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Catching Hanif's Eye
A mystery. A romance. An ocular adventure.
Tom's a data analyst. It's not a passionate affair. Neither is his relationship with Mario, although Mario thinks it is. That's Tom's way. He makes things work, whether they work for him or not. With anyone else it would be called low expectations. Not Tom. His passion lies elsewhere. He's a secret writer.
The commitment is unusual and he keeps it to himself. Life has already dealt a few blows and he's reluctant to test its limits. Undemanding relationships. Unpublished books. A job that requires little thought. A bad attitude. These are the markers that keep him in place.
But when an accident leads him to discover he's losing his sight, life screeches to a halt. His writing, his career, his very independence are at stake. Time, once the future, is turning into the past.
Then a man appears. Beautiful yet damaged, Hanif brings light to Tom's darkness. The irony isn't lost on him, if it's irony at all. Just when he's about to give up on life, he finds a new reason to live. But things may not be as they seem. Lies can be told. Accidents can be arranged. Identities can be assumed.
Tom's story is a trip down a nebulous road. From an easy life to an erotic adventure, from a modest employee to a man on the run, he must see the truth while he still can. Ophthalmologists. Optometrists. Lovers. Friends. Some wish him well. Some don't.
Played out against a backdrop of political intrigue and haunted by ghosts from the past, is this story of love at first sight no more than a game of blind man's bluff?
Tom's a data analyst. It's not a passionate affair. Neither is his relationship with Mario, although Mario thinks it is. That's Tom's way. He makes things work, whether they work for him or not. With anyone else it would be called low expectations. Not Tom. His passion lies elsewhere. He's a secret writer.
The commitment is unusual and he keeps it to himself. Life has already dealt a few blows and he's reluctant to test its limits. Undemanding relationships. Unpublished books. A job that requires little thought. A bad attitude. These are the markers that keep him in place.
But when an accident leads him to discover he's losing his sight, life screeches to a halt. His writing, his career, his very independence are at stake. Time, once the future, is turning into the past.
Then a man appears. Beautiful yet damaged, Hanif brings light to Tom's darkness. The irony isn't lost on him, if it's irony at all. Just when he's about to give up on life, he finds a new reason to live. But things may not be as they seem. Lies can be told. Accidents can be arranged. Identities can be assumed.
Tom's story is a trip down a nebulous road. From an easy life to an erotic adventure, from a modest employee to a man on the run, he must see the truth while he still can. Ophthalmologists. Optometrists. Lovers. Friends. Some wish him well. Some don't.
Played out against a backdrop of political intrigue and haunted by ghosts from the past, is this story of love at first sight no more than a game of blind man's bluff?
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First published October 31, 2025
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Patrick Doyle
9 books181 followersWhen I was a kid reading opened all the doors. There was a world out there and I wanted in. When I stumbled across Jean Genet (my review of Our Lady of the Flowers pretty much sums up my childhood), it was like being beamed up to another world. I was too young to understand how 'indecent' it was. But I knew it was for me.
By the time I discovered writers like Armistead Maupin and Edmund White, I knew I'd arrived. I read and read until one day I wrote. It was like writing came to me. I feel that even now. Writing is like being possessed, happily possessed (well, most of the time).
I've written nine books: a series of loosely related mysteries (Jordi's Day, Tony's Dream, Beau's Dilemma) that follow the adventures of a stranger in a strange land, and the Pierre & Bill trilogy (Pierre & Bill: A Love Story, Pierre & Bill Now, Pierre Before Bill), that tells the story of an unusual couple along with their friends, lovers and kids. Along the way, I've written another mystery (Van Alone) and a fantasy/sc-fi (Seeing Sean). Both are stories about secrets, but not the same kind.
My latest, Catching Hanif's Eye, is a story about two very different men who find themselves trapped in a web of deceit where only trust can save them. Like all my books, it contains elements of romance, sometimes love, along with wit, sex and adventure.
My goal is to write stories about lives that, while entirely fictional, are rooted in some kind of reality. My characters are imperfect. They make mistakes. Some can be hard to like. Until we find out why. They have problems. They have pasts. Some hide it well and some don't. But they all have one thing in common. They want more out of life. Just like I did. Which brought me here.
I live in Montreal with my partner and not far away from the child we raised. I live in French, write in English, and work in both. I try to bring that experience to my novels. All my protagonists are faced with the challenge and excitement of loving someone from another world. I’ve been there. It’s worth the trip.
[Photo: me getting my just deserts]
By the time I discovered writers like Armistead Maupin and Edmund White, I knew I'd arrived. I read and read until one day I wrote. It was like writing came to me. I feel that even now. Writing is like being possessed, happily possessed (well, most of the time).
I've written nine books: a series of loosely related mysteries (Jordi's Day, Tony's Dream, Beau's Dilemma) that follow the adventures of a stranger in a strange land, and the Pierre & Bill trilogy (Pierre & Bill: A Love Story, Pierre & Bill Now, Pierre Before Bill), that tells the story of an unusual couple along with their friends, lovers and kids. Along the way, I've written another mystery (Van Alone) and a fantasy/sc-fi (Seeing Sean). Both are stories about secrets, but not the same kind.
My latest, Catching Hanif's Eye, is a story about two very different men who find themselves trapped in a web of deceit where only trust can save them. Like all my books, it contains elements of romance, sometimes love, along with wit, sex and adventure.
My goal is to write stories about lives that, while entirely fictional, are rooted in some kind of reality. My characters are imperfect. They make mistakes. Some can be hard to like. Until we find out why. They have problems. They have pasts. Some hide it well and some don't. But they all have one thing in common. They want more out of life. Just like I did. Which brought me here.
I live in Montreal with my partner and not far away from the child we raised. I live in French, write in English, and work in both. I try to bring that experience to my novels. All my protagonists are faced with the challenge and excitement of loving someone from another world. I’ve been there. It’s worth the trip.
[Photo: me getting my just deserts]
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September 29, 2025
My first introduction to Patrick Doyle was the wonderful ‘Pierre & Bill: A Love Story’, which was quirky, sexy, and featured one of the cutest, and strangest, gay couples outside of 28 Barbary Lane.
Doyle has a knack for portraying both the messy inner and outer lives of his characters on the page; while we do not necessarily read to emulate our everyday humdrum lives, we do like to read about complicated characters grappling with the same shit as we do. It makes us feel part of the ‘chosen family’ of gay literature, as it were.
The sequel to ‘Pierre & Bill’ fell off my radar, and I subsequently discovered there is a third novel to add to my teetering ‘to read’ pile. I will definitely be reading them after Doyle’s latest, ‘Catching Hanif’s Eye’, which has the surprising side-effect of reminding us first-language English speakers how many words, sayings, and phrases are related to sight and seeing. Yes, many of these are puns, but Doyle deftly weaves them into his narrative.
[It probably did not help that I finished this book after watching the finale of ‘Alien: Earth’, in which Trypanohyncha Ocellus (T. Ocellus), or octopus eyeball creature, plays such an, er, watchful role.]
I was surprised at how Tom’s initial discovery of his eye trouble triggered me. I thought about it, and realised that as an editor and writer, my eyeballs are my livelihood. Having anything happen to my sight is probably one of my worst nightmares.
Doyle taps into this primal fear by introducing Tom to the one-eyed Hanif at the hospital, who wears a rakish patch and is all the sexier for his disability. It is a difficult balance to make such a character appear normal and give insight (sorry) into Hanif as a living, breathing human being.
One of the most heart-wrenching scenes of the book is when Hanif takes off his eye patch in front of Tom for the first time, rendering him even more vulnerable than if he were completely naked. Which he probably was (there is a lot of sex in the book).
Complicating the ‘eye of the beholder’ theme is the fact that Hanif is, technically, an illegal immigrant. Being gay as well makes him doubly vulnerable and even more marginalised in an America that is careering towards right-wing fascism as if it were a roller derby.
The world is so fractured these days that it is hard for writers to remain ahead of the geopolitical curve, and I am sure Doyle began this book with little idea how incendiary the idea of a gay immigrant character is in our current milieu.
We’ve all had those dodgy relationships or friendships where we wonder if the reciprocating party is being entirely truthful or honest, especially if they are of a different race or nationality (and how less complicated our lives might be otherwise if they just ‘disappeared’). We all want our comfort zones, our liberties, and our consumer goods.
But sometimes we are compelled to take a stand.
So, this is the love story of Tom and Hanif, and how the former must negotiate his initial attraction, tempered by (societally conditioned) distrust that the latter is non-American. The situation is complicated by Tom’s existing boyfriend Mario, who comes across as an alarming combination of Harvey Fierstein and Nathan Lane as the Nanny State.
This is a tale of an accidental relationship, where two people are thrown together by circumstance, and it disrupts both their lives. And, ultimately, their respective worldviews: Tom, from the lens (sorry) of American white male privilege, and Hanif, from the stance of an illegal Iranian immigrant.
