The Enchanting Eclipse, is a solid debut novel. While it aligns with contemporary romance (closed door spice), the author draws on her own real life story to carefully, and respectfully present the dark realities substance abuse and addiction, very complicated, toxic family dynamics, sexual assault, mental health and PTSD, small town complexities, being poor and the choices people have to make to pull themselves out of and rise above harmful situations, sex work, challenging the beliefs systems and morality one is raised in, lacking self-confidence and self-worth. The novel then lifts us out of the darkness, and looks to offer healing through resilience, reclamation, self-empowerment, sisterhood, and love (self, platonic, and romantic).
As this is the author’s debut novel, there are some areas that gave me some pause. To be fair though, as she continues to write, I fully expect that we’ll see the growth and refinement in her writing in regard to these areas:
1. The author initially presents the novel in a first person POV, then later intentionally switches to a third person POV. The first person POV struggled a bit with “telling” versus “showing”, and left us a bit out of scene. The MC, Eclipse, also felt distant- I was definitely engaged with the storyline, but felt like I was being kept at arms length as a reader. I would have liked to get to know her more closely- know more of her history earlier on to feel more pulled in. Still, I think an argument can be made in defense of that style- being that this character was dealing with trauma and was very guarded, keeping her true vulnerability shielded and being unwilling (or at best hesitant) to really get close with anyone for a good portion of the book. However the switch to third person POV, we are more in-scene, and it feels like more of those barriers come down.
2. The novel covers a lot. A lot. And it can feel a little too sequential at times. I think there are some minor transitional scenes that I would have rather seen cut out in exchange for delving deeper into and expanding on some of the more emotional moments of the book.
3. Let’s talk Logan for a minute. We are introduced to Logan in the section of the book that is third person POV. I think, since he wasn’t presented through Eclipse’s narrative POV, I would have liked to get to know him more unrelated to his thoughts about/interactions with Eclipse. Most of his scenes, even when Eclipse is not physically present, revolved around Eclipse- thinking about her, planning something for her, wrestling with his emotions for her, seeing her etc. And yes, I know this is technically a romance and all of that is absolutely wonderful and important- but I would have loved a bit more of getting to know who Logan was, flushing him out a bit more, outside of the context of Eclipse.
Overall, this work is important. It provides visibility and acknowledgment and humanizes the struggles of women who are so often unfairly judged and considered taboo, cast off to the edge of “decent” society. This novel is a love letter- a letter of hope, for those who can relate to any of the many very real, very difficult themes.
I look forward to reading the next book.