i know this is a YA book, so i shouldn’t hold it to such a high standard, but there are some real bangers in the YA genre. hell, a lot of YA books use language that is TOO flowery for me and it feels like it’s trying too hard to sound clever. but THIS book has the opposite problem.
man this was so ass i’m sorry. i picked this up because i recognised the name horowitz from “the word is murder”, but i somehow forgot that i hadn’t really enjoyed that book either. at least that one was passable.
this book is written SO UNBELIEVABLY BORING. i can look past a boring style of writing if the plot is interesting enough to keep it moving, but the plot was so far fetched and silly i just found it painful. i only finished it because it was short and im glad it was over fast. he’s got that type of writing where they just sort of list out everything happening in chronological order, with no flare, rhythm or plan. it read more like a final draft of the timeline for a future, better book that wasn’t finished.
matt is such a boring kid. i get he’s troubled and kinda miserable but teenagers do act out occasionally, enough so to make a character memorable. matt is 14 with no opinions about anything or strong feelings about anyone. he watches people die and has no reaction, he gets chased, attacked, insulted and belittled and he just sits there. DO SOMETHING!!
the villagers are so cartoonishly evil it felt like hot fuzz, except it took itself very seriously. the way they were always one step ahead of matt didn’t feel clever or scary, it just seemed silly. their powers aren’t explained at all, there’s so much to their magic missing that i wonder whether horowitz even bothered developing or planning any of it beforehand.
matt’s powers have the same problem. so he sees visions of the future, but also he can smash and move things with his mind..? the trigger for his powers is also apparently the smell of burning, which he somehow pieces together at the end. shits wack
i wasn’t invested in any of the characters at all. they were so unmemorable and empty. they felt disposable, which is what they absolutely were; everyone just kept dying the second they tried to help matt. after mallory’s death i stopped bothering to care about any of the others. like… they just killed a detective and faced no repercussions for it. no one cared. no one has value here. when it was revealed that richard was still alive i wasn’t even glad to see him, i was just glad horowitz hadn’t killed off ANOTHER character with the same lack of care or detail.
horowitz is good at writing quick, witty dialogue sometimes. every now and then matt would say something funny, but he still seemed so emotionally detached from the world because of the writing that it didn’t carry the book. i wish horowitz would use more of this wit to translate some of the fun into the storytelling also.
i always look back on books i’ve read and remember the time i was reading it, i relive the story in my head and i remember certain characters and scenes. i don’t think there’s anything i’ll remember from this book. i’ll read this review back in a month’s time and have no memory of what i was even referring to.