If this sounds all too serious, Doyle has you covered: this is like that Mission: Impossible movie with Tom Cruise and Henry Cavill. Except the gay version where they hide away in a cabin and fuck themselves silly.
Tom’s data analysis job is ‘sensitive’, and of course it is Mario’s snide remark that he will ‘sell’ Tom to the highest bidder simply not to be deported and granted citizenship. Having said that, the way America is (de)progressing right now, it might resemble Iran more than we ever imagined pretty soon.
It takes cajones to forego a successful formula like ‘Pierre & Bill’ and say, fuck it, let me try something completely leftfield. In this case, it definitely works. I read this intermittently between exhaustive bouts of university assignment marking. Doyle sucks you into his world (sex metaphors are as prevalent as eye ones), and the reader just buys into the delightful romp of it all.
But, like any writer worth his salt, Doyle’s ultimate message about tolerance, acceptance, and the sheer power of love is a beacon of light in what is a very, very dark world at the moment.
Doyle has a knack for portraying both the messy inner and outer lives of his characters on the page; while we do not necessarily read to emulate our everyday humdrum lives, we do like to read about complicated characters grappling with the same shit as we do. It makes us feel part of the ‘chosen family’ of gay literature, as it were.
The sequel to ‘Pierre & Bill’ fell off my radar, and I subsequently discovered there is a third novel to add to my teetering ‘to read’ pile. I will definitely be reading them after Doyle’s latest, ‘Catching Hanif’s Eye’, which has the surprising side-effect of reminding us first-language English speakers how many words, sayings, and phrases are related to sight and seeing. Yes, many of these are puns, but Doyle deftly weaves them into his narrative.
[It probably did not help that I finished this book after watching the finale of ‘Alien: Earth’, in which Trypanohyncha Ocellus (T. Ocellus), or octopus eyeball creature, plays such an, er, watchful role.]
I was surprised at how Tom’s initial discovery of his eye trouble triggered me. I thought about it, and realised that as an editor and writer, my eyeballs are my livelihood. Having anything happen to my sight is probably one of my worst nightmares.
Doyle taps into this primal fear by introducing Tom to the one-eyed Hanif at the hospital, who wears a rakish patch and is all the sexier for his disability. It is a difficult balance to make such a character appear normal and give insight (sorry) into Hanif as a living, breathing human being.
One of the most heart-wrenching scenes of the book is when Hanif takes off his eye patch in front of Tom for the first time, rendering him even more vulnerable than if he were completely naked. Which he probably was (there is a lot of sex in the book).
Complicating the ‘eye of the beholder’ theme is the fact that Hanif is, technically, an illegal immigrant. Being gay as well makes him doubly vulnerable and even more marginalised in an America that is careering towards right-wing fascism as if it were a roller derby.
The world is so fractured these days that it is hard for writers to remain ahead of the geopolitical curve, and I am sure Doyle began this book with little idea how incendiary the idea of a gay immigrant character is in our current milieu.
We’ve all had those dodgy relationships or friendships where we wonder if the reciprocating party is being entirely truthful or honest, especially if they are of a different race or nationality (and how less complicated our lives might be otherwise if they just ‘disappeared’). We all want our comfort zones, our liberties, and our consumer goods.
But sometimes we are compelled to take a stand.
So, this is the love story of Tom and Hanif, and how the former must negotiate his initial attraction, tempered by (societally conditioned) distrust that the latter is non-American. The situation is complicated by Tom’s existing boyfriend Mario, who comes across as an alarming combination of Harvey Fierstein and Nathan Lane as the Nanny State.
This is a tale of an accidental relationship, where two people are thrown together by circumstance, and it disrupts both their lives. And, ultimately, their respective worldviews: Tom, from the lens (sorry) of American white male privilege, and Hanif, from the stance of an illegal Iranian immigrant.
If this sounds all too serious, Doyle has you covered: this is like that Mission: Impossible movie with Tom Cruise and Henry Cavill. Except the gay version where they hide away in a cabin and fuck themselves silly.
Tom’s data analysis job is ‘sensitive’, and of course it is Mario’s snide remark that he will ‘sell’ Tom to the highest bidder simply not to be deported and granted citizenship. Having said that, the way America is (de)progressing right now, it might resemble Iran more than we ever imagined pretty soon.
It takes cajones to forego a successful formula like ‘Pierre & Bill’ and say, fuck it, let me try something completely leftfield. In this case, it definitely works. I read this intermittently between exhaustive bouts of university assignment marking. Doyle sucks you into his world (sex metaphors are as prevalent as eye ones), and the reader just buys into the delightful romp of it all.
But, like any writer worth his salt, Doyle’s ultimate message about tolerance, acceptance, and the sheer power of love is a beacon of light in what is a very, very dark world at the moment.
November 11, 2025
Patrick Doyle’s Catching Hanif’s Eye is, well, kind of a wild ride. It’s part mystery, part romance, and part full-blown espionage thriller—with a surprisingly intimate focus on eyesight. That sounds odd, I know, but it works. The story kicks off with Tom Pryszlak, a data analyst who moonlights as a novelist, getting hit with a double whammy: a glaucoma diagnosis that threatens his vision and a sudden, magnetic connection with Hanif Tavassoli—a man who wears a black eyepatch and carries more secrets than he lets on.
Tom initially seems to live in a world of eye drops and immaculate waiting rooms. He’s in a downward spiral, caught between the excitement of falling in love with someone new and the fear of going blind. It’s chaotic, and the emotional turbulence seems genuine. The story then takes a detour. Tom starts to suspect that the medical treatment might be a front. Not just incompetence or bad luck, but something orchestrated. The Institute he works for? Possibly involved. Foreign intelligence? Maybe. The idea that the eye drops are sedatives prepping him for a covert surgery to implant a camera and steal his work—it’s far-fetched, sure, but the novel leans into that paranoia in a way that’s oddly convincing. Even Hanif, who initially shows up as a romantic interest, admits he was sent to spy on Tom. That moment stings.
From there, the plot shifts gears fast. Tom and Hanif go on the run, holing up in Tom’s late father’s cabin, which turns out to be less a rustic getaway and more a Cold War-era safe house. There’s something almost theatrical about the setting: hidden compartments, remote woods, and a creeping sense that nothing is as it seems. It’s here that their relationship starts to solidify, though not without tension. Trust doesn’t come easy when betrayal is baked into the premise.
The mood of the book evolves with the plot. First, it starts as a quiet dread over losing sight. Then it morphs into full-blown paranoia, then cautious intimacy, and finally, a fragile hope. It’s not always smooth, but that unevenness may actually be the point. Relationships forged under pressure rarely follow clean arcs.
In the end, Catching Hanif’s Eye is not merely a story that mixes genres. It’s a story about seeing clearly, both literally and metaphorically. It’s a story about choosing connection over isolation, even when the cost is high. It’s impressive, it’s bold, emotionally resonant, and weirdly tender. I’ve read a few of Doyle’s books, but this one is my most favorite.
The full review is on my blog:
https://rainbowreviewss.wordpress.com/tag/patrick-doyle/
Tom initially seems to live in a world of eye drops and immaculate waiting rooms. He’s in a downward spiral, caught between the excitement of falling in love with someone new and the fear of going blind. It’s chaotic, and the emotional turbulence seems genuine. The story then takes a detour. Tom starts to suspect that the medical treatment might be a front. Not just incompetence or bad luck, but something orchestrated. The Institute he works for? Possibly involved. Foreign intelligence? Maybe. The idea that the eye drops are sedatives prepping him for a covert surgery to implant a camera and steal his work—it’s far-fetched, sure, but the novel leans into that paranoia in a way that’s oddly convincing. Even Hanif, who initially shows up as a romantic interest, admits he was sent to spy on Tom. That moment stings.
From there, the plot shifts gears fast. Tom and Hanif go on the run, holing up in Tom’s late father’s cabin, which turns out to be less a rustic getaway and more a Cold War-era safe house. There’s something almost theatrical about the setting: hidden compartments, remote woods, and a creeping sense that nothing is as it seems. It’s here that their relationship starts to solidify, though not without tension. Trust doesn’t come easy when betrayal is baked into the premise.
The mood of the book evolves with the plot. First, it starts as a quiet dread over losing sight. Then it morphs into full-blown paranoia, then cautious intimacy, and finally, a fragile hope. It’s not always smooth, but that unevenness may actually be the point. Relationships forged under pressure rarely follow clean arcs.
In the end, Catching Hanif’s Eye is not merely a story that mixes genres. It’s a story about seeing clearly, both literally and metaphorically. It’s a story about choosing connection over isolation, even when the cost is high. It’s impressive, it’s bold, emotionally resonant, and weirdly tender. I’ve read a few of Doyle’s books, but this one is my most favorite.
