Let me start by saying that this was really a strong start to this multi-author world. I loved Vae a lot until I didn't. Then the other woman/omega drama was good. Honestly, I love the messy drama, and I have been desperate to find more of it, but I haven't really gotten my hands on it as much this year. This book had many elements I liked and was obsessed with. But now let's jump into the bad. First thing, we had SO many flashbacks. Literally every chapter started with a flashback, and by the end, I was just worn out of them. They had a purpose in the beginning, but then I felt like it just went overboard. I really wish we had either stopped them, wrapped everything up in a chapter, or just focused on the present day. I get why the flashbacks were needed in the beginning. I just think we get to the point where I needed to have more focus on the present day because we had so much going on, like the other woman drama, the late awakening, the hockey team, and the scentmatches. So, we had plenty to focus on and could've just grown out of the flashbacks at a certain point. Second, I needed more groveling. Not only did they overlook her pretty much their whole lives, but they were literally throwing girls in her face, even after acknowledging they kind of knew how she felt about them! We see them all act so terribly in here, and I wish we had more groveling because Vae deserved everything, and we just don't get a ton of it. Then, finally, for having so many dramatic elements and being a hockey book, we don't get to really zero in on it. It kind of felt like we have so much gone on that we don't get to focus on it very well. It sounds like I hated the book, and to be fair, there were elements that I needed to expand and focused on more, but overall, it just fell kind of mid for me. I wanted more attention to some elements and less attention to others. I still think it was a solid start to this series because there were a lot of introductions to teammates, and we see Marilyn a lot; she's like the matchmaker/PR person of the team. I can't wait to get into more books in the series.