The latest in our Orc Sworn series has artist Daisy - in a beat-for-beat recreation of the opening chapter of Kate Canterbary's In A Rush, down to small details - walking into the apartment she shares with her bf Lew to find him already occupied in their bed. As one does, she runs to a cave she found earlier for a good cry, and meets Filak. And by meets, I mean he triggers a rock fall so they are trapped together and what to do but bang it out to pass the time. So the next day she sees him in the light and he's even by "ew an Orc!" standards scary looking with his thin bald tattooed self. And yet! Daisy thinks to herself, you know, Absolutely Would again, and is like, sooooo, wanna come with? At this point I was like, yes this book feels modern, Daisy seems free of the usual Fenn FMC mindset of low self-esteem (usually for good reasons, human men are the WORST in her books), and she is refreshingly openminded about things, lfg, can't wait. Unfortunately this was the last point I liked or admired Daisy in this book.
Fenn writes in this circular, looping, repetative writing style that at its best drives home the theme and characters of her books. Here it just drives home the point that Daisy really almost refuses to grow and learn, and absolutely refuses to accept any agency or responsibility for what happens while she's at the mountain. Daisy is (unwittingly!) integrally important and complicit in a Bad Human Plan Lew is part of. Filak does the reasonable thing and brings her to the mountain and holds her while he tells the leaders about the Bad Human Plan. They determine that she (probably) didn't know about the Plan, but she has to stay at Orc Mountain. So here's the thing, Daisy makes friends in the mountain, but she keeps blaming Filak when her new friends also were just as cautious with her. "He took me as his prisoner, and locked me in a dungeon." I mean, he did think she was planning [redacted] so its seems like the least he could have done.
There is a language barrier (which gets handwaved away with 'Filak is studying at night and learning Common" which I guess is the new IPB language laser) but before it does she NEVER thinks to have any of the Orcs translate her concerns, most of which stem from her easily believing the absolute worse of him, and asking no questions. In fact, she's remarkably incurious, Mountain Leadership tells her they have thwarting the Plan in place, she washes her hands of everything and just vibes around the mountain making her little drawings and push/pulling with Filak.
I have the kindle note "ok calm down" so many times about Daisy in this book. She really pushes the whole Orc Bad/Me Blameless thing way too far, and takes no ownership of anything that happens. If you dicover your partner of four years was planning [redacted] and you had played a major role in making it possible, you might be more involved in trying to keep it from happening, but she's like, well, I guess Jule has this in hand, but let me harp more on how I, an adult, was suspected of knowing what I was doing and treated accordingly. If you have been involved repeatedly in VERY consent-forward and mutually desired D/s roleplay with a loving partner, maybe afterwards don't be like well the roleplay means that he thinks he owns me! And honestly, if three different healthcare workers try to talk to you about birth control options and you don't pay attention three different times, you can't complain that you were "trapped" by a pregancy, especially if you had already said you were all in and staying as mate at the point it occurs.
I get that Daisy had trust and self-esteem issues, but really, get in line behind all the other FMCs of Orc Mountain, because they seem to evolve past it. Filak was an interesting character, and it was great seeing another sub-culture of one of the clans, and the integration and lack thereof with the nor-ka-esh into the Orc community. I wonder why tattooing isn't more of a thing for the Ka-esh in general, given its religious import to the Nor-ka-esh. I did really like the idea of art as a calling for Daisy, and how it can fulfill a role on the mountain. Unfortunately I got a mental image of Daisy roaming the mountain making boardwalk-style caricatures of people emphasizing one thing (the smith has an AX, Kesst is PRETTY, etc), but I get it.
In the end the Bad Human Plan gets resolved in an easy and tidy way (would an elaborate and long-planned event be called off so neatly? Maybe! Do the details of who is doing it and why and how they get stopped ever make sense? Nope! Is it ever clear what Daisy brought to the table that made her so important? Ummmm). Anyhoo, plan thwarted, trust built, teamwork makes the dream work, another HEA on Orc Mountain.
I received this as an arc from Finley Fenn, but I am also in her Patreon, so got an extended copy there. This review is just of the arc version.