The full review is on my blog:
https://rainbowreviewss.wordpress.com/tag/patrick-doyle/
August 20, 2025
I’ve been contacted by the author, Patrick to see if I’m interested in reading an ARC of his new book, Catching Hanif's Eye.
(This review is about the ARC I received, and some details may change until the official release.)
The blurb is vague enough, (for a reason) and I got intrigued.
The story follows our main character, Tom, from 3rd person POV.
Tom’s average life suddenly gets shaken up by an accident, or rather, an unfortunate event, that reveals serious news; He is losing his sight.
As one can imagine, such drastic news makes one reevaluate life, and decisions. Things that he thought were granted and easy, seem not so certain anymore. Things he let stagnate, - like his relationship with Mario, - because he thought he has all the time in the world now got new light, that makes him realize he wants authority, be bold, and taste something exciting while he still has his vision.
Tom meets Hanif at the doctor during one of his appointments. Ever since Tom learned about his condition, he’s been alone with his fears of the future. When meeting Hanif, who also went through similar struggles, there’s an instant connection.
Not gonna lie, I had a hard time relating or understanding Tom at the beginning. There was a sudden relationship big bang both with Hanif, and Mario.
Mario is not necessarily villainized, (despite having some marginalized views) and their relationship is not stained. Tom seemed to be uninterested and neutral. I like when books end an existing relationship without making the other party look awful. Sometimes relationships just don’t work, people grow apart, interests and goals change. I think there aren’t a lot of books representing just a simple growing apart, so I was glad to see a simple phasing out here.
However, I was still left wondering, and was thirsty for more details; I wanted to read and learn more about their history. How things started, and how things were before Tom reached a breaking point.
When it came to Hanif, I had the same impression; I was craving for more details to be able to believe the connection. I barely find insta-love believable, and now’s not an exception either.
Despite the instant connection, I was glad to see that there was still some relationship development focused on trust.
On a side note, I found the balance between the open and closed door romance refreshing. The door was left open just enough, without being too explicit.
Besides the initial relationship building, I had no major issues with the book or the characters. I did have some minor issues on some little details, that I found questionable following my own logic, but I do tend to get lost in the details sometimes.
Issues aside, I think this was a very well written, entertaining story. I definitely didn’t know what to expect, but I didn’t expect this. While it definitely stepped over my line of fiction and reality, it didn’t go too far, and mostly stayed solid inside my boundary. There were a good amount of twists, action, and drama. I totally felt the high stakes. In general, I find books often resolving issues easily or quickly. Of course we know unconsciously that the main character will make it at the end, (and I prefer it that way) but I like when a book makes me break out in sweat from worry, or makes me uncomfortable; will the main character suffer physically, will they get beaten up, loose a limb, or break down mentally? Will they have to challenge their own limits and beliefs? I think this was achieved here on both ends, and it had the right amount of complications.
(This review is about the ARC I received, and some details may change until the official release.)
The blurb is vague enough, (for a reason) and I got intrigued.
The story follows our main character, Tom, from 3rd person POV.
Tom’s average life suddenly gets shaken up by an accident, or rather, an unfortunate event, that reveals serious news; He is losing his sight.
As one can imagine, such drastic news makes one reevaluate life, and decisions. Things that he thought were granted and easy, seem not so certain anymore. Things he let stagnate, - like his relationship with Mario, - because he thought he has all the time in the world now got new light, that makes him realize he wants authority, be bold, and taste something exciting while he still has his vision.
Tom meets Hanif at the doctor during one of his appointments. Ever since Tom learned about his condition, he’s been alone with his fears of the future. When meeting Hanif, who also went through similar struggles, there’s an instant connection.
Not gonna lie, I had a hard time relating or understanding Tom at the beginning. There was a sudden relationship big bang both with Hanif, and Mario.
Mario is not necessarily villainized, (despite having some marginalized views) and their relationship is not stained. Tom seemed to be uninterested and neutral. I like when books end an existing relationship without making the other party look awful. Sometimes relationships just don’t work, people grow apart, interests and goals change. I think there aren’t a lot of books representing just a simple growing apart, so I was glad to see a simple phasing out here.
However, I was still left wondering, and was thirsty for more details; I wanted to read and learn more about their history. How things started, and how things were before Tom reached a breaking point.
When it came to Hanif, I had the same impression; I was craving for more details to be able to believe the connection. I barely find insta-love believable, and now’s not an exception either.
Despite the instant connection, I was glad to see that there was still some relationship development focused on trust.
On a side note, I found the balance between the open and closed door romance refreshing. The door was left open just enough, without being too explicit.
Besides the initial relationship building, I had no major issues with the book or the characters. I did have some minor issues on some little details, that I found questionable following my own logic, but I do tend to get lost in the details sometimes.
Issues aside, I think this was a very well written, entertaining story. I definitely didn’t know what to expect, but I didn’t expect this. While it definitely stepped over my line of fiction and reality, it didn’t go too far, and mostly stayed solid inside my boundary. There were a good amount of twists, action, and drama. I totally felt the high stakes. In general, I find books often resolving issues easily or quickly. Of course we know unconsciously that the main character will make it at the end, (and I prefer it that way) but I like when a book makes me break out in sweat from worry, or makes me uncomfortable; will the main character suffer physically, will they get beaten up, loose a limb, or break down mentally? Will they have to challenge their own limits and beliefs? I think this was achieved here on both ends, and it had the right amount of complications.
December 12, 2025
This wasn’t quite up there with the Pierre & Bill books but the story kept me going right to the end. Why not 5 stars, it didn’t li get in my memory once I finished it. I enjoyed it while reading it then just kind of forgot about it.
August 9, 2025
3,5 зірки.
Почну з того, що я взагалі не фанат шпигунських історій та романів про таємні організації та теорії змов, але ця книжка змогла мені сподобатися. Ну, мені точно сподобалися перші 75% книги.
В цьому романі розповідається про Тома, який вже багато років зустрічається з Маріо. У Тома з'явилися серйозні проблеми з зором. В клініці головний герой зустрічає хлопця Ханіфа, який одразу сподобався Тому. Їх стосунки дуже швидко переростають з просто знайомства в щось більше і інтимніше.
З плюсів цієї книжки можу виділити мову, якою це написано. Автор дуже влучно підбирає слова та метафори. Він зміг причарувати своїм стилем. Також мені дуже сильно сподобалися описи стосунків Тома та Ханіфа. Вони були дуже чуттєвими та пристрасними, хоча в автора і є невеличкі проблеми в описі хтивих сцен.
Всі мінуси зосередилися в останніх 25% книги.
Перше, що не сподобалося, це сварка головних героїв. Я взагалі не побачив хоч якогось сенсу в ній. Автор наче прочитав купу любовних романів та вирішив: "У всіх є сцена сварки головних героїв під кінець книги. Значить, і в мене повинна бути така сцена." Але в ній не було жодного сенсу.
Наступне, що не сподобалося та розчарувало в книзі, були росіяни. Звичайно, в шпигунському романі повинен бути хоч один російський Іван Іванов. Без цього ніяк. Але з кожним новим словом "росіянин" моя зацікавленість в історії різко падала. Останні глави вже читав через абзаци, просто щоб дочитати та забути про цю книжку.
В цілому історія непогана. Можу рекомендувати тим, хто хоче спробувати почитати шпигунські романи з геями.
Почну з того, що я взагалі не фанат шпигунських історій та романів про таємні організації та теорії змов, але ця книжка змогла мені сподобатися. Ну, мені точно сподобалися перші 75% книги.
В цьому романі розповідається про Тома, який вже багато років зустрічається з Маріо. У Тома з'явилися серйозні проблеми з зором. В клініці головний герой зустрічає хлопця Ханіфа, який одразу сподобався Тому. Їх стосунки дуже швидко переростають з просто знайомства в щось більше і інтимніше.
З плюсів цієї книжки можу виділити мову, якою це написано. Автор дуже влучно підбирає слова та метафори. Він зміг причарувати своїм стилем. Також мені дуже сильно сподобалися описи стосунків Тома та Ханіфа. Вони були дуже чуттєвими та пристрасними, хоча в автора і є невеличкі проблеми в описі хтивих сцен.
Всі мінуси зосередилися в останніх 25% книги.
Перше, що не сподобалося, це сварка головних героїв. Я взагалі не побачив хоч якогось сенсу в ній. Автор наче прочитав купу любовних романів та вирішив: "У всіх є сцена сварки головних героїв під кінець книги. Значить, і в мене повинна бути така сцена." Але в ній не було жодного сенсу.
