbourn and how they are lead by their grandfather in using their considerable intelligence to improve and protect their dear home. Each sister compliments the others with respect.
The law is tested when Mr. Collins raises his nonsense on the entail.
May 11, 2025
excellent read!
I love this author all her books are fun and interesting. However, I must say that this one is so far my favourite. Characters are well developed is the story line, which is in itself very innovative! I would recommend this book without any reservations. Thank you and I do hope there will be a next book from you soon.
I love this author all her books are fun and interesting. However, I must say that this one is so far my favourite. Characters are well developed is the story line, which is in itself very innovative! I would recommend this book without any reservations. Thank you and I do hope there will be a next book from you soon.
May 19, 2025
Some wonderful writing but ah, the plotting and editing
Alexander has a wonderful turn of phrase, sometimes poignant, sometimes lyrical. Her characters are complex, 3 dimensional and engaging. The premise is entirely original. However, editing is required to correct errors and typos. My biggest problem was the placement of the chapter narrating (SPOILER alert), the wait for the verdict after the court case. It pops up in the middle of the book without warning or lead up. And there is no resolution afterwards we go straight back into the previous narrative. Furthermore, there were contradictions I that bothered me. In one chapter there is reference to Mr Collins being caught damaging the drainage system. This important fact then gets no more commentary or consequences, but later there is an extended narrative. about Mr Collins agents damaging the system. It’s a shame as otherwise this would’ve been a truly excellent book.
Alexander has a wonderful turn of phrase, sometimes poignant, sometimes lyrical. Her characters are complex, 3 dimensional and engaging. The premise is entirely original. However, editing is required to correct errors and typos. My biggest problem was the placement of the chapter narrating (SPOILER alert), the wait for the verdict after the court case. It pops up in the middle of the book without warning or lead up. And there is no resolution afterwards we go straight back into the previous narrative. Furthermore, there were contradictions I that bothered me. In one chapter there is reference to Mr Collins being caught damaging the drainage system. This important fact then gets no more commentary or consequences, but later there is an extended narrative. about Mr Collins agents damaging the system. It’s a shame as otherwise this would’ve been a truly excellent book.
June 4, 2025
At what point do errors become too much?
I was aware going into this book there were some issues towards the middle thanks to other readers. I found myself at a loss when I was presented with them much sooner than anticipated.
If the author had a proper proof reader this book could easily tell the same story in half the time. The amount of times things were repeated whether it be just statements or actual conversations. I counted one conversation between Elizabeth and Darcy repeated no less than 4 times, albeit the wording was slightly different each time. It made it feel like any progress made in their relationship and understanding of each other started back at square one.
I liked this take and it was a bit different then any others I've read but it felt like a chore to get through at times.
Overall I'd give the story four and a half stars but the author's sense of direction throughout only 1.
I was aware going into this book there were some issues towards the middle thanks to other readers. I found myself at a loss when I was presented with them much sooner than anticipated.
If the author had a proper proof reader this book could easily tell the same story in half the time. The amount of times things were repeated whether it be just statements or actual conversations. I counted one conversation between Elizabeth and Darcy repeated no less than 4 times, albeit the wording was slightly different each time. It made it feel like any progress made in their relationship and understanding of each other started back at square one.
I liked this take and it was a bit different then any others I've read but it felt like a chore to get through at times.
Overall I'd give the story four and a half stars but the author's sense of direction throughout only 1.
July 3, 2025
A bit tedious and dull
The amount of memorized, practical knowledge displayed by each Bennet sister and their grandfather, made them seem like Mens a geniuses! Besides agriculture, they didn't seem to be able to hold pleasant social conversations. I enjoyed the Mr. Collins/Lady Catherine plot, but it was left as a loose end with no final resolution or consequences. All we got was Lady C telling Collins to leave, but a clerical appointment could not be revoked by the patron/patroness. Also Darcy had a conversation with the colonel about Lady C's involvement but nothing came of it. I would have liked to have the Bingley's reactions to the final social circles the Bennet ladies achieved. Lastly, the expressions of love were a not lack luster.
The amount of memorized, practical knowledge displayed by each Bennet sister and their grandfather, made them seem like Mens a geniuses! Besides agriculture, they didn't seem to be able to hold pleasant social conversations. I enjoyed the Mr. Collins/Lady Catherine plot, but it was left as a loose end with no final resolution or consequences. All we got was Lady C telling Collins to leave, but a clerical appointment could not be revoked by the patron/patroness. Also Darcy had a conversation with the colonel about Lady C's involvement but nothing came of it. I would have liked to have the Bingley's reactions to the final social circles the Bennet ladies achieved. Lastly, the expressions of love were a not lack luster.
November 29, 2025
3.5 stars
I always enjoy stories where all the Bennets are sensible. Even Fanny and Lydia, I greatly enjoyed their altered personalities.
Thomas Bennets has passed away before the story begins, his father however is still alive. I don’t’t understand why the Bennets should be almost shunned by the Meryton society, just because Mr Bennet is dead.
