Thank you to HarperVia and NetGalley for the advanced reader copy and advanced listener copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. I wanted to love this book so much, and one of my biggest "complaints" could be addressed fairly easily with a glossary of terms and character list.
Background: This story is a dual story. One is a grandmother talking to her granddaughter who is in a coma. This takes place in 1992. The rest (and majority) of the story is the history of The Pohaku which is an ancient stone that one family tries to protect throughout generations (non-spoiler spoiler, but it's the same family, and the grandmother is "telling" this story to her granddaughter).
The issue for me was this was a very "tell not show" vibe. I had a hard time connecting with the characters as it was basically just one long story and there was hardly any dialogue. I did not feel connected to any of the characters really, and part of that is that there were so many characters and they were hard to keep track of. I think a character list is crucial, especially when many of the names are similar. For example: Kalehuna is the granddaughter of Kaluaua who was the nursemaid to Ka'ahamanu who was married to Kamehameha. Only Ka'ahamanu and Kamehameha are actually real people based on my research, so I'm not sure why we needed two additional K names which were fictional characters. But that's not all. Kalehuna marries George, and they call him Kanaka George (which I guess means "person" or "laborer" but seemed unnecessary tbh), and then Kanaka George's brother is named Kawika (apparently this is Hawaiian for David but still). These are all fictional characters and it was just unnecessarily confusing. There are also 3 Johns (only two of which are real, so again, a different fictional name would have been helpful).
Additional confusion was the use of Hawaiian words with no glossary. A lot of times when other languages are used, you can tell from the context clues of the sentence what the words mean, but I did not find that to be the case, and even when I highlighted in Kindle to look the words up, 90% of them did not pop up, so I had no idea what they were supposed to mean.
I enjoyed the Hawaiian history part and the lore associated with The Pohaku but it started falling flat for me when they got to California and we got all into the Gold Rush. That was not as interesting and it felt like a history book a bit. Connecting with the characters would have helped. Mahina was the only one I really connected with and so that part was enjoyable, and I was touched by the parts about new Americans coming in to put the Native Americans in reservations, and I would have actually loved to focus more on that because there was opportunity there. I cared less about the American and Mexican dispute over California because it was kind of glossed over.
I also feel like the two storylines did not converge for me because when the grandmother was talking to the granddaughter, she was speaking so casually and colloquially, sometimes in broken sentences, but then when she is "storytelling" the history it was more dry and formal, so it did not resonate that it was her telling this story. I think I would have enjoyed the book more if the entire thing was in grandma's voice because it would have felt more personal and not just like a history book. I also felt like the "connection" between grandma and the lineage that we followed the whole book was very rushed, and it was like we ran out of time/the book was too long so she was like "and that person was my grandmother".
IDK I feel like this book had so much potential and it was just a little bit disappointing. HOWEVER, I'm still glad I read it, as I do feel like I learned something and once I started using the audio (around 50%) it was much more enjoyable. I think if I had done the whole thing on audio I might have enjoyed more (I still think a glossary and character list is necessary...I think this is true anytime you are using another language, but for the characters in this book it was especially true because some of the names were just so similar). Basically: do the audio and learn some history! But just manage expectations that this was much more history/historical fiction that reads like real history than a family focused fiction.