Наступне, що не сподобалося та розчарувало в книзі, були росіяни. Звичайно, в шпигунському романі повинен бути хоч один російський Іван Іванов. Без цього ніяк. Але з кожним новим словом "росіянин" моя зацікавленість в історії різко падала. Останні глави вже читав через абзаци, просто щоб дочитати та забути про цю книжку.
В цілому історія непогана. Можу рекомендувати тим, хто хоче спробувати почитати шпигунські романи з геями.
September 15, 2025
** This review is based on an ARC of Catching Hanif's Eye by Patrick Doyle due to be publicly released 31st of Oct 2025.
I would like to thank the author for the opportunity to read his new book early. **
Tom works for the Institute, in a data analytics role his dad helped him get. When out of nowhere Tom had an accident which led him to the optometrist in hospital only to be told his accident has lead them to find a problem with his eye.
It was at a regular follow up where he meets Hanif, who also was treated at this hospital for he had unfortunately lost his eye when he was younger.
Tom is also at his tether with ‘hanger on’ Mario, who he has been on and off again loosely dating since Tom lost his father.
But Tom meeting Hanif has had him rethink his life, with a looming surgery to fix his eye, he meets up with Hanif and they seem to hit it off until Hanif goes missing.
It’s here in the story when it takes many twists and turns and huge revelations are slowly revealed.
I won’t continue otherwise I will need to turn on Spoiler Alerts, but will explain why I loved this story.
Gay romantic lustful love story turn thriller comes to mind.
I really enjoyed the woven twists and how all the questions lead you to answers you never thought could explain situations.
To mix a gay romance story with that of mysterious thriller elements was genius and something I haven’t read before.
Do be aware that Tom and Hanif like many lovers can’t keep their hands off each other and are often consuming each other, which was fun to read but did go a little bit too far, however I put that down to that ‘lustful’ period in one’s New Romantic love.
I’ve read Patrick’s Pierre and Bill story too (yet to read all of them but will be soon) and really liked the way he writes about his characters and their unique personalities, it’s easy reading and thought provoking.
The only thing I would say that’s missing (and not enough to reduce my rating) would be locale information is often missing, what I mean by that is where is the story situated, what city, what country etc
In Catching Hanif’s Eye there is talk about Russia and Iran etc but nothing about the town or lake location (or fake name used) this makes me disconnect slightly from the story as I’m always second guessing on where it is, I guess America, I’m an inquisitive kind of reader hehe.
Other than that, I throughly enjoyed this story and am hopeful for a follow up to continue Tom and Hanif’s journeys.
I would like to thank the author for the opportunity to read his new book early. **
Tom works for the Institute, in a data analytics role his dad helped him get. When out of nowhere Tom had an accident which led him to the optometrist in hospital only to be told his accident has lead them to find a problem with his eye.
It was at a regular follow up where he meets Hanif, who also was treated at this hospital for he had unfortunately lost his eye when he was younger.
Tom is also at his tether with ‘hanger on’ Mario, who he has been on and off again loosely dating since Tom lost his father.
But Tom meeting Hanif has had him rethink his life, with a looming surgery to fix his eye, he meets up with Hanif and they seem to hit it off until Hanif goes missing.
It’s here in the story when it takes many twists and turns and huge revelations are slowly revealed.
I won’t continue otherwise I will need to turn on Spoiler Alerts, but will explain why I loved this story.
Gay romantic lustful love story turn thriller comes to mind.
I really enjoyed the woven twists and how all the questions lead you to answers you never thought could explain situations.
To mix a gay romance story with that of mysterious thriller elements was genius and something I haven’t read before.
Do be aware that Tom and Hanif like many lovers can’t keep their hands off each other and are often consuming each other, which was fun to read but did go a little bit too far, however I put that down to that ‘lustful’ period in one’s New Romantic love.
I’ve read Patrick’s Pierre and Bill story too (yet to read all of them but will be soon) and really liked the way he writes about his characters and their unique personalities, it’s easy reading and thought provoking.
The only thing I would say that’s missing (and not enough to reduce my rating) would be locale information is often missing, what I mean by that is where is the story situated, what city, what country etc
In Catching Hanif’s Eye there is talk about Russia and Iran etc but nothing about the town or lake location (or fake name used) this makes me disconnect slightly from the story as I’m always second guessing on where it is, I guess America, I’m an inquisitive kind of reader hehe.
Other than that, I throughly enjoyed this story and am hopeful for a follow up to continue Tom and Hanif’s journeys.
October 11, 2025
A story about espionage and intrigue, this story took a little while to get going, but once it did, it was thrilling and kept you questioning ‘what the hell is going on!’
It took me a few chapters to get used to the writing style. I haven’t read anything by this author before. Everything happens very quickly, to the point I felt like I’d come in the middle of a story. But once I got a few chapters, I found it enjoyable, and the constant new questions popping up kept me engrossed. Tom’s sudden eye troubles felt suspicious from the start, and Hanif seemed mysterious, but he spiked my curiosity. The drama with Mario and the uncertainty surrounding Tom’s dad’s death all culminated into a very entertaining mystery story.
For those who like it in their stories, there is no smut in this one. Tom and Hanif are insatiable, but it’s mostly off-page. I don’t think it matters; you can still feel their connection. It takes a while for the trust to be built between them, but the suspicion just made their story more realistic.
It wasn’t what I was expecting when I read the blurb, but I’m glad I got to read it.
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I received an ARC from GRR, and this is my honest review.
It took me a few chapters to get used to the writing style. I haven’t read anything by this author before. Everything happens very quickly, to the point I felt like I’d come in the middle of a story. But once I got a few chapters, I found it enjoyable, and the constant new questions popping up kept me engrossed. Tom’s sudden eye troubles felt suspicious from the start, and Hanif seemed mysterious, but he spiked my curiosity. The drama with Mario and the uncertainty surrounding Tom’s dad’s death all culminated into a very entertaining mystery story.
For those who like it in their stories, there is no smut in this one. Tom and Hanif are insatiable, but it’s mostly off-page. I don’t think it matters; you can still feel their connection. It takes a while for the trust to be built between them, but the suspicion just made their story more realistic.
It wasn’t what I was expecting when I read the blurb, but I’m glad I got to read it.
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I received an ARC from GRR, and this is my honest review.
November 1, 2025
Review for Catching Hanif's Eye by Patrick Doyle
What can I say? I was given the chance to review Catching Hanif's Eye by Patrick Doyle and said, "Why not? This book sounds good. Oh, yes, it was good, and I'm happy I did grab it. I loved the romantic mystery story, with great world-building that enhanced the narrative. I loved Mario & Tom's story. I loved that Tom is a writer. Tom's life just hasn't been easy for a while now, so when Mario comes into his life, it changes all he had told himself about what life could be. After reading this book, I want more by Patrick Doyle.
Nicole Harvey
What can I say? I was given the chance to review Catching Hanif's Eye by Patrick Doyle and said, "Why not? This book sounds good. Oh, yes, it was good, and I'm happy I did grab it. I loved the romantic mystery story, with great world-building that enhanced the narrative. I loved Mario & Tom's story. I loved that Tom is a writer. Tom's life just hasn't been easy for a while now, so when Mario comes into his life, it changes all he had told himself about what life could be. After reading this book, I want more by Patrick Doyle.
Nicole Harvey
October 28, 2025
Thomas “Tom” Pryszlak at thrithy-three has been writing stories for a long time. He’s authored seventeen books and completed three and sent them on to publishers, but he doesn’t have too much success. Writing gave meaning to his life. To be safe he already had a pen name. Plus an pen name would be more interesting than his real name. Just to find some peace and fix a story-line he goes to the park. He finds a spot to close his eyes and relax but he was disturbed by someone jumping over him. He discovers his glasses, that he had set on the ground were damaged. Now he’s made an optometrist appointment to get his glasses replaced. But it leads to bad news. His deceased father, Martin, had gotten Tom a job at the Marathon Institute. A think tank for policy development, advocacy, social policy and more. Tom worked on bottom-of-the-line spread sheets. He’s found it difficult lately and had to make the font a few sizes bigger. Now he’s facing his worst fear, glaucoma, eye surgery and going blind.
As he struggles just to get into the hospital for his appointment he notices a man with an “eye patch.” It’s shocking and disturbing to Tom as this man is checking him out with interest. By the time Tom get’s into the building the man is already gone. Why was he worried about “eye-patch” when his life was about to change with his eye issues. Canes, wheelchairs, waiting rooms and people, Tom was done in an hour with his stressful appointment at the ophthalmologist. He is overwhelmed with questions still unanswered, mechanical arms, cameras, scopes and other devices. He still worries about insurance, his job and the amount of prescriptions he would need.
Tom has an pushy boyfriend, Mario and he calls Tom. Tom’s not in the mood and doesn’t want to be a burden. He just needed time to himself. He decided to take himself to the bench to wait for the bus and dozed off. He was awakened by a voice and there stood “eye-patch”. They both state they recognize each other from the hospital. As they discuss the eye appointment, “eye patch” tries to give Tom positive feedback. Just as they go their separate ways, Tom introduces himself to Hanif.
