I was so hyped to jump right into
‘Silver’
as my werewolf backlog is getting dangerously low (need to hunt for more werewolf books, assuming there are any left. I think I've already purchased every one that exists), but I just couldn’t get past the family drama and the fact that you get to the best, juicy parts (the werewolf) almost halfway through the story.
The novel is too long and focuses a lot in the beginning on this woman who left her husband to live with her two sons in the Kansas countryside. Needless to say, I couldn’t care less about their domestic upheaval and I was more interested in the attacks, in the werewolf who certainly takes its sweet time (much like the dragons in R.R. Martin’s GOT novels). I was literally screaming inside: ‘When do I get to see it? When do I get to read about the gory, violent attacks?’
I didn’t connect to any character either, so much descriptions on their lives and trauma and social commentary that I simply gave up caring. This was supposed to be a horror book, not a drama novel, but I felt no horror, I felt no suspense, there’s no viciousness and the ferocity I was waiting for.
The narrative is simplistic. Pages and pages of dumped actions and descriptions of what characters do and how they look; literally the prose, the way it’s being told, screams amateur, I guess? And it shouldn’t be a bad thing, but it feels somewhat cheap, raw, unpolished . Think stuff like: Dalton was doing this...Brett looked down and...their mom was cooking...Cassie strolled-'. Seriously, this is just the manuscript of the book, ideas and sentences without any editing, feels more like directives for actors on a movie set. Really sorry, but I guess an editor would’ve helped a lot here and surely the book would’ve made it a solid 4 stars rating, not to mention a bit shorter.
Don’t get me wrong, there’s a lot of potential, the author has a raw talent that with the right amount of editing and/or polishing the dialogue and prose, he can build up something really good.
Many, many thanks to Dylan Thyer, BooksGoSocial, and NetGalley for the ARC. This is a voluntary review, reflecting solely my opinion.