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160 pages, ebook
First published July 19, 2012
Do you want to go see a movie with me?
Stiles types it out and then stares at it for a second, before deleting the 'with me' because it sounds too desperate and pleading.
Do you want to go see a movie?
That doesn't look right any more, it's just a question that hangs, awkwardly, forcing Derek to have some sort of opinion on movies. Stiles might as well not be involved at all. He's pretty much just encouraging Derek to go and see a movie without him. He's going for a mutual movie-seeing thing here. So that isn't going to work.
Hey, we should go see a movie
Stiles can't decide if that sounds too casual or too demanding. He doesn't want to give Derek the impression that he feels entitled to a second date. Maybe he should put a question mark on the end?
Hey, we should go see a movie?
Now it just looks like he can't make up his mind about whether he wants to see a movie or not. Immature and indecisive, perfect.




Stiles pulls his straw out and licks it clean, and Derek gives him a look like maybe he's weird for doing that in public.
The last time he saw Stiles he was pressed into red leather, elbows balanced on the shiny surface of the table, smear of milkshake on his lover lip.You're a tease, Stiles.