Mario and Tom had known each other for some time and hit it off when they first met. They don’t live together, but Mario comes to Tom’s and cooks for him. At times it leads to physical moments. Tom doesn’t like that Mario continues to call him Tommy. Now, Tom feels Mario is just filling a void. When they sit down to eat, the discussion of Tom’s appointments and him meeting Hanif becomes an issue that Mario won’t drop. All that Tom is dealing with something starts to change. All this adds to the chaos of Tom’s life.
Eventually, Tom and Hanif meet up again and it leads to Tom inviting Hanif over to his apartment. Mario walks in on them and Mario throws a tantrum. With all the commotion Hanif leaves the apartment. Mario keeps putting ridiculous ideas in Tom’s head about Hanif. Tom finally tells Mario it’s over. Tom hadn’t seen or heard from Hanif for two months but he walked daily by the hospital in hopes he would see him. Then one day he was approached by two men, detectives, asking about Hanif Tavassoli. Two days later in the park Tom is lured by a whistle. He finds a disheveled Hanif. They sneak to Tom’s where Hanif reveals so much information. But it’s still not safe for Hanif or Tom. Even Tom’s not sure to trust Hanif but there’s something about Hanif and Tom is willing to try. They go on the run to a deserted, Port Reilly and stay at a cabin that his Tom’s father built. Where more secrets remain to be revealed.
Patrick Doyle creates a novel of secrets, danger and espionage with “Catching Hanifs Eye”. First of all, it’s very weird as Tom Pryszlak goes to an eye appointment that becomes more than just having glasses replaced. Tom becomes overwhelmed with fears of going in for eye surgery or being blind. The one thing he cares about is his writing and maybe one day getting a book published. But he feels as though he is invisible to others. He doesn’t go outside the lines and the loneliness is taken a toll. He remembers his father and the good relationship that they shared with each other.
Hanif Tavassoli is a man filled with secrets. His life is a dangerous one, if he was ever found to be gay. His father want’s him to return to Teheran and be a banker but that’s not what Hanif wishes. What he and Tom find is a relationship, that becomes wonderfully intimate. But it’s not without doubts especially for Tom. Even though Hanif is a damaged man, he brings new life to Tom.
I highly recommend “Catching Hanifs Eye” it’s fast paced and every corner that Tom and Hanif turn is filled with: danger, suspense, intrigue, heartbreak and doubt.
Since 2020, I’ve read at least seven books written by Patrick Doyle and I have to say “Catching Hanif’s Eye” is outstanding for a single novel. He took his writing outside of the box when he wrote the “Bill and Pierre Trilogy” as all other stories are not a series. His writing and imagination has just kept improving and it’s been wonderful to see his stories grow. As all the main characters in his stories Tom and Hanif are now a favorite. I have to say, the intimate scenes between Tom and Hanif are written perfectly with emotion, and a insatiable love that’s unforgettable. The trust comes in a moving scene when Hanif removes his eye patch and reveals his true self to Tom. The author keeps the story a slight eerie with “Port Reilly” as it’s an abandoned town, where Tom and Hanif escape too. His other novels take readers to places around the world. As for me, I am a big fan of Patrick Doyle and I would like to see more novels by him. But it was a pleasure to read “Catching Hanif’s Eye”, and I’ll wait patiently for the next great story.
As he struggles just to get into the hospital for his appointment he notices a man with an “eye patch.” It’s shocking and disturbing to Tom as this man is checking him out with interest. By the time Tom get’s into the building the man is already gone. Why was he worried about “eye-patch” when his life was about to change with his eye issues. Canes, wheelchairs, waiting rooms and people, Tom was done in an hour with his stressful appointment at the ophthalmologist. He is overwhelmed with questions still unanswered, mechanical arms, cameras, scopes and other devices. He still worries about insurance, his job and the amount of prescriptions he would need.
Tom has an pushy boyfriend, Mario and he calls Tom. Tom’s not in the mood and doesn’t want to be a burden. He just needed time to himself. He decided to take himself to the bench to wait for the bus and dozed off. He was awakened by a voice and there stood “eye-patch”. They both state they recognize each other from the hospital. As they discuss the eye appointment, “eye patch” tries to give Tom positive feedback. Just as they go their separate ways, Tom introduces himself to Hanif.
Mario and Tom had known each other for some time and hit it off when they first met. They don’t live together, but Mario comes to Tom’s and cooks for him. At times it leads to physical moments. Tom doesn’t like that Mario continues to call him Tommy. Now, Tom feels Mario is just filling a void. When they sit down to eat, the discussion of Tom’s appointments and him meeting Hanif becomes an issue that Mario won’t drop. All that Tom is dealing with something starts to change. All this adds to the chaos of Tom’s life.
Eventually, Tom and Hanif meet up again and it leads to Tom inviting Hanif over to his apartment. Mario walks in on them and Mario throws a tantrum. With all the commotion Hanif leaves the apartment. Mario keeps putting ridiculous ideas in Tom’s head about Hanif. Tom finally tells Mario it’s over. Tom hadn’t seen or heard from Hanif for two months but he walked daily by the hospital in hopes he would see him. Then one day he was approached by two men, detectives, asking about Hanif Tavassoli. Two days later in the park Tom is lured by a whistle. He finds a disheveled Hanif. They sneak to Tom’s where Hanif reveals so much information. But it’s still not safe for Hanif or Tom. Even Tom’s not sure to trust Hanif but there’s something about Hanif and Tom is willing to try. They go on the run to a deserted, Port Reilly and stay at a cabin that his Tom’s father built. Where more secrets remain to be revealed.
Patrick Doyle creates a novel of secrets, danger and espionage with “Catching Hanifs Eye”. First of all, it’s very weird as Tom Pryszlak goes to an eye appointment that becomes more than just having glasses replaced. Tom becomes overwhelmed with fears of going in for eye surgery or being blind. The one thing he cares about is his writing and maybe one day getting a book published. But he feels as though he is invisible to others. He doesn’t go outside the lines and the loneliness is taken a toll. He remembers his father and the good relationship that they shared with each other.
Hanif Tavassoli is a man filled with secrets. His life is a dangerous one, if he was ever found to be gay. His father want’s him to return to Teheran and be a banker but that’s not what Hanif wishes. What he and Tom find is a relationship, that becomes wonderfully intimate. But it’s not without doubts especially for Tom. Even though Hanif is a damaged man, he brings new life to Tom.
I highly recommend “Catching Hanifs Eye” it’s fast paced and every corner that Tom and Hanif turn is filled with: danger, suspense, intrigue, heartbreak and doubt.
Since 2020, I’ve read at least seven books written by Patrick Doyle and I have to say “Catching Hanif’s Eye” is outstanding for a single novel. He took his writing outside of the box when he wrote the “Bill and Pierre Trilogy” as all other stories are not a series. His writing and imagination has just kept improving and it’s been wonderful to see his stories grow. As all the main characters in his stories Tom and Hanif are now a favorite. I have to say, the intimate scenes between Tom and Hanif are written perfectly with emotion, and a insatiable love that’s unforgettable. The trust comes in a moving scene when Hanif removes his eye patch and reveals his true self to Tom. The author keeps the story a slight eerie with “Port Reilly” as it’s an abandoned town, where Tom and Hanif escape too. His other novels take readers to places around the world. As for me, I am a big fan of Patrick Doyle and I would like to see more novels by him. But it was a pleasure to read “Catching Hanif’s Eye”, and I’ll wait patiently for the next great story.
November 4, 2025
Reviewed for Love Bytes – 4.5 hearts.
While in a relationship that basically passes the time, Tom has been told that he’s going blind. But while at the hospital, he befriends another partially sighted man, so all’s not bad. However, strange encounters make Tom wonder. Who is a mark, a friend, being used or a willing participant? There’s also the question of why, and does love conquer all?
This story had me in a bit of a quandary. On the one hand, the ‘who dunnit’ side of espionage was sheer brilliance. But I struggled to connect with any of the characters, and I like a connection. Then again, given that undercover activities are afoot, and anyone could be lying, would I make myself open to a connection? Would I have a choice? If in Tom’s position, would I know? Is this a dilemma that plagues the MC, or was he a bit of a dufus to begin with? Tom’s state of mind flip-flops like a fish on dry land, but if I were in his position, would mine? Does that make me have a connection to the characters or not?
