I have to admit I had quite a few problems with this book; but first, the reason I started reading this book: It was actually to take a break from a 30 page book that was getting on my nerves. Which I have to say, while I did have problems with this book, I didn't have as many problems as the 30 page book and I haven't even finished the 30 pg book.
Problems:
(1) Does bile rise up in your throat enough? I mean, everytime Jules had a problem, her mom was messing with her, etc. she'd say bile was rising up in her throat (book is in her P.O.V.)
(2) Jules relationship with Connor BORING and nothing I was interested in. So I got like no romance in this book....
(3) The Ending (how many problems I have with the ending)
*The point of bringing Connor along? Was it just to make sure that he was there to be taken to the underworld? If so, the author needs to come up with another reason...
*Dani's soul issue? Huh, her soul is inside a witch ball, but she still acts like she has a soul? Really? I thought the point of her losing her soul just for it to be sold was retarded.
*Jules and Connor's relationship ending...Really? Connor just had to do the right thing the right thing at the end? Giving up his own soul, (after his mom rats him out), seriously, he was a bad guy for a reason. Yeah, maybe he regretted it, but he didn't regret lying to Jules, using a ring on Jules, selling Dani's soul, and letting Jules and Dani get attacked by a vamp? Seriously, now he's guilty? It seems like the author was pushing for us to like him at the end, but I never liked him in the beginning. I thought she was going to get wih Fin when he was introduced in the story, but then Dani gets him.
* The demon. We get this big build-up: purple skin, red horns, his horns hit the ceiling because he's so tall, shark-like teeth, and no pants. Then what does the demon do? Yah! You're out of your contract, I'm only taking the two bad-guys souls (Connor and Helena), and you guys can get your souls back by recovering a few of my demon objects humans have stolen. I'm not going to punish Jules from trying to stop me from taking Connor's soul, or Margo for charging at me with an ax, or even make you get back the soul you sold against the contract, because I'm a demon. Yeah, that makes sense, that's huge sarcasm for those who didn't get it.
*Oh, and then Jules feels guilty for Connor ending up in underworld, but what about all those weres, vamps, and ghosts she already sent there? What? They don't matter? No guilt for them? But guilt for the guy that used you, lied to you, attempted to sell your friend's soul, and used you to make money on killing the creatures? But no guilt for the creatures who didn't deserve to be sentenced to hell for the rest of eternity because of you? Get your priorities straight!
*And then she's all of a sudden with Michael, even though they only have one moment in the book?....My patience wore thin at the end.
(4) The book moved kind of slow. Especially since Jules kept saying she wanted to find out more about the inner coven, but she didn't do anything to learn about it.
(5) Time line was kind of messy. I couldn't tell when someone's initiation into the circle was going to happen because she kept no dates in the book, and considering each of their birthdays were very important, the author should've kept dates. And we never get to celebrate Jules birthday...And then the book ends with a chapter several months later...It was too confusing...I couldn't even tell what month we were in until someone was initiated.
What I liked about the book:
(1) Just whole idea for this book was cool to me:
*Witches hunting vamps, weres, and ghosts
*Witch balls to capture hexes, ghosts, and other witch's powers
*The inner coven using them to make a profit
*The demon items were kind of cool and well used in the story-like the ouroboros used to manipulate Jules, the eye vest used to watch them, etc. They were all well used.
*The ability to fly unseen with a spell
*A witch who doesn't like the old ways
Then the demon had to come in and ruin it, if it were a truly evil demon, I would have been more forgiving. It seemed like a forced twist to keep the story interesting, but the witch using the young witches to gain money and being hired by humans and other creatures would have been a good enough twist. The whole demon idea would have been better left out.
(2) I liked that it wasn't a long story- only 268 pages. I liked that the author didn't add in a bunch of unneeded details and scenes like most books do these days.
(3) I also just like the little red riding hood joke from Kelsey. I also thought it was funny since I'm going to see the Red Riding Hood movie tomorrow.
I may not have has many likes listed, but I did like this book overall. It's just that a lot of things made me angry, but it was a lot of small things, mainly just the ending. I think it could have been better done. Just my opinion though...