Breathless

by Evelyn Rosado

Good evening ladies (and gentlemen)! I'm Evelyn. I'll be your pilot for the evening. Fasten your seat belt and enjoy the flight. Smoking IS NOT prohibited, for when this steamy flight is concluded, you may need a cigarette or two to relax! This is your first flight? Well, allow me to spin a yarn about a friend of mine, Natasha night. Ballroom. Charity auction.Stir in one sexy black dress from a now maxed out credit card.Pour in a few ladles of top shelf champagne flowing all night long.Whisk one irresistible billionaire who’s had his eyes on her since she sat down.…and what you get is one scintillating night of bad decisions and a morning full of head-spinning unanswered questions.But what took place after was beyond Natasha's most insatiable desires. Just what exactly did billionaire Victor St. James have in store for her?I hope you enjoy the flight. Please buckle up, as there may be a few twists and turns along the way. And if you experience any heavy breathing, please use the oxygen mask above. This flight may leave you…breathless.This is Part One of the series!This 23,000+ word erotic romance novella contains adult content! 18+ only!

Genres: Amazon

62 pages, Kindle Edition

First published October 2, 2014

Reviews

[M · Rating 2 out of 5]

Turns out this is a book divided into 4 parts. She's a bit all over the place and there are oh so many editing mistakes. Time is a bit elusive. Reads as though all happens withing 4 or 5 days but the occasional comment lets you know that it was really days between but time just magically jumps here and there. Heroine is weak, selfish and such an idiot. Victor is just odd.

[Jay · Rating 1 out of 5]

DNF.... Save yourself the time and angst, clingy, needy, indecisive, self-esteem issues... and can't move forward.



Seriously the worst book I have (attempted to) read in awhile.

[Lena · Rating 4 out of 5]

I enjoyed this roller coaster story. A somewhat naive woman and a billionaire with no other wishes than business and casual s*x.
It ended with a twist. I need to read the next book.

[wordsandblankspaces · Rating 2 out of 5]

Good story. Bad execution, grammar and editing. If I thought I would be able to handle the atrocious writing again, I would read the second book.