When I first caught sight of this book, after some time searching on Amazon for a good space opera, I had high expectations. 5 stars all around, a lot of praise and people saying this is one heck of a book. “Nice! I scored myself a good book”, I thought. I was wrong. I’m obviously the minority here, considering the amount of 5 star reviews this book has, but I feel like I really need to explain, to however is reading, why is it that I just didn’t like this book, and why I think it’s overrated.
Before we start, I have to say that this review does contain SPOILERS, not much though. And in my opinion, you shouldn’t read it anyway, so let’s start the rant.
The premise of the book is relatively simple, but still interesting: in the distant future, an alien species know as the Shaa has subjugated every other species in the galaxy, including humans, and imposed unto them a strict set of rules and laws know as the Praxis. Things like genetic manipulation are forbidden, with severe punishments for those who disobey the Praxis (ie: brutal, gory death)The thing is, the Shaa are dying, and when the last one perishes, the Naxid, evil insectoid aliens, enact a long thought plan to take over the empire. It’s now up to our heroes, the lowborn noble Lt.Gareth Martinez and Caroline Sula, pilot with a mysterious past, to survive the ensuing chaos and find a way to stop the Naxid in a divided empire. Sounds cool right? Well, while it is a very interesting premise on hypothetical paper, it’s not so good on literary paper, for a variety of reasons.
1st of all, the book is VERY slow. I kid you not, the main triggering event of the book, the death of the last Shaa, only happens on the exact middle of the book. The entire first half is comprised of boring subplots that lead exactly nowhere, with a small flashback section dedicated to Sula’s dark past. After that, things start to escalate a bit, culminating in a very satisfying action scene, where our protagonist finds out about the Naxid secret plan, and has to hijack his ship and escape the current solar system with alien ships in hot pursuit. To its credit, it’s a very good action section, but one that lasts too little, and nothing like it ever happens again, for the remainder of the book. Because at this point, we’re at the last quarter of the book, which is filled with more flashbacks and more boring, unimportant politics, like the first half. And the book ends with a smaller and less interesting space battle, and some more unimportant subplots because why not? In the end, the story only really starts at the mid-to-end point of the book, and while good, it’s not really worth all the uninteresting stuff from before.
2nd point is that the setting just doesn’t work in some ways, making for a more comical experience than a dramatic one. To begin with, for a civilization called “the dread empire” there’s not really all that much of evil in it. Sure, you have “noble” families with more privileges than the common folk, a strict guideline of laws whose transgressions are punishable by death, and poor people living in crime ridden slums. But nothing really stands out as particularly evil or bad. The book tells us that this empire is oppressive and evil, but doesn’t show anything to corroborate that. The Praxis itself is more a collection of very specific things you can’t do, with the punishment of exaggerated death, to an almost comical extent. As for the inequality and poor people living in terrible slums thing is no different than what we have in current day Brazil and USA. But the nail in the coffin is the way the book handles the government of the Dread empire.
Essentially, the Shaa were so good at dominating and subjugating stuff that no one has tried to rebel against the empire in thousands of years. This has, in result, created a complacent and comically ineffective government. The best example of this is the military, which for years has changed from being the manifestation of a estates might, to a organization which exists for the sole purpose of elevating the social status of those who work in it. Our male protagonist Gareth Martinez’s main goal in the beginning is to find a way to climb the ranks after his superior, who was supposed to recommend him for a higher position, kills himself so he could die with the last Shaa (an early book spoiler). Afterwards, he gets assigned to untimely named Corona, which is, I shit you not, a spaceship fully dedicated to FOOTBALL, where everyone in the crew is a professional player, the captain cares more about training than official military duties, and the ship itself is painted bright green and decorated with football balls to celebrate this fact. And it’s not the only spaceship of that kind by the way, there’s a full blown football tourney, where teams from different spaceships compete against each other. This fact, coupled with Naxids complete clueless attempts at making a coup (with how a group of Naxids failed to execute part of their plan because one of them insulted a superior in their language, which the insulted understood), as well as the complete inefficiency of the Empire government’s (with a group of senators debating for hours on how to punish traitors instead of directing the empire, eventually settling on having all traitors be trown out of windows) makes for some very fun moments, but ends up completely killing all the all the tension in the book, as well as destroying any credibility the Dread empire had as a self respecting tyrannical government.
In the end, maybe I’m being unfair. Maybe 1 star is too little, and the book obviously has SOME merit, considering it’s stellar score. But to be honest, this book just isn’t all that good as people make it out to be, and even though the sequels might be better, I’m not sticking around to find out. If you want a good space opera, I’m afraid that this ain’t it. Thanks for reading trough my rant.