I might have given this four stars, but don't be fooled: this is a helluva story. I enjoyed it immensely. The premise was good, it got you interested a few pages in and kept your interest throughout, and it had a really good pay off. There was the right amount of tension where there needed to be, and the confusion the main character felt was conveyed clearly to the reader. Why I knocked off a star is because of some technical errors. The prose could have been tightened up in a few places--oftentimes he repeated himself. I realize this is how people talk, but it's still not talking: it's prose. If the repetition helps, then leave it in. In this case, it did not. Sometimes the sentence structure was off as well, and there were a few sentence fragments instead of whole sentences, generally when the sentence began with "and". Those were distracting enough for me that I couldn't QUITE give it five stars. I would put it at 4.5 really, but if those kinds of things don't bother you, then it's five stars all the way.