*Read through NetGalley*
This book had a lot going for it on paper: small-town magic, second-chance romance, cozy fantasy vibes, and a whole cast of quirky characters, but the execution didn’t quite land for me. The setting of Fates Haven is super charming and definitely gives off that Hallmark meets Halloweentown energy, which made for a fun, whimsical backdrop. There's a strong found family theme and plenty of shenanigans with magical friends that added some warmth and humor to the story.
That said, the romance, which is supposed to be the heart of the book, felt flat. I never really bought the chemistry between the two leads, and there just wasn’t enough tension or buildup for a second-chance, fated-mates love story. The miscommunication that kept them apart for thirteen years didn’t feel like enough of a reason, and the way everyone just forgave and moved on made the stakes feel really low.
There were also a lot of subplots, side characters, and tropey moments jammed into one book, and it ended up feeling kind of overcrowded. The dialogue was often cheesy (and not in a good way), like using “snortle”, which really pulled me out of the story.
Overall, this was a cute, cozy read with a fun magical setting and good intentions, but it tried to do too much.