This book started off really working for me, barring the absolutely wild setup of Jade (the FMC) as a bridesmaid in the wedding of Ashley (her bff) and Nate (her ex) after Nate cheated on her with Ashley. That’s a level of forgiveness (delusion) I can’t get behind, but I’ve read weirder setups so I rolled with it.
Jade is a relatable FMC. I really related to her as an only child who needs her dog because she’s down so many friends and who has no family. I also like that later in the story she stands up for herself (even if it’s short-lived). Penny her dog is a cute addition too.
I enjoyed the small town feel, the townspeople that are impossibly nice, the found family who accept her immediately. I liked the winery setup and the fact she’s an artist.
Now, here’s the sole reason this book didn’t work for me, Rett, the MMC. I thought he started out really promising. He was your standard sort of grumpy love interest. Then he started an inner monologue about how he must coach Jade and teach her basic life skills like interviewing and resume making.
First, she’s an artist who was very successful. She’s down on her luck, not an infant. Maybe she’s allowed to be free spirited? Again though, I figured okay maybe this was a weird blip, but no.
It’s easier to list the things he did that made me crazy:
He nags about her budget. He talks to her like she needs “a real job” sometimes or like she is so dense she doesn’t know she might need a backup job. Then he’d switch to “oh you’re perfect, such a good artist, so smart and capable.” Alright pick a lane.
I got an immediate ick that he bought his fake girlfriend he has never slept with a bra and panty set for their date. I can see this being hot in a dark romance or at least one with a dominate man. It’s just weird when it’s Mr. You Need to Budget.
Jade spends four whole dollars on some kid’s cider and he lectures her about frivolous spending. It’s four fucking dollars my man. It’s giving boomer “stop buying coffees and you’ll not be poor” energy.
I was fully rooting for the happy ending to be Jade finding her muse again and kicking ass ALONE in the art world and just visiting her new friends. Because the final nail was the third act breakup where he was flat out cruel.
She does thankfully leave his ass and give him some hell about it but in my opinion she shouldn’t have taken him back.
Also, not very important but I didn’t like the spice, the way it was written was not for me. I skipped it.
The book also had an epilogue and it was the same one you’ve read 7,000 times already, which I just want people to stop doing. We get it, everyone must be married and pregnant to be happy. That is the way.
So I would have fully rated this four stars if the happy ending was what I was rooting for and Jade finding herself was the happy ending, because I liked her part of the story a lot. But it really knocked it down for me that she took him back after what he said when it had only been a week and he wasn’t worth it.