Mr Darcy is very helpful to the Bennets, but is very stubborn about not wishing to marry Elizabeth. So I didn’t find there romance all that great.
Other than grandpa Bennet there are other original characters paying court to the Bennet ladies.
The story is well written, but a bit to long, it could have been tightened up.
I listened to the audio version and enjoyed the narrator
I always enjoy stories where all the Bennets are sensible. Even Fanny and Lydia, I greatly enjoyed their altered personalities.
Thomas Bennets has passed away before the story begins, his father however is still alive. I don’t’t understand why the Bennets should be almost shunned by the Meryton society, just because Mr Bennet is dead.
Mr Darcy is very helpful to the Bennets, but is very stubborn about not wishing to marry Elizabeth. So I didn’t find there romance all that great.
Other than grandpa Bennet there are other original characters paying court to the Bennet ladies.
The story is well written, but a bit to long, it could have been tightened up.
I listened to the audio version and enjoyed the narrator
May 20, 2025
Good story
I might have given this book only 4 stars, given the misplaced entry of chapter 45 and certain errors in continuity (Jane sets aside a book but also enters with her embroidery). However, the story is excellent and the building of plot and characters was strong. Characters stayed true to their beginnings, growing but never reaching outside of who they were. I admit to wanting to know how Lady Catherine ended up; surely some punishment was deserved, and how Georgiana succeeded. But I like my strings all tied up. The story stayed with me when I had to lay it down and I was anxious to return to it. I really did enjoy this variation.
I might have given this book only 4 stars, given the misplaced entry of chapter 45 and certain errors in continuity (Jane sets aside a book but also enters with her embroidery). However, the story is excellent and the building of plot and characters was strong. Characters stayed true to their beginnings, growing but never reaching outside of who they were. I admit to wanting to know how Lady Catherine ended up; surely some punishment was deserved, and how Georgiana succeeded. But I like my strings all tied up. The story stayed with me when I had to lay it down and I was anxious to return to it. I really did enjoy this variation.
June 24, 2025
Very slow pacing, somewhat repetitive, too many details
Decent. Nothing painful, though there are some minor typos. It felt like the author had done a bunch of research info farming techniques and tried to construct a story around the details instead of vice versa.
Some repetition and unlikely characterization; Mrs. Bennet is eerily zen and isn't recognizable. Darcy spends 90% of the book vacillating.
I ended up skimming large chunks.
Lots of new characters (suitors who were interchangeably boring).
In all ... okay. Bland. Good book to read before bed because there are no cliffhangers or drama.
It wasn't bad, just bland. I'm still not sure if it was worth my time.
Decent. Nothing painful, though there are some minor typos. It felt like the author had done a bunch of research info farming techniques and tried to construct a story around the details instead of vice versa.
Some repetition and unlikely characterization; Mrs. Bennet is eerily zen and isn't recognizable. Darcy spends 90% of the book vacillating.
I ended up skimming large chunks.
Lots of new characters (suitors who were interchangeably boring).
In all ... okay. Bland. Good book to read before bed because there are no cliffhangers or drama.
It wasn't bad, just bland. I'm still not sure if it was worth my time.
July 13, 2025
A wonderful story!
This book will go into my absolute favorites list. The cover picture caused me to delay reading this book, but I am so glad I finally read it in KU (purchase for my personal library is next). Without providing spoilers, I found many parallels in today’s political and social environment—both nationally and globally. At the same time, I loved the characterization of all the Bennet family and the Darcys. Mr Collins and Lady C were more fully developed than in many other JAFF variations I have read. Since this is the first book by this author I have read, I will now seek others by her. Thanks for a book that made me laugh, cry and think.
This book will go into my absolute favorites list. The cover picture caused me to delay reading this book, but I am so glad I finally read it in KU (purchase for my personal library is next). Without providing spoilers, I found many parallels in today’s political and social environment—both nationally and globally. At the same time, I loved the characterization of all the Bennet family and the Darcys. Mr Collins and Lady C were more fully developed than in many other JAFF variations I have read. Since this is the first book by this author I have read, I will now seek others by her. Thanks for a book that made me laugh, cry and think.
March 19, 2026
Hmm...
Ms. Alexander writes well, but after reading a couple of her novels, I find that they are not for me. I like more focus on the couple aspect. This read is likely more in line with P&P as so much is focused on the dictates of society and the strictures of propriety. Much interest is also placed on heretofore side characters. I am less interested in them. On the other hand, the fates of the Bingleys and Lady Catherine were unknown. They just exited the story and were never mentioned again.
It is confusing that a novel of such length should seem to drag at times while simultaneously leaving a feeling of being incomplete.
Ms. Alexander writes well, but after reading a couple of her novels, I find that they are not for me. I like more focus on the couple aspect. This read is likely more in line with P&P as so much is focused on the dictates of society and the strictures of propriety. Much interest is also placed on heretofore side characters. I am less interested in them. On the other hand, the fates of the Bingleys and Lady Catherine were unknown. They just exited the story and were never mentioned again.
It is confusing that a novel of such length should seem to drag at times while simultaneously leaving a feeling of being incomplete.
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