Restraining Order

by Alex Dean

Alexis Fields is in the prime of her life, has just finished medical school and is celebrating her dream of becoming a doctor. But things go terribly wrong when she ends a volatile relationship with a disturbed man, Wilfred "Will" Bachman. Unable to handle the rejection, he develops a twisted obsession and promises to turn her life into a living hell.

After a vicious assault and a neighbor is found brutally murdered, the city of Madison is on edge. Top Madison Police Detective Lou Haney arrives on the scene and makes every effort to discover who the murderer might be. The city known as one of the best places to live has been thrown into chaos. Now Alexis has become a critical target as Bachman goes hell-bent on "revenge" before the police can find him.

Will Alexis be able to escape her deranged ex? Will the police be able to solve the gruesome murder?

This Short Story RESTRAINING ORDER is the beginning of Alex Dean's scariest, most chilling series yet.

The first 3 books in the series are now available:

Book 1: Restraining Order -- amazon.com/dp/B00NSAPAQI
Book 2: The Bogeyman Next Door -- amazon.com/dp/B00LF4TFW4
Book 3: Stalked -- amazon.com/dp/B00WGO9NPG

Genres: Short Stories, Crime

65 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 21, 2014

Reviews

[Felicia · Rating 4 out of 5]

Interesting short read

This book was a good short read. Of course it is a cliffhanger but I can't wait to read the next one. I got this book for free so I really wasn't expecting much but I hope the next was is better. I hope that it is longer than this one but I will be definitely reading the next one.

[Ted Tayler · Rating 2 out of 5]

"No glowing recommendation based on what I read I'm afraid"

This book is far too short. It deals with complex and often troubling subject matter; there would never be enough space to do it justice in a short story like this. As for the writing; it's average, which means the story line is never elevated to the levels that should see it receiving 'great' reviews. The two UK reviews I've read here reflect my opinion. I often question the veracity of reviews attributed to a title that is so 'average'. We're all reading the same words; how on earth can so many people on Amazon. com give it such a glowing recommendation?.Tastes vary, I appreciate that, but as my old Mum used to say 'you can't make a silk purse out of a sow's ear.' This book veers strongly towards the latter as far as I'm concerned.

[Kathy · Rating 2 out of 5]

More like a prologue

Than a short story. Even short stories should be complete in answering of themselves.
But I would still venture to guess that a full book would be worth reading.

[Shellanie t lesley · Rating 5 out of 5]

Its a great book

I like a good thriller and this book makes you want to read more and more I hate it ended so quickly

[Denise · Rating 4 out of 5]

Pretty interesting, although...

There were a few inconsistencies in the story line. One being how advanced baby Justin was for a six month old. There were a few others, but this one stuck out to me the most, seeing that I raised four babies from birth and know other people with babies, and not once have I heard of a baby being able to move around so avidly as this baby had.

I'm looking forward to reading the continuation though. Hopefully there will be fewer inconsistencies.

[Liza · Rating 2 out of 5]

It is a good start.

The story itself starts off well enough. It is enough to raise curiosity about the main character and why she might be in danger, however, it isn't enough for me to keep following the series. Why? I will not follow a series of short stories when they can be made into a book.

[Anne · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book was so good, I really enjoyed it. Unfortunately it is number 1 in a series, now I have to read the rest of the series to see what happens. I guess that's the point of a series right. I never heard of Alex Dean before but now that I have I look forward to more of his stories. I like his style plus the characters are awesome.

[Lisa · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good story but wish it was longer.

[Jeanine · Rating 4 out of 5]

Very intriguing little taste of the story.. I'll get book 2 to see what happens

[Neal B Kilbane · Rating 4 out of 5]

Payback

Ex-boyfriend doesn't take rejection well in this story .Seems if he can't have her, no one else is supposed to either.

[Shamshaad · Rating 3 out of 5]

I'm not a fan of short stories... But this is intriguing. I look forward to the next book.

[Razzle Dazzle · Rating 2 out of 5]

For a short story, it is fast-paced and action-packed, leaving room for wanting more

[Carrie-Anne O'Driscoll · Rating 3 out of 5]

As a survivor of domestic violence/stalking/sexual assault and now as a peace officer I was a bit disappointed by the actual length of the story. While well written, Dean could have done much more in describing the horror that Alexis is going through as well as the obvious manic episode that Wilfred is going through. The murder of "Vietnam Billy", a beloved character in the neighborhood known for protecting his neighbors was rather coldly delivered with no emotional narrative. I understand that it is a short story and as I said, well written though I believe that if it had been presented as a novella or a novel, I would have had more time to get to know the characters. It seriously reminds me of one of my reports. t's too clinical for such an emotional crime.

