Melt

by J. Lea López

A Sexy Summer Short Story

Chicago native Naomi has made a home with her boyfriend Erik in lush, tropical Hawaii, but she misses certain things about winter now and then. To give her a taste of home, Erik hatches a plan to bring winter to the beach, but it doesn't last long because when their bodies meet, the temperature is always scorching.

Short in length but high in heat, this is the perfect little morsel to read poolside as you may find yourself in need of a cool-down afterward. (Story is approximately 4,000 words.)

Genres: Erotica, Summer, Romance, Short Stories

10 pages, Kindle Edition

First published May 30, 2014

About the author

I'm that friend you have who's usually pretty quiet, but who likes to chime in occasionally with some horribly inappropriate sexual innuendo or humor. Also, I hate writing bios.

Reviews

[Selene · Rating 3 out of 5]

Erik and Naomi are madly in love with one another but Naomi craves a vacation away from their home in Hawaii. She misses the snow, changing seasons, and layering blankets for warmth. Erik compromises and the reader is taken on a quick steamy adventure into pure bliss!



▷Very short story. Erotic. Ice cubes and popsicles involved! Enjoyed!

*Amazon freebie.

[Pearl Angeli · Rating 1 out of 5]

1.5 Star

Don't get me wrong. The writing was promising, but the main issue I had was the plot which wasn't there. The character description was also vague. I don't know how the male and female lead were related to each other. They could be lovers, husband and wife, or anything.... ??? It lacked on so many levels. Anyway, there's always a room for improvement. :) I hope to read a better work from this author in the future.

[J. Kahele · Rating 3 out of 5]

Hmmmm

Just a very quick smexy read. Well written to the point with no real plot but definitely a fun read.

[Drasevia · Rating 4 out of 5]

Quick. Fun. Super hot. Addictive. Really well written.
Big - and also pleasant - surprise for me. 8,5/10.

[Iva · Rating 4 out of 5]

Very interesting

[Traceys · Rating 3 out of 5]

short smexy read.

[Ted Tayler · Rating 2 out of 5]

"Left me cold"

Nothing to add to the headline. This was instantly forgettable.

[Natasha Banton · Rating 3 out of 5]

Overall, I thought that this was a good read. However there was a couple of things wrong with the book. There was one spelling mistake and there was a comma instead of a full stop. But apart from those two mistakes, I thought that this was a good read.

I would recommend this to people who love romance and a short read which should be read by the fireplace during the evening for a cosy read.

[Mk · Rating 2 out of 5]

Nice, short and streamy as promised.
It could support a lot more heat but it's okay.
Really reminded of these erotica stories in literotirca.
Didn't really have a plot, but sometimes it's just not needed.
I can't really get why she missed the snow and the cold so much to be honest. Having a place in Hawaii sounds like a dream coming true.

[Vickie Noel · Rating 3 out of 5]

Quick read

It did promise to be a short read and delivered on that. I would have preferred more descriptive language, though, it felt more like a reportage. Still, it delved into the sexy part real quick without much ado. It's an ok book for romance lovers.

[Amanda · Rating 5 out of 5]

Scorching winter read

Scorching winter read, the couple lives in Hawaii and Naomi wants to go somewhere with snow for Christmas. Erik creates a cold sexy scene for them as a prelude. Quickie read full of action!

[Allana Walker · Rating 5 out of 5]

great fast read. super hot! Just wish there was more of it xxx

[Leah Russell · Rating 1 out of 5]

Not good at all

Boring not good at all said a quick beach read but this was a joke literally read in 5 mins

[Sandra Taylor · Rating 5 out of 5]

Yesss

I love short stories and this one is a must read. Erik did that. He can come fulfill my fantasy anytime lol.

[Derrick Wright · Rating 5 out of 5]

Good read

It was good plot and storyline. Funny in the same breath. I recommend this book for others to read and enjoy.

[Queen Talk Talk · Rating 3 out of 5]

Too short!

What a lovely peek. This was just a teaser hug well written. I did enjoy the sensation play descriptions. Shiver!

[ChattyChik21 · Rating 3 out of 5]

Super hot

Great storytelling really set the scenes and made it fun a great little short read would recommend for a super fast bit of fun

[Michelle · Rating 5 out of 5]

☃

Are you looking for a hot and sexy story? Grab this and head to the water or crawl into bed because this is a quick read.

[Jannah · Rating 1 out of 5]

All this book is about is a sexual encounter in Hawaii with ice. Did not enjoy it at all. No story; no character development, no conclusion only sex.

[Barbara Collins · Rating 5 out of 5]

too short of a story
but great book

[jewel · Rating 4 out of 5]

Everything was ok but I don't like that it was a quickie

Everything was ok but I didn't like that it was a quickie I think you should make it longer and have another scene in Colorado

[Winfield · Rating 2 out of 5]

Quickie read, grammatical errors throughout the book, made the reading tedious the storyline was realistic. I hated the ending and most people (males/females) would have slapped her for what she did to the guy, not that I condone domestic abuse but it would be warranted in this instance.

[Tiphany · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good read

This book was short and to the point and it gave the readers just enough. Also great love and passion.

[~Gen hearts books.~ · Rating 3 out of 5]

Short and interesting enough to hold my attention....

[Christy Lee Smith- Fabio · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good. A little lack luster..

Well written, but I wanted more!! More description, more vividly hot sexual encounter. A bit more HEAT!!! More passionate imagery.

[Kelli Santistevan · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was a fun read.

[Jean Oram]

Steamy and sensual!