Four stars - In this transcript of a 1954 lecture, Eliot identifies three "voices" of poetry; each voice is a rhetorical stance taken by the poet to address a particular audience, even if the "audience" is only oneself.
Here are the three voices:
1. The poet talking to oneself, "– or to nobody," expressing one's own thoughts; the purpose being to achieve clarity for the writer alone, risking incomprehensibility to others. Eliot suggests that such poems could be called "meditative verse." He refers to a German poet, Gottfried Benn, and agrees with his idea of such poetry beginning with nothing more than a "creative germ" and words. "He has something germinating in him for which he must find words; but he cannot identify this embryo until it has been transformed into an arrangement of the right words in the right order." Later he states, "[The poet] does not know what he has to say until he has said it: and in the effort to say it he is not concerned with making other people understand anything." The effort of nurturing this embryonic thing is likened to being "haunted by a demon, a demon against which he feels powerless, because in its first manifestation it has no face, no name, nothing; … the words, the poem he makes, are a kind of exorcism of this demon. He is going to all this trouble, not in order to communicate with anyone, but to gain relief from acute discomfort." It is important to understand this point: "If you complain [as a reader of poetry] that a poet is obscure, and apparently ignoring you, the reader, or that he is speaking only to a limited circle of initiates from which you are excluded – remember that what he may have been trying to do, was to put something into words which could not be said in any other way, and therefore in a language which may be worth the trouble to learn." This advice is especially useful to me when I think about the incomprehensibility of many of W.S. Merwin poems in "Writings to an Unfinished Accompaniment" (1973).
2. The poet addressing others, a group, large or small, using one's own voice or an assumed voice, i.e., the voice of a persona; consisting of a message of instruction or persuasion, or amusement. This voice may preach, it may tell a story or it "points a moral." It has a social purpose, says Eliot. The dramatic monologue uses this second voice ("the voice of the poet who has put on the costume and make-up either of some historical character, or of one out of fiction" – see Robert Browning). On this point, Eliot notes, "It was Browning's greatest disciple, Mr Ezra Pound, who adopted the term "persona" to indicate the several historical characters through whom he spoke." The epic, too, uses the second voice, as in Homer, which is "essentially a tale told to an audience."
3. The poet when creating a character, for a verse drama, for example. This third voice became of concern to Eliot as he wrote his dramas "The Rock," "Murder in the Cathedral" and others. In this voice, the poet invents speech wherein an imaginary character addresses another imaginary character. Eliot discovered that this voice differs when the work is either "dramatic, quasi-dramatic" or "non-dramatic" verse. But the main point is that "in writing verse for the stage both the process and the outcome are very different from what they are in writing verse to be read or recited." He credits Shakespeare with using a genuine dramatic voice, this third voice, in his plays, in contrast with Browning (yes, poor Browning again) where in his "Caliban upon Setebos, it is Browning's voice that we hear." Expanding on his analysis, he states that "the poet, speaking as Browning does, in his own voice, cannot bring the character to life. … When we listen to a play by Shakespeare we listen not to Shakespeare but to his characters; when we read a dramatic monologue by Browning, we cannot suppose that we are listening to any other voice than that of Browning himself." In Homer's epics, which use the second voice primarily, Eliot suggests that the third voice, the dramatic voice, may also be heard: "from time to time … we hear, not Homer telling us what a hero said, but the voice of the hero himself." And in Dante's "Divine Comedy," "we hear men and women speaking to us," that is, we hear the voice of fictional or historical characters speaking directly to one another through the poet.
Eliot digresses at the outset to ask whether poems can be addressed to only one other person. He cites poems of "Mr and Mrs Browning" that were written to one another and then published, and to the "Love Sonnets" of Rossetti that were written for one person only but were later published after being "persuaded by friends to disinter them". He also notes the epistle as another example of a poem that is supposedly composed for one person to read. It is Eliot's conclusion that "a good love poem, though it may be addressed to one person, is always meant to be overheard by other people." Another digression ventures into the term "lyric" poetry. Yet another digression discusses several finer points about the dramatic voice, with this stellar bit of advice, which applies to any kind of writing: "I can't see, myself, any way to make a character live except to have a profound sympathy with that character." This applies even to an evil person. Possible ways for the writer to express such sympathy would be to "put into that character … some trait of his own, some strength or weakness, some tendency to violence or to indecision, some eccentricity even, that he has found in himself."
Upon my first reading, I asked myself who would care about such ideas these days? Most likely additional voices have been added to the list as the decades have passed and more and more literature has been written. It is interesting, though, to view literature from Eliot's perspective, looking back from the year 1954 to the Brownings and Ezra Pound, to Paul Valéry, Rossetti, Dante, Shakespeare and Homer. The experience, for me, is similar to my recent reading about the Impressionists and Cézanne, artists who were formative and very influential yet so much has happened since the time of their explorations and discoveries.
Eliot himself asks if his listeners "have been asking yourselves what I have been up to in all these speculations. Have I been toiling to weave a labored web of useless ingenuity?" He suggests, in conclusion, "I should like to think that it might interest the reader of poetry to test my assertions in his own reading."
This little book compresses a wealth of ideas into a small space. I I gain more and more from it with repeated readings. Eliot strews his pages with off-hand remarks, each gem-like, all of which could be followed up by the reader with additional contemplation and study. His ideas would make for a valuable discussion in a reading- or writing-group, or college class or other cluster of dedicated readers and writers.
The essay also appears in "The Complete Prose of T. S. Eliot: The Critical Edition, Vol. 7: A European Society, 1947-1953" (2018).