Velik was changed by a childhood encounter he still struggles to understand. Now he’s something else—faster, deadlier, and armed with a unique class built for one hunting monsters.
For ten years, he’s braved the frontier alone, cutting down every beast that threatens the border towns. With each kill, he’s grown stronger, gaining levels and sharpening his skills on the thousands of monsters infesting the wild lands.
But something’s wrong. The monsters are coming faster, stronger, and Velik’s losing ground. The arrival of a guild hunter brings more complications, as the gold-ranked hunter seems more curious about Velik than the monsters he’s been hired to kill.
With time running out, Velik must venture deeper into the woods, facing deadly creatures while searching for the source of the threat. But what he finds isn’t just a nest. It’s a secret—one that could explain what happened to Velik ten years ago.
Something in the dark remembers him… and it’s been waiting.
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There's a sad note that rings throughout this novel. Velik has had a terrible youth, but it's the fact that he believes he deserved the abuse that is the deeper tragedy.
The world-building and magic system is just one more version of the system based progression stories we've all read before. However, the author doesn't treat us like neophytes, so that sameness feels more like continuation than repetition. Thus we don't waste time getting up to speed with the setting, and can immediately dig into the meat of the main character.
At it's heart, this is the story of a decent person, forced into isolation. What happens when, after years have passed, he must once again enter society in order to complete his ongoing mission; to kill the monsters that he unleashed?
Promising story, but the mechanics fall short, did not finish.
The levelling makes no sense, he’s apparently killing hundreds of monsters every day, as well for the past 8 or so years that works out to about 300 hundred thousand monsters (give or take a few thousand) and he’s still only level 30?
It’s terrible world building how does anyone/anything advance if the requirements are so high, even the monsters he’s fighting advance by killing each other so if the requirements to level are so high then the monsters would cull each other to the minimum level anyway.
I think it’s lazy writing if I’m being honest, I could see the authors idea but the execution fell flat that’s why it’s a 2 stars and not a 1
The story about a good hearted pariah boy who protects the very villages who shun him from monsters. A nice premise which is sadly tainted by constant, rather repetitive fighting which is getting more and more tiresome.
The protagonist was too single minded but also too forgiving against humans for my taste.
Criticism and comments
The money and level system doesn't make sense given the sheer amounts of slain monsters.
The author doesn't understand distances. 8 year old boys walking 40 miles through the forest to seek adventure during a day, a couple walking 30 miles through the forest during the night..
Main character gets seeming no exp for killing "thousands" of monsters every night. The amounts are ridiculous. He gets like 2-3 decarma coin thingies per kill, so then why does he not have millions of them? If this guy killing thousands of monsters per day, isn't rich, then how can other adventurers be rich?
None of his skills are explained.
None of it makes sense.
Everyone hates him in multiple towns. Yea right. Even if one town blames him for monsters spawning, for which there is no evidence, there is no way this idea would spread to multiple towns.
There's lots of "mystery" surrounding the MC and his friend. I don't care about any of it.
Good writing, solid characters, but the world building had holes that were jarring enough to interrupt the narrative. The economy is fatally inconsistent, and the leveling speed/scale makes little sense.
I'll read the next and hope some of the cons are improved or at least explained away.
Im not sure im going to the next book. The action was nonstop with the main character and got old. Started skipping most of it. I enjoyed the side characters more. Was hoping MC would stop and have a conversation at some point. Didnt happen until late in the book
This is what i want. Solid character work. A plot that isn't visible from a mile away. Excellent pacing that keeps the book flowing. A crunchy power system, but it is handled without too many complications. I can't wait for more.
This was a tough read. It read like a mystery novel and adventure novel at the same time. The plot really never moved along until the last couple of chapters and it was rather anticlimactic. Most of the book is just the MC fighting monsters alone which got really boring. The leveling system didn't seem to follow any set pattern nor the skill awards. The secondary characters are just there, with no real motivation.
Never explained any of the skills or classes other than things like getting stronger at night... Made it to about 40%. Only made it that far because I was traveling and hoping it would explain things. I felt like I was missing parts of the book.
Really good! Writing, plot, editing, world building, characters - everything was excellent. Pretty much a ‘no notes’ read for me, and that’s genuinely unusual (whether due to my personal creative impulses thinking something else would have been better, or whether there were flaws). The storyline/plot was interesting and different. The System design was just a little different than the usual Hit/Health Points & Strength/Dexterity/Wisdom ratings in a way that actually felt more realistic and intuitive. Also wasn’t stat or maths heavy, nor gave long lists of system choices followed by pages of breakdown, which was good. The story started at a point were the challengers were ramping up, and then occasionally (as necessary) providing some backstory or on one occasion offering a beautiful integrated past event told in full, so the plot didn’t get buried in drawn out flashbacks or screeds of exposition. It was really nicely done. The characters were great too! Only really got to know 4 characters, but each one was comfortably different and well shown, no falling into caricatures or using repetitive behaviour in place of actual character development. The MC was fantastic- not emotionless, not even harsh, but also not warm, which is exactly what he should be given his life. There’d even be an argument for being angry or wanting revenge on the locals, but it never went that way, which I personally thought was a more interesting and nicer story. I also kept waiting for the MC to rely more on the Gold Hunter, and when he didn’t, I kept thinking to myself ‘of course! He’s been living independently so long and treated badly so often, of course he wouldn’t start trusting and relying on someone he’s just met!’, and I loved how that character trait was adhered to. He wasn’t ever stupid or obstinate, and he sought advice if he could when he knew he needed it, but his character didn’t change just because he met a new person who might be trustworthy. So yeah, really enjoyed, recommend if you like LitRPG. Quality writing, and I’m heading off right now to read for next in the series.
