The Alpha Pair

by ShiningOmicron

Stiles just couldn't take it anymore. His once peaceful town had turned into a mess of discord and chaos. Someone needed to do something, someone had to bring order to the steadily growing turmoil in Beacon Hills. Stiles is sad to say it might just be him. Slash. AU. Developing Sterek.

Genres: M M Romance, Fan Fiction

275 pages, ebook

First published August 14, 2012

Reviews

[Bitchie · Rating 3 out of 5]

This COULD have been great, but it felt more like Derek and Stiles got together to make the packs stronger, than out of real love. I finally kind of felt the love by the end, but I prefer more heart to my stories, and less of it feeling like a business transaction. It could also use a bit of an edit, but it's not terrible, for something unpublished.

I also felt like some things were way blown up, for instance, the author's idea of 375,000 werewolf related deaths in the last year. That's freaking way out of bounds, like way way out of boungs! Also Stiles' cutesy nicknames were a bit wearing (Jack-Jack for Jackson, and Baby for Boyd, simply because he's the newest wolf??), and I also thought the author took the whole Pack Mom thing a bit too far, with how often Stiles was cooking and mothering the pack. Usually I love that, I just felt it was overdone here.

Still, it wasn't terrible, and it kept me interested through the whole 100K+ words, so I still say good job to the author.

[Dena · Rating 3 out of 5]

2.5*

[Maya · Rating 3 out of 5]

2.5 Stars