I offer this review as constructive criticism.
The story starts out, interestingly enough, with alien first contact, but takes a sharp left turn with Max using the 'Time Weaver' to analyze why one pair of his children have behavioral problems. Huh?
Then it gets insanely complicated and dense. Look, this is coming from a reader who loves time travel stories and all the paradoxes they could entail, but geez!
Example:
The door opened, and there was Dr. Time, the one he’d recalled on October 27, 2013, the “first time around”. The middle-aged lady with the blonde tresses and the lab coat, with a huge smile on her face. He wistfully remembered the earlier incarnation of Dr. Time, a tall, lanky man in his late 20’s, who also wore a lab coat. Now, it had long been her turn to assume the role of Dr. Time.
“Dr. Max Thorning,” she answered with a hint of delight in her voice. She appeared ready to touch him.
Still smiling, she glanced at Margaret, then turned back to Max, awaiting an explanation.
“Dr. Time,” Max said with a hollow voice, still in a trance. How long had it been? The last time he’d seen Dr. Time was that young man, with the horn-rimmed glasses and eager, but mediocre bedside manner, about seventeen years ago.
Remembering her question, he turned to Margaret, and said, “Oh! My friend, Margaret Chong,” he said. Then after a second thought, knowing he would be asked anyway, he tacked on “No second name. Date of birth: December 9, 1962.”
“Come on in,” Dr. Time cheerfully said to the both of them. She spoke to no one as she addressed the room, “Dr. Max Thorning. Date of birth July 5, 1971. Departed Time October 23, 2013. Arrived Time September 16, 1987. Departed Time May 1, 1997. Arrived Time April 26, 1997.” She turned to Margaret, not even bothering to raid her memory. “Margaret Chong. Date of birth: December 9, 1962.”
Max massaged the back of his neck. Yup. This was the Dr. Time he remembered when he first embarked on his Time Travel adventure.
She walked up to Max with a spring in her steps and held him by the shoulders. “Good to see you, Dr. Thorning. I know you’d entered Time with me as your guide. But as you know, you reset the clock when you did so, therefore I have no memory of you.” She smiled approvingly at Margaret, who still remained impassive.
“Uh huh,” Max said, nodding. He knew the drill.
With a sparkle in her eyes, she continued, “But I’ve viewed recordings of you speaking with my predecessor. You and he discussed quite a lot. Also one time you brought your friend—”
“Garfield,” Max said, as Margaret’s eyes flashed recognition of the name.
As Nina Garcia said on 'Project Runway' last week upon viewing a particularly weird garment: "W T F?"
I must have read that passage a dozen times and still can't figure out what they're talking about. Again WTF????
To make matters worse Max is an a-hole who flies off into a rage at every opportunity which makes him not a very likable character. Then for fully 50% of the book we get the story of Kyle, one of Max's many kids (most of whom I can't keep track of because they're on different time lines), who suffers from autism (not mentioned but the symptoms are plain) and OCD???? I thought I signed up for a time travel novel, where did that go? If the author wanted to write about mental issues, why disguise this as science fiction? It just irritates me to wade through this. I know people with autism and OCD and they are not exactly fun people to be around.
I suggest you do yourself a favor and read the first chapter and then skip the superfluous happenings to chapter 21 and take up from there and save yourself a lot of grief in between. The book is okay good from there on although managing the 'time lines' can still be a lot of work for the reader.
To me this book is more about parallel universes than time travel and maybe should have been marketed that way.