This book has some good strengths. The pacing is good. The writer does a good job of mixing in the exposition in tiny ways and really does a good job of showing what happens and how things work as opposed to just vomiting exposition out to get around actual story telling. The side characters are not entirely paper cutouts of stereotypes (mostly).
The book also has a few, at least in my opinion, weaknesses as well. The MC is an 18 year old that was exiled from his town when he was 7. He had a class to help him survive and somewhat flourish in the wilds. All that is fine. He also can read, has a vocabulary better than a lot of the town folk and can see through subtle social plots. In fact the only thing that appears to be different from him as a hermit that doesn’t see or talk to people and the people in town is he is a bad ass.
His plot armor is too powerful. In the course of 100 pages (about 2 weeks for him) he goes from having a hard time killing elites near his own level and getting forced to retreat from normal mobs a few level higher than him, to killing champion elites 10 levels above him. How does he do that? Really thick plot armor.
In the end, though I really wanted to like this book. I just found myself skipping through the fights scenes. I just didn’t care what inventive trope or cliche allowed him to kill what ever he was fighting this time. It all felt unearned. I might pick up the next book, but I would probably be more inclined to DNF sooner rather than later.
Velik is a solitary character who, though he seems balanced, is deeply wounded by a humanity that rejected him — yet he still protects it. This is the background he's lived with for over a decade, even before adolescence. Described this way, it's quite sad. It's a clever move by the author: aside from the hidden suffering and the hero's (implicit) self-punishment, there's no need to delve too deeply into the psyche of the main character, or the others. They each have simple personalities, and everything remains action-focused throughout the book. That makes it pretty easy to read overall.
Added to that are a few world-building inconsistencies, particularly in the relationship between monsters, money, and everyday living costs — some moments left me wide-eyed. You can eat for just a few cents while slaying a monster earns you a fortune… might as well go be an adventurer (as part of a team). Items cost thousands of decamas, supposedly rare, yet the hero acquires them at lightning speed (yes, but there's an invasion so… and so…). Normally doing things solo is hard, but of course the MC and supporting characters manage, etc etc. As is often the case in this kind of book, the author tries to make the MC overly self-reliant and ends up contradicting themselves to make it believable.
Book 1 could stand alone — I’m not sure I’ll read book 2. The characters don’t have enough depth to really stick in my mind. Popcorn read?
I was actually surprised by this book, I enjoyed it much more than I expected going into it.
One thing this book has going for it is its beginning. it starts "in media res", which in this genre means our character has had his class for a decade and we're not seeing the beginning of his experience. That sets it apart from many other books in the genre, and it is fun to read.
Another unique aspect working in tandem with this is that it doesn't dump info on you all at once, but doles it out throughout the book. It can be a bit odd in a litrpg to not know what some skills and mechanics do dozens of chapters into it, but the contextual information is usually sufficient or is explained naturally in the story.
As for the story, it has a fun mythos surrounding the MC where a majority of people hate him and want to see him dead with a minority revering him, deeming him the one person saving everyone from death and destruction.
The MC is understandably terse and aversed to trust after his life fighting monsters and defending himself from humans he is saving, and I liked the surrounding cast of characters that develop alongside him.
This was a litrpg with lots of action and grinding, but with a different narrative path than I'm used to seeing. Well done.
I think by now I've read enough LitRPG to be able to rate such books without being biased when it comes to judging their quality. I say this because most litRPG simply lacks the oomph that a reader of High Fantasy is used to, so it simply cannot be judged with the same criteria. Moreover, most of these books are self/indie published, so they don't really follow the same "formal" structure of story arches that traditional publishers tend to prefer. With that in mind, I give this book 4 stars.
A solid addition to the genre, this was a most pleasant listen. I finished it wanting more. It is enjoyable when the genre is explored beyond the reincarnated in another world angle that seems to comprise most of its peers in the niche, and here the system seems to be an afterthought to the characters, but not to the story, which shows how naturally it was woven into the story. Where it falls short is in the tension and emotion, especially at the climax, it felt like there was a missed opportunity to give the story more depth. Still, can't wait for the next book!
