Here's an excerpt of No Limits; if you like this, you will fall in love with the book! “Sit the fuck down,” she said, “Matter fact, lay the fuck down on the bed with your hands straight out where I can see them. With the gun to my head, she then began cuffing me to her bed posts. “I’ll be back. I’m about to go to my squad car and call this in, fucking pervert.” Once she left, I began twisting and turning, desperately trying to slide out of those cuffs, to no avail. I heard her coming back up the steps, so I played cool, deciding that I would have to talk my way out of this. As she neared the door, I said, “Listen, I’m incredibly sorry…” I stopped short when I noticed she was butt naked, just standing in the doorway like a stallion. Even though my life may have been on the line, I felt my dick rising. She crawled up my body seductively, gun still in hand. Tapping my shaft with the barrel of the pistol. “Who gave you permission to get hard?” she said, smiling while kissing on my neck. Working her way down to my collar bone, running her tongue along my chest to my navel. She stopped, holding my dick in both hands, “You really do have a pretty big dick.” Then she deep-throated it in one fell swoop. Pulling it out slowly, she giggled, “Oops, I’m getting a little ahead of myself. Let me slow down.” She sat back at the end of the bed, pulling her panties to the side and began rubbing her clit counter clock wise. “Do you like that?” she asked. “Hell yeah.” “I know you do. I’m looking at how hard I got your cock. You love this shit.” She began to pull her breasts out and lick them with her freakishly long tongue. “Wrap that tongue around my dick,” I said. “I see you’re a talker, aren’t you?” she said, standing up on the bed. “Since your mouth is so big, put it to good use and suck on my fat pussy,” she said, as she pulled her panties off. Grabbing the back of my head, she began to grind her pussy on my lips and tongue. Soft sensual moans emitted from her as she moistened. “Damn, your lips are so fucking soft,” she said. I began to tease her, flicking my tongue on her clit slowly, in the same pattern she was rubbing it. “Ohh shit baby, don’t tease me like that.” I kept right on teasing her. “I said, don’t tease me!” she said, grabbing the back of my head and fucking my face. “I’m about to cum!” she said, “Lick my clit real fast baby.” I began slowly, working my way up to full throttle, flicking my tongue as fast as I could. “MMMMMmmmm shit! I’m fucking cumming!” she said as she released, her waves splashing on my tongue and chest. “Let me get that up for you, baby,” she said, as she took that long tongue and began to lick my lips. “I bet you want to come on my face now, huh?” “I would like that.” “I bet you would. In due time baby, but for now, let me get that nut up out of that dick.” “Aren’t you going to un-cuff me?” I asked. “Why would I go and do a thing like that?” she said with a giggle, as she began to pour baby oil on my dick. “I’m going to save you fucking the living shit out of me for next time.” Her hands were so soft, not to mention, I looked huge in those small hands. “Mr. Marks, I can’t wait to have this thick, long dick in my pussy. I’m almost tempted to give you a sample on the first date,” she said with a laugh. She began to stroke it slowly with one hand as she stuck her long tongue in my mouth. I sucked on it a bit between kisses. She began to kiss and bite my neck softly. “Cum for me baby,” she whispered in my ear as she began to stroke it faster.
This was a good read. Not as steamy as many thought it would be, but it's very entertaining. In fact, i doubt that there's a man on this planet that would read this and not say "I want that life." Ross has practically put together every man's fantasy, a group of girls that would share him without the drama. That point alone, you know it's fiction, but a man can dream right.
The book was good but it needs a part two since Travs has a junior. There are a lot of unanswered questions for me about: what made Mike drop off Travs son, is Denise coming back to get her son, is she going to put Mike in jail for domestic violence, will Denise and Travs get back together and raise junior, and lastly, how do the other ladys feel about him having a baby with Denise. It needs a part 2. The book was an exciting, with vivid sexual detail, a page turner for the plot and the sex. Great imagination..Looking forward to Part 2, hopefully!
I decided to check out this "BBC Autobiography" because this fool spams reddit with photoshopped pictures of his genitals regions. But this novel by Thomas Ross, who is currently a Petty Officer in the United States Navy is complete garbage just like the same 5ish photoshopped pictures he recycles just to advertise his book on reddit. Incase anyone is wondering his username on reddit is MrBigDick83KiK. So if you are half retarded and horny to read some erotica fiction then this is for you. Tom RoSS TV Raw I'm out..
Pros-vivid imagery, relevant content for the genre, organized tale, between his "work" there was a tiny storyline Cons-no character or storyline development, (but you didn't read it for that), few SPAG errors, confusing initiation scene full review at kaybeesbookshelf
I loved your book! One piece of feedback...be careful with your apostrophe 's'es. There were numerous instances where you were clearly referring to more than one (s or es), but an apostrophe (possession) was used. Also, there were grammatical and typo errors, for example...was when it should have were.
I really liked the character Travis' personality. He wasn't cocky or conceited, and generally seemed to love pleasing women. I really enjoyed the book...it has a similar flavor to Nah'Sun Blaze's stories. Again, great job, but get a new editor.
I didn't get past the first chapter. There were grammar issues that threw me out of the story. The use of the n-word and the language for anatomy i.e. "member" also bothered me. I admit to not having the patience to continue reading to see if the story would develop; however, there was no story or world development in the first chapter and I just didn't have the wherewithal to give it a try beyond the first chapter. Fortunately, it was a free read through Amazon Prime, so no harm no foul!
This an erotica with everything you can think of and still has a story line. If you like full description then this book is perfect for you. I wasn't sure what I thought I was picking up, but I admit it was hard to put down when I started reading it.