In the last 20 pages of the book, the author uses the word “fierce” over 17 times.
The author also uses two word descriptors WAY too much, for example: “Sophie and Karl stood at the front, beneath the grand, silver statue of the Moon Goddess, her serene, graceful figure bathed in a soft, silvery glow. The priestess stood before them, her voice a soft, melodic murmur that seemed to drift through the quiet, hushed air.” (Grand, silver; serene, graceful; soft, silvery; soft, melodic; quiet, hushed). Also the combination of “wild, fierce” and “dark, fierce” was SO over used.
The plot itself was weak, I know it was less than 200 pages but there was so much fluff it could’ve been half that size.