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Allure
The Vegas Panthers win their first Super Bowl in the thirty-year history of the team. A few of the players head to the Caesar’s Palace hotel and casino, where they have booked luxury suites. As they drink and celebrate, they are unaware that this night will change some of their lives forever! Allure - Book 1 in The Quarterbacks SeriesAmerican football star Ethan Wales proposed to Pam Jones a few weeks before the Super Bowl. Tonight however, he has someone different on his mind as he celebrates the teams victorious win. Find out who, in Allure by Lisa Lovitz. The first hot and steamy short story in The Quarterbacks Series!
26 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 22, 2014
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October 18, 2014
As stated in my 'in progress update':
The Author clearly has English as a second language, and only has a slightest of grasps on American football. I have yet to figure out what 'the pitch' is, but from the context I'm guessing it means the field. Maybe? One of many strange word usages. Then there are the 'puffs'. Based on context, these must be the pom-poms the 'cheers' use. That's right, cheers - not cheerleaders.
There certainly wasn't enough steam to be considered erotic, and the adult content was more about the horniness of the main character.
Considering the entire plot was about a cheerleader, who is a hair stylist in her everyday life, who lusts after the quarterback (cliche much?) after they 'did it' in an alley - after which he immediately expressed regret and pissed her off when he left her hanging by proclaiming 'I love Pam'. Apparently Pam is now out of the picture.
It was an okay read, but memorable exclusively for the strange word usage. I'm really glad I picked this one up while it was free on Amazon and didn't pay for it. I won't be looking for additional stories by this author.
The Author clearly has English as a second language, and only has a slightest of grasps on American football. I have yet to figure out what 'the pitch' is, but from the context I'm guessing it means the field. Maybe? One of many strange word usages. Then there are the 'puffs'. Based on context, these must be the pom-poms the 'cheers' use. That's right, cheers - not cheerleaders.
There certainly wasn't enough steam to be considered erotic, and the adult content was more about the horniness of the main character.
Considering the entire plot was about a cheerleader, who is a hair stylist in her everyday life, who lusts after the quarterback (cliche much?) after they 'did it' in an alley - after which he immediately expressed regret and pissed her off when he left her hanging by proclaiming 'I love Pam'. Apparently Pam is now out of the picture.
It was an okay read, but memorable exclusively for the strange word usage. I'm really glad I picked this one up while it was free on Amazon and didn't pay for it. I won't be looking for additional stories by this author.
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