As what I thought was the final book in this series comes to a close, I feel now is a good time to review the series as a whole rather than just this one instalment.
When it comes to this series, especially, I feel like there's no better way to do this, because it is very much a series where each book runs into the next. These weren't eight self-contained stories that, when combined, create a larger whole. Instead, they are a single story, sliced into segments and packaged as books. If your intention is to binge this series (as I am guilty of doing), this won't be a problem for you. However, if you take your time with your book series, maybe dip in and out between books, you might struggle with this series.
That said, I binged it and really enjoyed the ride.
Adrian's undead journal is an easy reading series that, on the surface, doesn't add much to the zombie genre as a whole. It's not trying to do anything unique here; it's just trying to tell a good zombie story. Sure, there is the trinity element of the story (which we'll talk more about later), but I think by and large there aren't going to be many surprises here for fans of zombie books.
The one area where I feel this book does set itself apart, though, is in its characters. The author has put a lot of work into creating a wide cast of unique and interesting characters that you genuinely become attached to. This is all the more impressive because, for the most part, they are all introduced to through Adrian, and we don't actually meet many of them, for lack of a better word. This attachment to these characters is what propels us through the story, as we want to ensure that each of them comes out okay.
I have long believed that great character work can overcome myriad flaws, and this series is a clear example of that. As much as I have thoroughly enjoyed these books, they are certainly not without flaws. I just haven't cared much because I have been so invested in these characters' story. However, they are worth mentioning because they are the reason why every story in this series (and therefore the series as a whole) is 4 stars instead of 5.
1. Pacing - This is by far the biggest issue in this series. There are long chunks of time where the series grinds to a halt as Adrian goes into the minute details of daily life that he has covered plenty of times before. Don't get me wrong, the writing style and our attachment to Adrian make these chapters readable enough, but the glacial plot progression is noticeable a lot in these books. This is never more the case than when we get a third-person POV chapter outside Adrian's journal that sets up an upcoming event, and the journal then goes back in time, so it takes ages for Adrian's diary to catch up to that event. When you know something is coming and the book takes its sweet time getting there for almost no reason, it can start to rub you the wrong way.
2. Adrian's vulgarity - I feel awkward even writing that as a flaw, as I am about as far away from a puritan as you might imagine. I have no problem with any swear words in any quantity, I can enjoy dirty jokes as much as the next guy, and I certainly laughed in the early books at Adrian's sense of humour. However, there's only so many times I can listen to a guy talk about masturbation, faecal matter, erections and a whole host of other distasteful topics before it impacts my enjoyment of the story. I'm a big believer that less is more when it comes to comedy. Keep reusing jokes, and they lose their comedic impact. Depending on your subject matter, an unfunny joke can be an uncomfortable thing indeed.
3. The Trinity - Considering how important this element was to driving big chunks of this story, it's a shame that this is easily the weakest element of these books. So much has been made about getting Kevin, Michelle and Adiran together that the fantasy fan in me who loves the whole chosen one trope was hoping for something monumental at the end, and... well... meh. The way this ended, you could comfortably have erased the whole trinity concept entirely, rested the entire series on Adrian as a single hero being tested, tweaked the ending ever so slightly, and you would have almost the same story. Michelle and Kevin really didn't need to be in this series, and that's a massive shame because I really enjoy their characters. I am probably wrong, but this series left me feeling that the whole trinity concept was an afterthought that the author never fully committed to. Getting them together drove so much of this series, but it felt like Mr Philbrook didn't have a plan for what to do with them when he had them together.
4. A lack of chemistry between Adrian and Michelle - This is an offshoot of the last point, maybe, but this is another area that needed a lot of work. The relationship between Adrian and Michelle is the one the story wants us to believe is most important, but it also feels the least natural. In many ways, this was inevitable. All the other relationships with Adrian had seven books to develop naturally before this one, whereas Michelle was thrust into Adrian's life in the last book, and their relationship had to develop at an unnatural pace to get the importance needed at the end of this book. That lack of chemistry was severely telling by the climax of this novel.
However, those flaws aside, I have thoroughly enjoyed this series. Ultimately, they are easy flaws to overlook because so much else in this series is so enjoyable. Going into this book, I thought it was the last one in the series, and if it ended here, I would call it a solid ending and be happy to re-read the series in the future. Now that I know there are more books to come, though, I find myself interested to see what comes next.
I do hope that the diary format has run its course going forward, though. As much as I have enjoyed it here in this series, the limitations of the format were obvious in the final few books, and I think it needs to be put to bed. Whatever the case, I am interested to see what comes next, but I'm also happy that this book was a solid exit point should I not like what follows, as I can always re-read this story and stop here if necessary.
Overall, Adrian's Undead Diary is a consistently high-quality series. If you enjoyed what you read to this point, then you should enjoy how book 8 wraps up the story so far.