This was a great, little, spooky collection that did have me pretty tense and creeped out. The endings felt rushed and some very abrupt and felt unfinished.
The book however could really use an editor or at least a proofread. It was riddled with errors which was distracting and made the book feel unfinished and time not taken to really put effort into a quality final draft before clicking publish.
I loved the stories, I just couldn’t get past how many errors there were. It really felt like this was a first draft that was hastily published. The story “Into the Abyss” for example had several spots were it said “Lisa friend” when referring to Lisa like it was written before character names were picked and when the author went back to add the names she didn’t bother deleting the word “friend.” In addition to word typos like this there were multiple spelling errors, punctuation errors, and missing words/incomplete sentences. Had this been proofread and these basic errors corrected, this would’ve easily been a higher rated collection. I hope the author puts more effort into polishing her final work in the next books in the series. I’ll likely read more in this series, I just hope they aren’t as full of errors as this one and detract from the overall quality.
Review per story:
Hat Man
2 stars
This was ok for me. It just felt disjointed and not well executed. It had great potential and the idea of a creepy, dark figure people can pass through and who can alter himself was great. I felt like there was a lot of info missing here and the story needed a little more development. Definitely creepy, but definitely could’ve been much creepier with a little more development on who or what hat man was. It ended very abruptly and didn’t make sense. The ending actually contradicts itself with the cop noting one version the friend disappears then two sentences later we get blood splatter, then the next sentence another version. I’m not sure what happened here.
Hayride
3 stars
This has a surprise twist ending I didn’t see coming, also a touch sad, also a bit confusing. I had to read it a couple times to make sure I got what the author was getting at. Interesting concept just not developed well or executed well. I’d have bailed long before the family did, actually I wouldn’t have taken a ride with a creepy guy in an orchard to begin with. It didn’t make sense why the farmer got so upset once the ending was revealed both with the family and his wife so that was an odd point. Overall it was a ok little twisted story, not so much creepy. Needed a little more story to eliminate confusion and issues with the turn it took.
A Good Samaritan
5 stars
This and the last story were by far my favorite. This one was full on creepy beginning to end and that rental car stressed me out. For once a character in a horror story was smart. Bonus points. It definitely gave me chills and was too realistic to something that could actually happen so the creepiness was on point. The open ending upped the scare even more. Normally I don’t like cliffhangers but in this case it worked to set an eerie tone. It’s a pretty common story and not original, but it was still well done and felt the most developed and completed.
Walking After Midnight
3.5 stars
This one had another twist ending that was an interesting surprise. While I felt something was off with the town and Joey and wondered if it would turn out like it did, I wasn’t completely sold on the idea so the ending was still a decent surprise. This one I also wish had more background after the resolution to explain some things and felt like a little more story couldn’t really taken this story to a new level. Another abrupt ending with some plot holes. If Teddy grew up here, how is he not aware of all this already? It doesn’t make sense he wouldn’t know anything about this cemetery or what goes on in the town since it’s his hometown. Also with a cliffhanger ending, it left me with a few questions of what came next and why, but not so much I didn’t feel like I had a solid stopping point. It did make me feel bad for that poor drifter.
Into the Abyss
1 star
This was my least favorite. It felt like it was trying too hard to be creepy and it was just too expected and dull. The only thing missing was someone jumping out yelling boo. It also didn’t make sense. I felt like it was trying to mash three or four ideas together and just fell flat for creepy or original. The ending didn’t make sense at all to me and just wasn’t well put together. This story probably had the most errors too. Felt very hastily done and like a very stereotypical Ouija Board story that was halfway thought out with little effort.
Trick & Treat
4 stars
This was my second favorite and easily could’ve been a 5 star story had it not been so full of errors and had some plot holes. It was the second most error riddled in the collection. This one was definitely creepy and I felt the panic the MC did easily. Creepy kids who creepily look at each other? Hard pass. Candy is out. Side note, a place where kids don’t trick or treat after 7 pm/sunset? Don’t ring the bell over and over if the lights are off. That actually sounds pretty good. Lights out mean candy’s out y’all. Get off my lawn. I digress. This story was great for scare factor and pace. It was genuinely a heart racing kinda story. While I knew those kids were bad news and I’d have been like oh heck no seeing old time costumes clearly not from my lifetime, the extent of their story was great. I also loved that the movie playing is Halloween with Laurie hiding in the closet when they show up. Great foreshadowing there. Well done. The plot holes I didn’t like were the husband acting like he didn’t believe her and how skeptical he was when by the end his secrets are revealed. It didn’t come across like he was acting, it came across like he truly didn’t believe her because nothing was wrong then suddenly a curveball ending that doesn’t quite fit is thrown in. Also, how the house was sold and previous owned just seemed to walk away script free. Minor things though that were annoying but tolerable for a good spooky story build up. While the ending was meh and disjointed, the build up made for a good intense, situation. The building tension after the kids come by definitely saved this story from being a meh one. My biggest question, why is the attic the only room that locks from the inside? And why does someone have an attic that locks from the inside? If I’d seen that when looking at a home to buy, that’d be a nope, creepy house vibes I’m out situation.
Overall besides the lack of editing and being full of errors, this was a good spooky to creepy collection. Very enjoyable story wise just hard to trudge through with the errors. Great short read and great campfire stories to keep on hand and read. Definitely has me interested in reading the read of the volumes in the series. Recommend for a quick creepy read.