***Some plot points mentioned throughout, and many spoilers for the Giver, but no major surprises from the Son are revealed (hint, there aren’t exactly any surprises in this book, period).***
The Giver books have gotten steadily worse. The first is obviously amazing, Gathering Blue is quite good, the Messenger is a better-than-average YA book. Then we have Son, which is what you get when you put cow manure in a firework and toss a match. Shit. Shit everywhere. I’m blinded by the shit.
I am genuinely convinced someone else wrote this book and pawned it off under Lowry’s name somehow. There is no fucking way the same person who wrote the Giver almost 20 years ago wrote this. I refuse to accept it.
Issues:
1) Pacing. Lowry just skips over some things in a freakishly rushed way (at one point she’s basically “Claire realized Jonas had left. The next few hours were pretty cray cray. She got on the boat that was parked in the river and the boat chef for some reason welcomes this complete stranger and gives her a hug and let her come with them and they sail away.” I could have used more than like, two sentences for how exactly that happened.) Other things she draws out obscenely. We get it. Claire exercised. Please stop telling us that over and over for thirty pages. We also get that Claire climbed a cliff. Considering nothing eventful happened on said climb, did we need yet another thirty pages to describe it? I know what a rock looks like, thanks. Where the fuck is the editor who approved this? They should be dragged out into the street and shot.
2) These people don’t act in reasonable ways. Jonas, you fucking loon, the Giver didn’t refuse to come with you because he thought “it was a journey you needed to do on your own.” The fuck is that supposed to mean? No, he didn’t come with you because after you left, your memories would go to all the people in the community and the Giver had to stay to help them deal.
(BY THE WAY why doesn’t Claire talk about this? I know she leaves the day after Jonas does, but the memories were supposed to come back immediately— they did when Rosemary died. Claire doesn’t receive any of Jonas’s memories. K. Love the consistency).
Jonas, the Giver didn’t just stay behind to teach you a fucking lesson. He’s not a sadist. So don’t give me that crap when you send Gabe out to find the Trademaster alone. Jonas even says himself that “Trademaster was so inhuman, so dangerous. So evil. And Gabe was so young and vulnerable.” YES. Do you hear what you’re saying? You don’t let a young boy that you love go into danger, facing off a force that you yourself has described as “pure Evil” (you used an actual capital E, I’m not making his up) just to “find his own strengths” and “face his own fears.” Please stop talking.
Continuing with the “these people are so stupid they deserve Darwin Awards” thread: Claire. Admittedly, she was selected to be a Birthmother, so maybe we’re supposed to think she’s pretty dim, but my God. So there are two ways out of the little village she stays in after she leaves her community: the ocean, and the cliff. The ocean is objectively safer; we know this because everyone sensible tells Claire she should go by ocean. But no, she’d rather risk her life climbing an incredibly steep cliff, at the top of which she already knows a mysterious evil wizard-sorcerer with a history of crippling people by cutting off their feet is waiting for her. Why would she rather do this? Why won’t she go by ocean?
Because she just won’t, that’s why.
ARGHHHH.
3) Impressive lack of characterization and/or character arcs. Those who are recurring characters, like Jonas and Kira, are but pale generic wisps of their former selves. Quite frankly I can’t tell any of the characters apart. And our main character, Claire, just doesn’t make sense. She’s a perfectly law-abiding citizen one day and the next she’s… not? Without any provocation? Let me give you an example: “[Lying was] against the rules. She knew that. Once, she would have cared. Now she didn’t. As simple as that.”
Okay, what? Nothing has made her change so far. She’s going to violate one of the most serious rules of the community (that she’s been brainwashed by all her life) without preamble or explanation, and it’s “as simple as that”? I’m going to need a little more here, Lois.
4) Lack of consistency, especially regarding the community Jonas, Gabe, and Claire came from. I struggle to conceive of it as the same community as the one we saw in the Giver. Will I get some ironic giggles if I use the word “colourless” to describe it? Somehow the world-building lost depth, rather than gained it. Didn’t know that was possible.
Language is all wrong. Among other things, Claire refers to the baby she gives birth to as “her son.” Claire’s only understanding of “son” would be an adopted son. It’s very clear that Birthmothers are not mothers to their children. The “Product” as they call it, would have no connection to the word “son,” which in their word means “the boy who was assigned to be raised by your family unit.” So her use of this word annoyed me. She also uses the word "suit" to describe what the Trademaster is wearing. The community she and Jonas are from, everyone wears tunics. Are you telling me that these unbelievably isolated 16th-century-level villagers are wearing three-piece suits? This is not a word you would know.
I’m also curious by the fact that a Twelve picked to become an engineer studies, among the other sciences, *astrophysics.* This community sending rockets into space? They don’t even let their citizens cross the river. And they don’t exactly seem the “knowledge for knowledge’s sake” type, do they?
And the fact that Claire doesn’t know/has forgotten that everyone was designated a number at their birth? This makes zero sense. Jonas made it clear that it was VERY well known, and part and parcel of their daily lives as children.
And they talk about mammals freely- but in the Giver, we’re told that nobody knows what the word “animals” is, or that such things really existed, once.
Also in the Giver, discussing differences was the height of rudeness, but Jonas’s father calls baby Gabe “special” like it’s a compliment.
I could go on and on, but basically the whole vibe is off.
Sigh. Oh, Lois. If we’re going to write sequels to the book we wrote nineteen years ago, perhaps we should reread said book before attempting it?