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332 pages, Paperback
First published June 2, 2014
1. The first few pages feels like dejavu from reading that one particular famous book/movie.
2. As everybody had mentioned in their reviews, YES this book will definitely benefit from PROPER editorial, considering some linguistics misses and things that could've been described much better, much more or much less, with proper editorial. (ex: cultural differences in describing something in different languages, on and on dictation of Jonathan's powers everytime he punch something, etc etc)
3. Storywise it's very interesting and it has potentials if further explored. Though it's somewhat classic second-chance-in-life story (this type of story was big in the 90s), the author has succeed in making the book a page-turning experience. I cant explain why, but it got me forcing my eyes open at 3 am out of curiosity of what's gonna happen next.
4. Character development are not well explored, in my opinion. It's rather easy to judge/dislike the characters because readers don't get involved deeply as to how and why they do things, reasons and motivations, etc etc. Jonathan and Elizabeth sounds a lot like the typical piece-of-meat with no real depth. Same goes with the romance parts.
5. The ending don't sit well with me. So Jonathan was an evil person in his life, but then in "second" life he got to build a whole new life, totally disregarding wholly the fact that he still has a broken family, beaten wife, brokenhearted child etc and no try-fix-and-be-better or anything that sounds like repentance. And the fact that Elizabeth got her second chance mostly from other person's effort? What happened there?
All and all, i think this was an OK book, mostly because of the stellar story idea. Putting all critics aside when reading, this makes an easy reading with no further/deeper thoughts type thing :)
-I received this e-book from author in exchange for an honest review-