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Probed #3

The Surrender

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In the final book of the Probed trilogy, Amy Collins finds herself the only human on a spaceship speeding away from Earth with her alien lover Z imprisoned aboard. Realizing she must submit to unspeakable physical acts with her captors, Amy surprises herself by how far she’s willing to go. But will she consent to being intimate with the ship’s monstrous commander? Does she even have a choice? And more importantly: Will it be enough to win her and Z’s freedom?


Warning: Adults only! Includes very explicit sex scenes.


This short story is roughly 9000 words in length.


Excerpt:


“You enjoy the male human form, don’t you?” the commander moved in closer, sitting next to Amy on the bed. She did not flinch, but every fiber in her body was prepared to jump.


“I enjoyed watching you as you interact sexually,” the commander’s voice dropped into a near-growl. “It was fascinating... but I want to see more.” Amy surprised herself with her ability to remain immobile. She stared at him as he continued.


“I want to see what your physical limits are, how much you can take. I think you would enjoy what I have in mind as a test.” The commander’s moved the covers and ran his cold hand across Amy’s thigh. “You will engage many of my subjects in one session — as many men as I order you to. I sense you would enjoy that.”


Amy couldn’t believe her ears. Was this monster actually proposing what it sounded like? She slid away from his hand and covered herself. “I want to see Z,” she said.


The commander dropped his hand. “You do not have any authority to make demands.”


“I will give you what you want, but only if you free Z.”


The commander stood up from the bed and motioned to the guards. They approached Amy and grabbed her by her arms, pulling her off the bed abruptly. The covers dropped, exposing her body to the commander.


He slowly reached out and fondled her breast, sending a chill up Amy’s spine. Then he barked orders in the alien language and the guards lead Amy toward the door opening. She turned to look at the commander as she walked past. He smiled his lascivious grin at her. “You will give me what I want,” he said. “with no delay.”


Flanked by the alien guards, Amy was ushered into a larger room filled with men, at least twenty that she could quickly count. The men stood in attention as the commander entered in the room after her. Amy recognized some of them, and they were all in fully detailed human forms, as opposed to the ghastly versions of the commander and his guards. He addressed the men and suddenly a large opening appeared in the floor. An oval-shaped bed appeared to levitate from the ground in the middle of the room, coming to a stop a few feet above floor level. Amy was led to the bed and forced to sit on the edge, her naked body offered to everyone to view.

33 pages, Kindle Edition

First published December 30, 2013

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Alexis Adaire

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Living in the Pacific Northwest, Alexis Adaire spends too much time indoors, cuddling under blankets, emerging from the bedroom periodically to refill her coffee mug and write stories.

Alexis likes to take her readers to those secret, unspeakable corners of their fantasies they barely even knew existed.

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4 reviews
May 13, 2015
I stand corrected

Not a bad read at all. I decided to read this for laughs but, I ended up completely enjoying the whole trilogy. Kudos to the author.
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August 17, 2017
Part 3 of 3 to this book.

Now I only read this one because I wanted to know what happened to the h. Not erotic at all...I could have done without the full on description of the commanders minute, nasty, crooked, wonky bumpy PEEN....🤢🤢🤢🤢....however aforementioned lacking but promised tentacles appeared BRIEFLY!
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May 17, 2015
Not as good as the other two

Well almost everyone got what they wanted. I skipped through a lot want too entertaining. HEA though. Wanted more hot alien sex
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August 6, 2015
Great ending

Will Amy and Z be together once and for all or will she have to be a sex slave to the alien race? You will have to read this to find out.
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