Shaky
Kalia is alone, pregnant, and miserable. At least, until Talon is thrown into her cell. Not sure seeing him returned from beatings balances out his convictions that his mate is going to rescue them. She's also pretty sure his mate isn't going to welcome the pregnant stray with open arms.
Spoilers ahead.
Kalia is selfish. She gets rescued but never once thinks to ask the crew if they'll save her sisters, too. Her older was married off into a miserable marriage. She was to be given to a sadist. Her younger is still a pawn, only 17, and could be given to the very creep she was to be. But she keeps her mouth shut for months knowing her evil parents could ruin her life. The romance had no foundation. Garret barely even had a handful of growling interactions with her. Talon spent more time mothering her than flirting. And suddenly it's love. Then immediately into bed with a woman 6 months pregnant, still not eating right, and hasn't touched a guy since she got pregnant. Sandwiches are not sustainable meals, show her eating something more healthy. And she goes from fumbling with the gardener's son to taking on 2 guys without a blink. The female ruled planet was awful. The guys there might be brainwashed but leaving the bad guy there was monstrous. Rape is rape, no matter the gender. Prison or just kill him. I don't like him, he treated women like dolls and service objects, but that doesn't mean he deserves to be molested against his will, objects that amount to rape if you aren't consenting to sexy play inserted in him, and basically being a slave the rest of his life. It isn't " turn about is fair play", it's both parties are equally wrong. We won't discuss the obligatory mean girl in Talon's home village. He's already got one mate, neither want her, Talon's got a life off world, she's delusional and an unnecessary addition. And Talon didn't peel her off him when she latched on. Basically, the plot was shaky. You don't leave an enemy at your back. If you want to stop slavery you destroy his operation. Always get information on people asking about you. Lust is instant, love takes time. Don't abandon your family to a fate you were rescued from. And rape is not ok as punishment. Ever.