With a five star rating system, five stars is anything from 81% to 100%. This is 100% a great read. The mc and his mentor were very well written, even the rich kid. You really felt for the characters. Great action, adventure, world building, character logic, and even some intrigue. A very enjoyable read and a very safe book to try. Some concerns for the next book though. With only one female character and one not well developed, I have some concerns there. Also there wasn’t a lot of character interaction and dialogue (which was a good thing), so I’m worried the next book will take the focus off of the action / adventure piece and move toward more relationships. And please, I’m begging, please don’t move to a school / academy setting… please.
What started as a promising concept turned into endless repetitive action scenes that lulled my brain into a numb state. I kept having to go back and reread sections to see what I missed when I zoned out. But the same thing kept happening until this book became a chore to read.
I managed to make it through to the end of the book. However, I am not at all confident that I actually read the whole book, as I zoned out for large parts of it. I'll have to re-read this if I want to continue with this series. Sadly, I think I'm more likely to just forget it and move on.
It's a 2-star read for me, but it gets an extra star to give it the benefit of the doubt, as I think those more interested in action-heavy books will get more from this than I did.
Generally pretty well written. Progression system doesn't make a lot of sense. MC kill many thousands of monsters (of a higher level) to increase his level. It's so impractical that most people with combat classes shouldn't have more than a handful of levels when they die of old age.
But even so, the MC should still be significantly higher level given that he's been killing hundreds to thousands of monsters every day for ten years. Or at least that's what's stated.
The quantity of just don't add up. When you read it I would suggest dividing all his kill counts by 10 in your head for it to make sense.
My reviews are my own. If you liked this book, I’m glad you enjoyed it. If not, I respect your opinion. This is merely my opinion, so let's keep it courteous.
The story is well written, and I did enjoy the slow pace. This is not a fast-paced, packed story, so if that is what you are looking for, this story is not for you. What I didn't like was the multi-POV and some of the side characters. I disliked the female character the most, so knowing that the next book will include her makes me drop the series at this point. If you didn't mind her, the story is entertaining and interesting.
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Good book. Well balanced, MC appears OP at the beginning, but as the difficulty ramps up he has difficulty keeping ahead of the curve. The skills are also interesting, particularly the disappointment of getting a skill that didn't do what he wanted and had to wait for it to advance for it to be closer to what he needed.
It looks like in book 2 Velik will be getting some education on something other than killing monsters, so I'm interested to see where this goes.
Note to self: not bad, but it starts with the the MC at a decent enough level and already mastering their class, so it reads like a light-litrpg at best, and normal fantasy with numbers at worst. Leveling and stats don't matter so much, since leveling takes a while and the MC has already had their class for years.
If that's not an issue, then it's a nice book. It's not my jam, so I'm moving on after a third listened.
This was a different take on the litrpg but I liked it. It was nice to focus on the story more and let the levels be more of a secondary focus. Good character development and a good story. Slightly more gruesome than my personal preference and it always throws me off when I read English slang and profanity in a fantasy world but in the whole I would recommend it as a good read. Thanks for the story d.e. Sherman!
Best read in a while. A kid just fooling around and something bad happens. It happens all the time. To grow up thinking it’s his fault. Again happens all the time. For him to try to make amends. Doesn’t happen all the time. The logistics and leveling up are wacky. I mean he kills thousands of demons and only gets a few levels. I would give this book a 31/2 but I rounded up. Actually looking forward to the next book
Very well written! I read a lot of LitRPG and this was refreshing. I found the beginning to be interesting. I enjoyed the story being contained in a LitRPG world. This isn’t novel but there are too many quick isekai starts in books. I found the story to be compelling and the game system to be well thought out. The story had some surprises along the way too. Great read!
Solid read start to end. LitRPG lite which is how I like it. Protagonist gets more likeable as the story moves along and the writing quality is solid. Definitely feels like the first step to a longer series, but is a fully contained story in its own right. Will be reading the next when it comes out.
An unorthodox start with an already grown character felt like the middle of a story rather than the beginning, but once I got over that initial awkwardness the story was smooth. A few parts seemed rushed or urgency wasn’t conveyed convincingly, but this is a far better than average storyteller compared to most litrpg offerings.
Velik is a reluctant hero to an interesting new series. Although traumatically changed at 7 years old, he manages to survive on his own in the wild for a decade. Considering how poorly the local towns treat him, it’s amazing he cared enough to stick around to help. A good read.
Just finished with the third and final book in the series and I thought it was great. The MC is a loner (you will find out why) and is lacking in social skills but you still want to root for him and his cause. Fight scenes were good and his skills progression made sense.
It wasn't bad at all. I enjoyed the characters and the small introduction into this world. No isekai, simply a progression world. What definitely was not for me were the endless descriptions of fights. I simply don't care about that at all. But I can just read over those, so it's fine. I'll continue the series to see where the story goes.
Great character progression and world so far looking forward to following along with this adventure. First time in a while reading gamelit in bed and wanting to stay up to read more.