The story is told in the third person from the sole viewpoint of Tom. Worldbuilding evolves from everyday life to one of checking the shadows. To this extent, the tale is exceedingly atmospheric. The blurb mentions Tom’s blindness, so I’m not giving anything away here. The opening chapter has me questioning Tom’s character because it includes Tom's potential blindness, and the stress makes him want to have sex with someone who is not his boyfriend. Mmm – I guess stress affects everyone differently, so fair enough, but also WTF. This is where my struggles with Tom began and were never silenced. One way or another, every situation gave Tom a stiffy. However, while there were intimate activities, the majority of them were behind closed doors, and I don’t believe the story suffered for it.
I’m not going to say anything about Hanif, because to do so would give spoilers. Anyhoo, by the end, I had a few unanswered questions, such as how did X get Y, and what about Z, and as this is a standalone book, they’re not likely to be answered.
Soooo, as spy novels go, the intrigue and complexity are some of the best I’ve read, and if you like characters that are off the beaten path, then this is a must for your library. However, if relatable MCs are a must, you could struggle a bit.
This book was provided free in exchange for a fair and honest review for
Love Bytes.
While in a relationship that basically passes the time, Tom has been told that he’s going blind. But while at the hospital, he befriends another partially sighted man, so all’s not bad. However, strange encounters make Tom wonder. Who is a mark, a friend, being used or a willing participant? There’s also the question of why, and does love conquer all?
This story had me in a bit of a quandary. On the one hand, the ‘who dunnit’ side of espionage was sheer brilliance. But I struggled to connect with any of the characters, and I like a connection. Then again, given that undercover activities are afoot, and anyone could be lying, would I make myself open to a connection? Would I have a choice? If in Tom’s position, would I know? Is this a dilemma that plagues the MC, or was he a bit of a dufus to begin with? Tom’s state of mind flip-flops like a fish on dry land, but if I were in his position, would mine? Does that make me have a connection to the characters or not?
The story is told in the third person from the sole viewpoint of Tom. Worldbuilding evolves from everyday life to one of checking the shadows. To this extent, the tale is exceedingly atmospheric. The blurb mentions Tom’s blindness, so I’m not giving anything away here. The opening chapter has me questioning Tom’s character because it includes Tom's potential blindness, and the stress makes him want to have sex with someone who is not his boyfriend. Mmm – I guess stress affects everyone differently, so fair enough, but also WTF. This is where my struggles with Tom began and were never silenced. One way or another, every situation gave Tom a stiffy. However, while there were intimate activities, the majority of them were behind closed doors, and I don’t believe the story suffered for it.
I’m not going to say anything about Hanif, because to do so would give spoilers. Anyhoo, by the end, I had a few unanswered questions, such as how did X get Y, and what about Z, and as this is a standalone book, they’re not likely to be answered.
Soooo, as spy novels go, the intrigue and complexity are some of the best I’ve read, and if you like characters that are off the beaten path, then this is a must for your library. However, if relatable MCs are a must, you could struggle a bit.
This book was provided free in exchange for a fair and honest review for
Love Bytes.
October 23, 2025
This gripping mystery romance pulses with intrigue, espionage, and a compelling medical narrative. Tom finds himself spiraling into despair after being told he requires surgery to save his vision. A random accident has thrust him into an unfathomable health crisis that he never anticipated. To make matters worse, his ex-boyfriend won’t take the hint and leave him alone, and his job is in jeopardy due to the ever-present vultures looking to take his place. Amidst this turmoil, a fleeting glimpse of a striking stranger sparks hope in Tom’s heart, leaving him to ponder if he will ever truly see him again—as his sight and psyche both deteriorate daily. Hanif, a brilliant engineering student and determined refugee seeking a visa, finds himself irresistibly drawn to Tom, yet he is also filled with trepidation about the future when the truth comes to light. As their lives become increasingly entwined, the boundary between reality and deception begins to blur, and trust becomes a precarious gamble for both men. Can they overcome the peril that stalks them and the paranoia that threatens to drive them apart?
The narrative is rich with tension and raises vital questions about honesty and betrayal, compelling readers to rethink their allegiances. The characters are intricately crafted, and their interactions will have you rooting for them even as you grapple with your own doubts. The story teems with undeniable tension, yet much of the intimacy remains tantalizingly off-page, prompting one to wonder if anyone would still harbor such intense desire amid looming danger. However, my main concern lies with the ending; I craved a sense of closure rather than a lingering state of hiding and vigilance. While this open conclusion hints at potential sequels, I find myself questioning how the story can continue to captivate us, given our familiarity with the key players and their strategies. Overall, this novel is a mesmerizing mystery that invites readers to question motivations and perceptions alike, immersing you in a world where trust is elusive and danger is ever-present. I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The narrative is rich with tension and raises vital questions about honesty and betrayal, compelling readers to rethink their allegiances. The characters are intricately crafted, and their interactions will have you rooting for them even as you grapple with your own doubts. The story teems with undeniable tension, yet much of the intimacy remains tantalizingly off-page, prompting one to wonder if anyone would still harbor such intense desire amid looming danger. However, my main concern lies with the ending; I craved a sense of closure rather than a lingering state of hiding and vigilance. While this open conclusion hints at potential sequels, I find myself questioning how the story can continue to captivate us, given our familiarity with the key players and their strategies. Overall, this novel is a mesmerizing mystery that invites readers to question motivations and perceptions alike, immersing you in a world where trust is elusive and danger is ever-present. I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
November 14, 2025
Rating: 5 stars
Review By Ulysses Dietz, Member of the Other Worlds Ink Review Team
Name of Book: Catching Hanif’s Eye
Series: n/a
Author: Patrick Doyle
Publisher: Lawrence Boyle
Release date: 2025
Page Count:267
Genre: suspense
Patrick Doyle believes in romance; but not in normal romance.
What immediately hooked me into this story was the fact that the main character, Tom Pryszlak, is grappling with the fact that he has glaucoma, and that his eyesight might be seriously affected by it. Since this is something I’ve been dealing with myself for a long time now, it triggered a number of emotional responses that I didn’t anticipate.
However, once Tom catches the eye of a handsome Iranian named Hanif (or, more accurately, he notices Hanif giving him the eye), the narrative begins to twist. The tale that unfolds doesn’t have much to do with glaucoma, but (on the other hand) everything to do with seeing—or, as it were, NOT seeing.
It is a love story, complete with a jealous ex and difficult family situations. Other than that, however, it is unorthodox and unnerving and compelling. Tom, like other characters in Doyle’s novels, is not immediately likeable. A tightly-wound techie who reads spreadsheets on computers, his social skills are not enormous and his charm seems—to me, at least—limited. Hanif, by contrast, is warm and charming as well as handsome. The fact that he wears an eye patch (did I mention that?) adds to his raffish quality and appeals to Tom. His one good eye is beautiful, and seems to reflect a beautiful soul in its depths (that’s a rather romantic notion).
They do become a couple; but the road to their pairing is not smooth, nor straight, nor safe. It goes without saying that there are trust issues. As Tom digs down and finds his better angel as he gets to know Hanif, I grew to like him more, and to feel true sympathy for him. Shifting the reader’s perception of a character is a delicate and skilled operation. Doyle pulls it off, and it makes the book thrum with emotional power.
And that’s all I can tell you.
Review By Ulysses Dietz, Member of the Other Worlds Ink Review Team
Name of Book: Catching Hanif’s Eye
Series: n/a
Author: Patrick Doyle
Publisher: Lawrence Boyle
Release date: 2025
Page Count:267
Genre: suspense
Patrick Doyle believes in romance; but not in normal romance.
What immediately hooked me into this story was the fact that the main character, Tom Pryszlak, is grappling with the fact that he has glaucoma, and that his eyesight might be seriously affected by it. Since this is something I’ve been dealing with myself for a long time now, it triggered a number of emotional responses that I didn’t anticipate.
However, once Tom catches the eye of a handsome Iranian named Hanif (or, more accurately, he notices Hanif giving him the eye), the narrative begins to twist. The tale that unfolds doesn’t have much to do with glaucoma, but (on the other hand) everything to do with seeing—or, as it were, NOT seeing.
It is a love story, complete with a jealous ex and difficult family situations. Other than that, however, it is unorthodox and unnerving and compelling. Tom, like other characters in Doyle’s novels, is not immediately likeable. A tightly-wound techie who reads spreadsheets on computers, his social skills are not enormous and his charm seems—to me, at least—limited. Hanif, by contrast, is warm and charming as well as handsome. The fact that he wears an eye patch (did I mention that?) adds to his raffish quality and appeals to Tom. His one good eye is beautiful, and seems to reflect a beautiful soul in its depths (that’s a rather romantic notion).
They do become a couple; but the road to their pairing is not smooth, nor straight, nor safe. It goes without saying that there are trust issues. As Tom digs down and finds his better angel as he gets to know Hanif, I grew to like him more, and to feel true sympathy for him. Shifting the reader’s perception of a character is a delicate and skilled operation. Doyle pulls it off, and it makes the book thrum with emotional power.
And that’s all I can tell you.
