I actually started this book under false pretenses; I need a title starting with 'V' for a challenge and I though the title was 'Velvet seduction' not that the V word was the author.
I like a bit of good erotica every now and then. This, however, is NOT good erotica. It is clumsily written, has clunky characters with childish simplistic internal monologues. The characters are not actively bad, mind, just not very well done. The world building is very basic. The plot, at page 55 shows no signs of becoming interesting. Worst of all, the erotica is unsexy and unenticing.
I have heard/read that writing erotica for women can be tricky (I assume that here women are the target audience) but this one fails at it I am pretty sure in many ways. For a start, there are a lot of men and they all seem more than a little misogynistic, which for me is not sexy. Also alas, poor writing is decidedly unenticing to this omnivorous reader. Anyway, I am sure there is a target audience out there to whom this book is suited, that audience however is just not me.