4.5 Stars: Wow, really great story. By the end, I could feel the attachment I had made with the characters and that feeling of really caring about them.
Again, I love the uniqueness of the story. I love where it's going and I love the originality of all the characters.
Character development!! I'm glad that many characters have developed, but I'm most impressed with Rylie's character. From the first book, she has changed so much! I like how she doesn't like standing at the sidelines while everyone else is fighting and sometimes she actually goes out there and fights with her powers.
I love love love the moral of the story and the unity of light and dark faeries. It's very strong and powerful.
While I enjoyed reading this book, I also noticed some little writing problems. At some spots, I felt like there was too much telling instead of showing. Instead of straight up telling what happens, put some sensory details so we can see what she is doing. (Rylie touched the earth. Vs. Rylie's hands weaved into the smooth grass and met with the soft earth, sending waves of harmony through out her body). Also, I noticed too many sentences began with "I". This problem's bound to happen, but an easy fix. (I held Kallan's hand and smiled. Vs. Holding Kallan's hand, I smiled.) It makes it flow more and the sentences sound more interesting and not all the same. Another thing I saw was a little bit of wordiness. A good thing to do is go over the writing and read I aloud. Anywhere you stumble and have a hard time speaking the sentence, you know it should be reworded. Lastly, there were points where I felt rushed. If you want to move that quickly, that's okay, but that means a sentence that wraps up the scene and a smooth transition should be in place.
Overall, wonderful book! It was so magical like always and I can't wait until I can read the next book! Keep up the great work!
P.S. as I read, I've been getting inspired to write my book I'm working on :) I mean every book I read does that in some way, but with this book it kept happening again and again :) I would read and then something would spark an idea and would have to write it down.