October 24, 2025
Gaslighting galore: trust no one?
4.5🌟 stars
I was capitivated by this carefully composed story of just the right length that combines MM romance with cloak and dagger conspiracies.
I was inclined to rate a full five stars, but I felt the ending was a bit vague and let what came before down a bit. As for the bulk of the novel, some really unusual elements to the plot that immediately drew me in. To have main character Tom start the story on the verge of losing his sight brought in some emotional depth and sympathy for the main protagonist right away, and then all the suspense and action: great transition to a story of deception, danger and mysterious secret operatives. Hanif's backstory is good, too. Then adding in the growing affection between Tom and Hanif (and the constant conflicts in their relationship) this suspenseful romance totally had me immersed.
I had no better idea of who was telling the truth and could be trusted than Tom! Such gaslighting! and then the revelations relating to his father!
My favorite scenes took place in the wilderness at Tom's father's cabin. And I loved how officeworker/data collater Tom showed his willingness to go the extra mile, even considering violence, to help Hanif.
I read a complimentary advance copy of the book; this is my voluntary and honest opinion.
4.5🌟 stars
I was capitivated by this carefully composed story of just the right length that combines MM romance with cloak and dagger conspiracies.
I was inclined to rate a full five stars, but I felt the ending was a bit vague and let what came before down a bit. As for the bulk of the novel, some really unusual elements to the plot that immediately drew me in. To have main character Tom start the story on the verge of losing his sight brought in some emotional depth and sympathy for the main protagonist right away, and then all the suspense and action: great transition to a story of deception, danger and mysterious secret operatives. Hanif's backstory is good, too. Then adding in the growing affection between Tom and Hanif (and the constant conflicts in their relationship) this suspenseful romance totally had me immersed.
I had no better idea of who was telling the truth and could be trusted than Tom! Such gaslighting! and then the revelations relating to his father!
My favorite scenes took place in the wilderness at Tom's father's cabin. And I loved how officeworker/data collater Tom showed his willingness to go the extra mile, even considering violence, to help Hanif.
I read a complimentary advance copy of the book; this is my voluntary and honest opinion.
September 14, 2025
This book made my heart race...with fear, admiration for the dialogue, the attraction that built between Tom and Hanif, and the subtle clues interspersed with the very real need to solve the puzzles presented.
Mario is a character who won't go away!
His controlling nature is a threat that Tom can't overlook.
The upcoming eye surgery for Tom looms over every encounter, both at home and at the hospital.
The doctors who are threatening due to their mannerisms from the beginning only spur on new questions.
Tom's isolation during the ordeal, and the relief you'll feel when Hanif appears, are components to the mystery that depth and deepen your fear.
Then the gap his absence suddenly leaves...is even more disconcerting.
Trust is only built over time...but can circumstances speed up the process?
In this book, it definitely can!
A tense drama with a Happy for Now ending.
Thenks to Mr. Doyle and GRR for this ARC.
Mario is a character who won't go away!
His controlling nature is a threat that Tom can't overlook.
The upcoming eye surgery for Tom looms over every encounter, both at home and at the hospital.
The doctors who are threatening due to their mannerisms from the beginning only spur on new questions.
Tom's isolation during the ordeal, and the relief you'll feel when Hanif appears, are components to the mystery that depth and deepen your fear.
Then the gap his absence suddenly leaves...is even more disconcerting.
Trust is only built over time...but can circumstances speed up the process?
In this book, it definitely can!
A tense drama with a Happy for Now ending.
Thenks to Mr. Doyle and GRR for this ARC.
November 4, 2025
stinging yellow drops, flowers, golden arcs, KDY!, treacle, Bunyan, crocodile, 6 feet under, anchovies, zip ties, artiste
So many lies! So many secrets! Who to believe? Who to trust? It's all so frustrating for Tom, a data analyst for the Institute. He spots a beguiling man with an eyepatch in the lobby of his ophthalmologist. Tom has been told he will eventually lose his sight. Tom despairs.
Everything isn't all doom, though. It turns out the eyepatch man, Hanif is interested in Tom too. He strikes up with getting to know Hanif. This is much to the dismay of his 'boyfriend' Mario.
Mysterious Hanif constantly dodges Tom’s questions, and ends up fleeing. Twice. But, Tom can't stop thinking about him. Then, upon returning to Tom after one of his flights, Hanif reveals some 'truths' that Tom has a hard time believing.
This mystery is intriguing, and easy to get invested in. It's entertaining, enjoyable, and satisfying. Recommended
So many lies! So many secrets! Who to believe? Who to trust? It's all so frustrating for Tom, a data analyst for the Institute. He spots a beguiling man with an eyepatch in the lobby of his ophthalmologist. Tom has been told he will eventually lose his sight. Tom despairs.
Everything isn't all doom, though. It turns out the eyepatch man, Hanif is interested in Tom too. He strikes up with getting to know Hanif. This is much to the dismay of his 'boyfriend' Mario.
Mysterious Hanif constantly dodges Tom’s questions, and ends up fleeing. Twice. But, Tom can't stop thinking about him. Then, upon returning to Tom after one of his flights, Hanif reveals some 'truths' that Tom has a hard time believing.
This mystery is intriguing, and easy to get invested in. It's entertaining, enjoyable, and satisfying. Recommended
October 20, 2025
Are there any good guys? That's the real question for Tom as he discovers what his data analysis at The Institute is much more than he understands. Tom has been unwittingly swept up in a spy vs spy game after a broken set of glasses sees him diagnosed with glaucoma and the possibility of a lens replacement. At one of his appointments he meets Hanif. Hanif is gorgeous in Tom's eye, even with his eye patch. These two connect on multiple levels but trust is hard when Tom discovers that the other side has been manipulating him and with him at the same time. There's plenty of intrigue between the two sides as Tom and Hanif find a way to trust each other, untangle themselves from their conflicting intelligence organizations, and forge a new path together.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
November 8, 2025
I love discovering new authors, so when I saw Catching Hanif’s Eye by Patrick Doyle on BookSirens, I knew I had to read it. The story blends contemporary MM romance with espionage elements, creating an adventurous and thrilling atmosphere that immediately caught my attention. I especially liked the originality of including ophthalmology details — it’s not something you see every day in romance fiction.
While the story itself isn’t banal, some scenes could use a bit more editing for clarity, and the ending felt slightly rushed. That said, I found it a refreshing debut with plenty of potential. The author’s voice shows creativity and a genuine effort to do something different in the MM romance genre. With a bit of polish, Patrick Doyle could easily become one to watch. Overall, a nice, original read that I enjoyed.
While the story itself isn’t banal, some scenes could use a bit more editing for clarity, and the ending felt slightly rushed. That said, I found it a refreshing debut with plenty of potential. The author’s voice shows creativity and a genuine effort to do something different in the MM romance genre. With a bit of polish, Patrick Doyle could easily become one to watch. Overall, a nice, original read that I enjoyed.
November 3, 2025
The blurb for this book whet my appetite but I was not sure what the story would be just based on it except that it was probably going to include some intrigue. And it did. The description of someone who seems to court a life that does not invite complications was the recipe for something complicated to come. The author does a good job of taking us from someone who is coasting along in life, stagnant in work, stagnant in the hobby he was pursuing and stagnant even in relationship to having a life event shake things up in unexpected ways. Following along and trying to guess what was going on and where things would wind up for the main character made this a good reading experience.
I received an ARC from GRR and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received an ARC from GRR and am voluntarily leaving a review.
November 9, 2025
This is an amazing read with so many things that resonate even more in today's political climate. The author did an amazing job of portraying Tom initially as a man choosing to be grey and live in a grey world. He has a job and a relationship with Mario but the only thing that really moves him is his writing and even that he doesn't let consume him. He is the last person we expect to get involved in the things that happen later in the book. Tom meets Hanif with his intriguing eye patch as he seeks treatment for his own diminishing eyesight and that sets off a chain of events where it isn't clear who can be trusted and exactly what anyone's goal really is. Once I started this I could not put it down.
August 20, 2025
What a read! It starts out as a romance that does and doesn't make sense. Tom meets a one eyed stranger, and they eventually forge a relationship. The stranger, Hanif and Tom become lovers. When Hanif reveals some truths about spies. It all comes together, plus the letter from Tom's dead father seals the deal and he knows the truth. Both men are on the run from the bad guys, because you know you can never leave alive. This is a complex,gripping story of lies, betrayals, and love. What/Who will survive all of this?? I voluntarily read a free copy of this book provided by book sirens and am giving an honest review.
November 3, 2025
Catching Hanif’s Eye is an absorbing blend of romance, mystery, and psychological intrigue. Tom’s quiet, restrained life unravels after an accident threatens his sight, drawing him into a web of desire, deception, and danger when he meets the enigmatic Hanif.
