2.5 if you like small town Mayberry where everybody knows everybody, they’re all connected, and everything is just perfect…..then add in some open door vanilla’ish spice, you’ll love this. (Possible spoilers ahead)
So… I have a few negatives about this book.
❌One- it’s way too long. (My kindle said an almost 7 hour read)
❌Two- there are way too many characters. 4 sets of grandparents, tons of siblings, a rooster and some chickens, etc…too much.
❌Three- way too much filler. There’s almost a whole chapter on h and her family getting a photograph. 🥴
❌Fourth- way too many group texts about stuff I didn’t care about.
❌Finally, the flashbacks. Ugh. I GET that they’re to show the connection/conflict between the MCs, but it could have been wrapped up in one or two chapters. The MCs didn’t have some grand LOVE story.
So the H and h were childhood friends. They both liked to cook. When they started to reach puberty, H started to treat her “different” because his BFF (h’s brother) told him “it’s weird that you want to hang out with my little sister” (they are 2 years apart in age) so H started to push away from her. All their flashbacks just show how H acts hot and cold with h.
H goes on to be some Gordon Ramsay except he’s nice. He’s traveled and has been with OW.
h owns a bakery and she’s been with OM.
Now they are adults and “hate” each other. 🙃( EVERY. SINGLE. PERSON. Knows the MCs have smexual tension except the MCs.)
In one of these flashbacks, H’s mom is killed in a car crash. H starts to be really nasty to h after that.
They’ve never actually even kissed. But supposedly both have hidden love for each other *hard eye roll* 🙄
You’ll get flashbacks of h’s disgusting brother and how he acts when he thinks H and h are friends (anybody with sense knows the brother is just jealous) And eek…h’s brother was disgusting with his sister’s smex life. Once he told her “ it’s a good thing you don’t have boobs. Dad would never let you leave the house if you did” 🤢 This brother needed a swift kick to the head. Anyway, H and h got into a spat and he insulted her boobs. Said he wouldn’t touch them with a 10 foot pole.
There’s absolutely ZIP that explains these two MCs having some type of real connection.
Anyway, these two finally do “the deed” and it’s aMaZiNg 🤩 but H wants to keep their relationship secret. (Yeah that’s not a red flag at all) They don’t hookup until over 60% and frankly, it’s dull. They both work long hours, so most is them sneaking around. h doesn’t actually keep anything secret because she tells pretty much all her friends and H’s dad. 🙃
Thankfully, there is NO 3rd act breakup. These two MCs take their secret relationship to a hockey game and get blasted kissing on the big Jumbotron 🤦♀️🤦♀️
The UNHINGED brother punches H in the face at h’s place of employment and all their personal business gets blasted to everybody.
Then…suddenly, all is good between them all. Ffs
A few months later, H proposed and h accepted. There’s a bunch of stuff about the resort, so it definitely sets up the other books.
Meh! Not my vibe