Observed While Falling is not a great book. Its not even a good book, it's decent. For the most part I feel Malcolm McNeill is riding the coat tails of Burroughs while simultaneously sneaking in and trying to force an autobiography of himself, portraying himself as a starving artist of the '60s. It comes off as rather self-aggrandizing to me. Also, the problem is that McNeill is not a good writer (he's decent at some parts) and comes off dull and boring in many parts; though he might be a good illustrator, I'm not sure...The examples seem to show that he IS indeed pretty damn good at illustrating... In any case, he repeatedly describes putting down Burroughs sexual advances; probably the only somewhat interesting parts of the book... My response to this is.....ITS FUCKIN BURROUGHS! YOU BLOW THE DUDE IF HE WANTS YOU TOO! Shit, if he had two dicks, you should have blown one of them while giving a handy jay to the other! The dude is a legend... I would totally have blown Burroughs, just so I could have told an awesome drugged out, homoerotic story!..Maybe if McNeill's banged Burrough's, instead of being a fag about it, the book would not have been so boring and dull...Just imagaine "Burrough's dick turned into a Emerald Tree Boa right before my drug induced eyes!!" See how much cooler that is... Clearly, McNeill is a total square and a closet homosexual...The book leaves you wanting to hear more about Burroughs than McNeill's boring, cliche problems with the law and ladies; typical of hippy stories at this time.... Does have some good quotes from time to time, mostly by Burroughs...Also there are some major grammar mistakes, which I usually bypass. But these are bad, for example this one....
"The "We" of his letter to me back then was now very apparent." I don't have a fuckin' clue what this means...This is just bad grammar...Oh, wait, now I get it after rereading 8 times...whatever...
and this one is another example of shit grammar....
"I would one of the first ones on it."
I would expect better if I was going to drop $29.99 for this book.....This is just sloppy work.....Luckily I would never pay this much for anything and just drunkenly annoy librarians via email at 4am until they unwillingly order books for me....
Surprisingly the chapter entitled "Here" was pretty fascinating and has left me curious about Mayan civilization. He starts going off on paranoid rants about 2012 and the collapse of society...This is all necessary and good stuff I can appreciate...He then compares the circular (rather than linear) idea of history and how the current present time is a repeat of the past...Ranging from politics to technology...Examples...Telegraph to internet... Really well written chapter...
Oh, here are some cool quotes...
"Bill was no fan of book reviewers...He compared them to the Egyptian 'Assayers of Scribe,' the court historians who enforced the interests of their employers and forestalled opposition. They were the arbiters of taste, the controllers of information, the ultimate censors. It was they who determined what would be read and who would read it. Bill wanted to 'put a curse on all of them.'"
"GPS, CCTV surveillance 24 hours a day, more and more cops, more and more security, relentless word/image 'programming' and 'monitoring' through media, results in an increasing behavioral conformity, political correctness, and identical, cultural, religious mindset...But such a level of control in the long run produces a dull, homogenous, non-resistant human product."
"Hollywood indoctrinated audience."