The story’s mix of sensuality and suspense is compelling, with twists that keep you guessing until the end. Patrick’s writing shines with depth and emotional nuance, making this both a thought-provoking and intoxicating read. A unique, lustful love story turned thriller that lingers long after the final page.
I received a free arc copy and this is my honest review
The story’s mix of sensuality and suspense is compelling, with twists that keep you guessing until the end. Patrick’s writing shines with depth and emotional nuance, making this both a thought-provoking and intoxicating read. A unique, lustful love story turned thriller that lingers long after the final page.
I received a free arc copy and this is my honest review
November 17, 2025
This was my first experience with this author, and the suspenseful tone of the thriller captivated me from the very first page. Tom is struggling with the heartbreaking reality that his diminishing eyesight may cost him the work he has always loved. Meanwhile, Mario is drifting further from his boyfriend, creating a quiet ache beneath the surface of the story. When Tom encounters Hanif—enigmatic, self-possessed, and marked by his striking eye patch—he finds himself unexpectedly drawn in. What unfolds is a slow-burn connection threaded with tension, emotional nuance, and cleverly placed twists that keep the reader fully engaged from beginning to end.
October 12, 2025
Tom is a complete and udder mess. He's so lost in his own mind that he can't see reality. When he finally does understand what reality is, it may be too late.
Hanif has been on the run for so long that he no longer has roots. But something has caught his attention and just maybe his heart.
The characters are done very well and the world building will take you on a roller-coaster ride that keeps you guessing all the way to the end. All in all, I enjoyed reading this book.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Hanif has been on the run for so long that he no longer has roots. But something has caught his attention and just maybe his heart.
The characters are done very well and the world building will take you on a roller-coaster ride that keeps you guessing all the way to the end. All in all, I enjoyed reading this book.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
October 20, 2025
This story was very interesting! Tom lived a boring life as a data analyst. He made spreadsheets and input numbers. Then, an accident happened where his glasses were broken. When he went to the hospital, he found out he had glaucoma and had to have surgery. During one of many trips to the doctor, he met Hanif, who wore an eye patch. He gave quiet comfort to a sad, nervous, lonely Tom about to have surgery that could blind him. What comes after is not what I expected! It was full of action and suspense, with plenty of spice. I highly recommend this book!
October 28, 2025
Intriguing storyline. Tom is at the optometrist due to an ongoing eye problem. Being a data analysis, he's at the computer all day long & attributes this to his eye problem. While there he sees someone who caught his eye, a man with an eye patch. Intrigue but not doing anything about it, he goes on with his life. Next appointment the man is there again. They strike up a conversation & one thing leads to another. The story takes on many twists and turns and huge revelations are slowly revealed. High Angst. Excellently written.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
November 3, 2025
Thank you for the book, here is my honest opinion:
This was an interesting read from a new to me author. I liked the kind of stream of consciousness written style, it took a bit to get used to but I enjoyed the hazy and dreamlike feel. I also enjoyed the sense of not knowing who to trust as most of characters behave suspiciously. I’m not sure I needed the extra drama with Mario as there’s already a lot going on in the plot. I also didn’t leave this feeling like I got to know Hanif or Tom. Entertaining read, with plenty f twists and turns.
This was an interesting read from a new to me author. I liked the kind of stream of consciousness written style, it took a bit to get used to but I enjoyed the hazy and dreamlike feel. I also enjoyed the sense of not knowing who to trust as most of characters behave suspiciously. I’m not sure I needed the extra drama with Mario as there’s already a lot going on in the plot. I also didn’t leave this feeling like I got to know Hanif or Tom. Entertaining read, with plenty f twists and turns.
November 4, 2025
At first I thought this book had a timeless, placeless quality but then little details would pop in and I would realize I was wrong. Then I thought maybe it was Tom’s preoccupation with his ocular troubles that gave an unmoored feeling to opening. But then the love story begins and the spy story takes off, and Tom it’s struggling with who to trust: his doctors, his work, his ex-boyfriend, his memories, Hanif?
Thoughtful, suspenseful, at times a little surreal, this book was a surprise to me and I will definitely read more by this author.
Thoughtful, suspenseful, at times a little surreal, this book was a surprise to me and I will definitely read more by this author.
October 28, 2025
Tom was going blind and went to the opthalmologist. While there, he encounters a one eyed man with a patch named Hanif. So begins the intrigue, a complex conspiracy of spies, double agents and trickery. Tom doesn't know what is real and what's not in a false world going back to his father's time. He only has Hanif to trust, or does he? I received a copy of this through BookSirens and this is my voluntary opinion.
November 11, 2025
- Twisty MM love story/mystery/spy thriller wrapped around the main character's eyesight dilemma, this is a hell of a read that will keep you guessing till the end. Tom, our MC, is losing said eyesight rapidly, is making the rounds of specialists and is beyond anxious about an upcoming surgery/procedure. His orderly, undemanding life is thrown into relief; as a data analyst he is good at what he does, but not passionate; likewise his relationship with boyfriend Mario, adequate sexually but he tunes him out, just going through the motions, again, not passionate. His writing 'hobby' isn't fulfilling, unpublished and neglected; existence is bland, made worse by the drug therapy and painful eyedrop regimen, which he half wonders if it is making the condition worse. He doesn't really trust his doctors, doesn't really even know them, wonders is he is mis-diagnosed. Drugs, pain and fear have made him slightly paranoid; he is an untrustworthy narrator for the first part of the novel, dulled and drugged, distrustful and null. All is about to change when he glimpses a eye-patched sexy man in a medical lobby revolving door, going the other direction, and catches the mischievous compelling single eye glance that attracts him like nothing else has in a long time.
- Chance meetings, flirtation, a disastrous scene in Tom's kitchen when Mario comes home with groceries and finds the 'pirate' in his lover's home. Tom drops his lover soon enough, choosing to pursue the alluring Hanif, who then disappears, only to turn up on the run, pursued and hounded by mysterious haters(homophobes, religious zealots, or even spies) disheveled and needing Tom's help. Hanif commiserates with eyesight issues, having lost his own eye, but then encourages Tom to question his diagnoses, his treatments, to stop the eyedrops. As Tom's vision improves, as trust is developed, as lust is satiated, he grows stronger as a character, as an individual, as a man. He no longer settles, he has found passion.
- At times Tom doesn't trust what he is told, questions his reality, disbelieves Hanif, who hasn't told Tom everything either. So many turns, twists, loss of faith, but then reliance on the only allies they have, each other. They end up on the run together, Tom's past comes in handy, his relationship with his mysterious Father, a hidden cabin, supplies that only Tom could find, and messages from his Father, who's identity becomes more known, more understandable as secrets are revealed. Tom finds out things about his own life as well, nothing has been as it seems; Mario has another identity, and Hanif is complicated himself.
- Issues of identity, self-knowledge and primary relationships; even geo-political situations. And overall, there is the question of what Tom wants, what he needs from others, and what he sees in that so-seductive, scintillating eye, the window of Hanif's soul. There are times when you, the reader, will question all the characters, will wonder and argue with Tom's choices. However, by the end you will be glad of that peek over the shoulder, the mischief and intrigue reflected in that sidelong glance; fulfilled by the promise caught in Hanif's eye.
- Chance meetings, flirtation, a disastrous scene in Tom's kitchen when Mario comes home with groceries and finds the 'pirate' in his lover's home. Tom drops his lover soon enough, choosing to pursue the alluring Hanif, who then disappears, only to turn up on the run, pursued and hounded by mysterious haters(homophobes, religious zealots, or even spies) disheveled and needing Tom's help. Hanif commiserates with eyesight issues, having lost his own eye, but then encourages Tom to question his diagnoses, his treatments, to stop the eyedrops. As Tom's vision improves, as trust is developed, as lust is satiated, he grows stronger as a character, as an individual, as a man. He no longer settles, he has found passion.
- At times Tom doesn't trust what he is told, questions his reality, disbelieves Hanif, who hasn't told Tom everything either. So many turns, twists, loss of faith, but then reliance on the only allies they have, each other. They end up on the run together, Tom's past comes in handy, his relationship with his mysterious Father, a hidden cabin, supplies that only Tom could find, and messages from his Father, who's identity becomes more known, more understandable as secrets are revealed. Tom finds out things about his own life as well, nothing has been as it seems; Mario has another identity, and Hanif is complicated himself.
- Issues of identity, self-knowledge and primary relationships; even geo-political situations. And overall, there is the question of what Tom wants, what he needs from others, and what he sees in that so-seductive, scintillating eye, the window of Hanif's soul. There are times when you, the reader, will question all the characters, will wonder and argue with Tom's choices. However, by the end you will be glad of that peek over the shoulder, the mischief and intrigue reflected in that sidelong glance; fulfilled by the promise caught in Hanif's eye.
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