First off, I'd like to thank Lydia Llyod and her team for providing me with a free ARC in exchange for an honest review. I really appreciate the opportunity. And please go and follow Lydia on Instagram. Her page is amazing.
"When the Duke Loved Me" by Lydia Lloyd is advertised as a trope-heavy historical enemies-to-lovers romance with lots of spice. The story revolves around Catherine Foster and John Breminister, whose families have been caught up in feud for a long time. When John's father's will dictates him to find Mary Foster, Catherine's aunt, in order to secure his sister's dowry, John has no other option but to team up with Catherine to find the scandalous woman. In exchange for her help, Catherine will receive the money she needs to re-establish her fallen from grace family. When hate turns to lust and lust turns to love and a big secret is revealed, Catherine and John have to figure out if and how they can get their HEA...
Since "When the Duke Loved Me" is the author's debut, I'll review it as such. I don't think debuts have to be perfect or meet the standard of well-established authors. Debuts are the first toe an authors dips in the scene, and as such, I will look at this novel.
Firstly, I liked Lloyd's writing style. It's very easy and casual. Great for international readers. I especially enjoyed parts of the inner monologue and dialogue between the characters. They were funny yet revealed a lot about the characters as people. John and Catherine had (at parts) great chemistry, though it didn't wove through the entire novel. Secondly, every plot line that was introduced was eventually resolved, aka no loose ends when finishing the book. Thirdly, many aspects of the story were interesting and fun. There was lots of potential there, but not everything executed in a way that made me jolt from my seat. I enjoyed the rakish friend group of John and how they interacted with John's sister. The loyalty and bromance among those four was very cute, though they had a tendency to talk about women as if they were kettle which I did not appreciate.
Back to John and Catherine as a couple. I think the idea of them is better than what you get. Their whole romance is based on insta-lust, which I don't hate, but I didn't really feel the transition from lust to love. It as more like one moment to the next they were in love. I missed heart-felt conversations, the feeling that they truly started to get to know each other and learn to properly communicate. It was simply a finger snap, and they wanted to get married. John didn't even have to convince Catherine that they should. Whether it was based on the fact they slept together or that they were in love, Catherine was just cool with it when John announced their engagement. No inner turmoil whatsoever. And when Catherine left unannounced, she sat in her home waiting for John because "he had to come back to her." It wasn't like she ran away without a word...
Plot wise, the novel felt a bit messy. Like the story started off as Catherine and John having to go on a road trip to find Catherine's aunt and then suddenly Catherine was posing as John's sister governess and until some random lady at a masquerade mentioned Mary Foster, it was almost irrelevant that they had to find this woman. The whole set up of John's father's will was silly enough, but when everything else got put on top, it just got sillier and sillier. And I don't hate silly romances. (I love Tessa Dare), but it just lost its ties to something that felt real.
This book suffered from something that Tessa Bailey's book often suffered from: writing books about tropes rather than writing a story. "When the Duke Loved Me" is a perfect example of this flaw. I know Lydia is known on Instagram for her posts about tropes, and this book fits her social media personality, but looking at this book without any of this context, it's just not working so well. You can't pack a book with fun tropes and hope a story starts forming because it doesn't. It simply felt jumpy and not thought through because it appeared she just wanted to make certain tropes happen instead of telling a proper story.
Then there was Catherine's hot girl hobby of writing stories about historical landmarks which was just there give her a bit more of a personality and give a little bit "that was something one could have as a hobby in regency times" but nothing else.
Overall, I see potential with Lydia. Everything that can turn into a great series is here, even though her craft still needs some filing, which is fine. For a historical romance debut, I think it is worth a try, and I'll definitely keep an eye on her next publication in 2024 because I think Lydia has much potential as an author. This is her first novel, which I feel is written for her following on social media, and for that, I think it does what she wanted it to do. But I hope that I'll see something more from her in the future than writing about tropes. Well deserved 3 stars.