[Norma Budden · Rating 3 out of 5]

The story was okay - it seemed like I was reading about one episode and the fallout from it. It had a small degree of suspense within the story but wasn't really long enough to get established with the character of Alexis, so I couldn't feel her fear or get drawn into her emotions. Will's character came through loud and clear, as does his mother's - or was that merely a ploy, hoping to dissuade the police?

All in all, even the conversations between the police had an amateurish ring to them - they didn't come across as sounding natural, especially when they were surrounded by the murder scene. Will I read the other short stories to follow the story through? Probably but it's more likely to be because I want to see whether Will gets caught.

[P.S. Winn · Rating 4 out of 5]

Although too short this was a well written story that kept me fascinated as I followed the strange relationship between Wilfred Bachman and Alexis Fields. Wilfred has been dumped by Alexis, although he doesn't believe that possible and is not willing to give up the woman of his dreams. That is just the beginning of this mystery thriller. The ending leaves readers desperately wanting more, but since this is just book on, I am sure the author has a lot more to say.

[Cheryl · Rating 2 out of 5]

Honestly I didn't really enjoy this book. It was far too short even for a novella & seemed very rushed. There was no depth to the characters or storyline & I feel that the story should have been researched more given the seriousness of the topic. Disappointing, especially when compared to the synopsis.

[Christy · Rating 3 out of 5]

Good read, but way too short. Domestic violence, dating violence, etc are major issues in our society, I agree..However, I was disappointed the story seemed to abruptly end. I didn't rely get a chance to know the characters. I wish this had been longer, but I wasn't, so I believe I will read the remaining pieces.

[Black Butterfly · Rating 2 out of 5]

A VERY, VERY SHORT READ, I REALLY DIDN’T CARE FOR THE WRITING STYLE KINDA CONFUSING AT TIMES. THE STORYLINE JUMPS AROUND I GUESS BECAUSE OF THE LENGTH BEING SO SHORT. THIS IS JUST AN INTRODUCTION TO THE ALEXIS FIELDS THRILL SERIES. ;|

[Benjamin Shaw · Rating 3 out of 5]

Not bad i guess

Not a bad book but not great either. I understand its short but five chapters and a plot which is too quick ruined this for me. It still was okay but I've read so much better. Sorry to the author if this offends them but honesty is the best policy.

[Leslie Magee · Rating 2 out of 5]

Predictable

The storyline was quite predictable, not suspenseful at all. It is listed as a short story, however it left me feeling I read the first few chapters of the book. Disappointing!

[Jessica · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was far too short even for a short story. I think the series has possibilities & since the next book is only $2.99 on Amazon, I'll give it a shot. I think the author could have made this book a little longer so we could really get to know the characters more.

[Cami · Rating 1 out of 5]

I really had to push myself to finish this short story. It was poorly written and didn't hold my interest at all. It very much felt like it was written by someone with very little writing experience.

[Kevin · Rating 2 out of 5]

2*

Although good, I feel that the suspense was developed enough, the characters weren't developed enough and overall was too short for such a difficult, complex subject matter.

The characters needed more depth, history and development in order to earn a rapport with

[Liz Terek · Rating 3 out of 5]

Decent intro to the series

[James Harris · Rating 4 out of 5]

Great book

This is a great suspense book to read. I will definitely get the rest of the book series to read.

[Dan Meador · Rating 4 out of 5]

Interesting

Interesting read...ever feared someone but never wanted to actually think of the reality of capability? This book puts the mindset beyond the title says it in itself

[Cynthia L. Turner · Rating 5 out of 5]

INTENSE!!!!!

WOW, this is a really fast paced short thriller. Action packed with a "lot going on." It is not over yet for Alexis.

[Surender Negi · Rating 2 out of 5]

2/5

A very very short story about an murder. And Bakwaas

[Bonny Millard · Rating 3 out of 5]

Stalking

Wilfred continued the chain of his mother and father and their abuse. I am not enamored of this type of story, it is too brutal for ebooks
Entertainment purposes.

[Kathleen Downey · Rating 5 out of 5]

Really intense

What a great short story. Very intense and kept me on the edge of my seat. Great writing by a wonderful author.