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Show Me Your Teeth #1

Mirror, Mirror

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Sterek
Established relationship. After someone flirts with Stiles, Derek needs to show him who he belongs to by fucking him in a room full of mirrors so he can see himself stretched open. Bonus points if Derek forces Stiles to watch as his hole is stretched to accommodate Derek's knot.
Words: 5013 complete

15 pages, ebook

First published July 18, 2012

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364 reviews28 followers
March 13, 2015
Derek gets jealous when a dude flirts with Stiles. This leads to hot possessive sex in front of mirrors.

Yum.
Profile Image for SheReadsALot.
1,861 reviews1,269 followers
January 25, 2016
“You’re going to watch as I stretch you open over my knot and tie you to me. You’re going to watch as I make you mine.”

See that quote? That's a SRAL guaranteed winner, right there. If a story has KNOTTING and that KNOT barely fits inside a hot hole?

*happy sigh*

This was better than average PWP. Nothing I'll remember after the next couple of books I'll read but I liked it. I'm not in the mood for complicated right now, so this hit the spot.

Why I liked:
- Possessive Alpha Derek who bites, KNOTS and is toppy. Complete with “mine”. (yes!)
- Bottom!Stiles coming, being stretched and KNOTTED (with tears) BONUS motherfucker!
- PWP mirror fucking (if Derek had Curtis, aka the dude who unleashed the Alpha beast in Derek, somewhere in the vicinity to watch Stiles being his a la his Alpha dick)...this would have been a 4 or a 4.5 at least.

I guess mirror fucking in Stiles' college wellness room works for the purpose of PWP...though I'm not going to look too deeply. Then I'll have a couple of issues and this is PWP. The only issue that should be the case is bringing one or two hands to the fap party. ;P

It's not deep and the ficlet is not trying to be. Teeth, sucking, fucking and KNOTTING are on the menu.

So it's more than like but not a really like. Eh...3.6666667 stars rounded up.
Profile Image for Meags.
2,485 reviews695 followers
August 2, 2022
3 Stars

A snippet Sterek fic—very much PWP—showing how Derek devours established mate Stiles (in a sexy way) after his alpha possessiveness comes to the surface.

It’s basically just one prolonged sex scene but WHOA BOY, so hot!
Profile Image for Tara♥ .
1,702 reviews111 followers
January 12, 2017
HAWT DAMN!!!!



PWP you say? Damn right I say.

Jealous and possessive Derek is just unf!

It's wrong that if I was Stiles I would be trying to make him jealous all the times isn't it? That's not at all healthy but in fairness Derek is kind of rewarding bad behaviour!!

Bloody hell.

Profile Image for Susan.
2,349 reviews458 followers
January 12, 2017
Stiles smells like someone else. Time for Derek to show Stiles who he belongs to.

Hot hot hot.
Profile Image for Trix.
1,355 reviews114 followers
July 18, 2017
PWP indeed. If you're only looking for some steamy Sterek action, then this is the place for you.

There is the barest sketch of their relationship and of a background story, just enough to explain the dynamic between the two and the catalyst for this particular scene. The rest is fantasy on top of the expected fantasy (werewolves). And plus, there is knotting. Good enough. Though for my personal taste, it needs more emotional build to get more stars.
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