4.5 glorious fucking stars, this book honestly blew my mind. Never knew going into it that it would be one I enjoyed so much but my, my, my, I could NOT put this book down.
I think if you've read and loved "Demon's Dream", you would absolutely eat this book up. Avery reminded me very much of Dayana. She was fiery, could and did handle her own, and didn't take any shit from any man not willing to treat her how she deserved to be treated. In the beginning of the book, I admit to being a bit frustrated with her. She seemed to judge her best friends Nicole and Reggie for being "ho's" and she would often meanly joke about Nicole. I also hated how she was Drew’s doormat, allowing him to roam the field while she patiently waited for him to see her potential. However, as the book went on, Avery started to grow on me. I loved how honest she was about her feelings, how she wasn't afraid to put anyone in their place, and how fiercely protective she was over her big sister. I was sad to see tragedy befall her near the end but loved seeing her put the work in to get back to herself. She was the perfect example of not settling and waiting until the man that is for you comes along. She was determined to be done with Cairo and Drew if they were unwilling to treat her right and I deeply admired her for that.
I knew from the beginning that I did not want her with Drew. I couldn't stand his ass! He would call her "his" and rub all over her and touch all on her in front of everyone while fucking other women behind closed doors. He'd claim she was his soulmate yet wanted more time to sow his oats before making her his priority. I clocked in the beginning that he was just selfish. He gave Avery just enough attention to keep her coming back while still perpetuating the lie that they were friends. Please. Friends didn't call each other babe, and hold hands, and grip each other's thighs under tables. The fact that he was going to try to continue to just string her along was ridiculous and I was happy she finally wizened up and realized Drew was going to do him while unfairly expecting her to wait for him to be ready for a relationship with her. I was glad in the end that he realized she'd moved on, but you could tell, he still kind of had feelings for her. I felt sad knowing he'd settled for Farren even though he knew he didn't love her like he should have.
Cairo, Cairo, Cairo. He is going down as one of my favorite book boyfriends. Even though he is absolutely a player when we first meet him, like Avery, I found him irresistible. From the moment they met, I hoped they'd be endgame. Where Drew was a boy, Cairo was a man. Early on, he helps Avery out of a sticky situation, showing he knew how to handle business. And I liked that when he realized he'd messed things up with her, he apologized not once, but twice and begged for her forgiveness and never looked back. He made her his and that was it for him. You could just see how much Cairo had changed. This is the guy who unashamedly had multiple women on roster and told Avery he wasn't ready to give that up. When he realizes she is the one for him, he immediately ends the sleeping around and only had eyes for her. And the thing about their relationship is they loved each other, but they also respected the hell out of each other. He and Avery were a team, and faced all problems together. When tragedy strikes Avery in the end, Cairo stays by her side the entire time and often tells her he loves her through her depression. To see that they'd started a family, he'd gotten his dream of being drafted, and she got her masters made me extremely happy.
The biggest critique I had of this book was the numerous grammatical errors. Wrong word use, paragraph formatting was off, question marks missing, misspelled words, etc. Because I was enjoying the book so much, it didn't take too much away from the story being told. However, I felt it wrong not to mention it in my review. I have been trying to be more generous with Indie authors when it comes to things like this, especially if it didn't detract from my enjoyment of the story.