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Such Persuasions as These: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
EVERYONE IN MERYTON KNOWS of Elizabeth Bennet’s peculiar betrothal with Captain Frederick Wentworth. Elizabeth has relished the uncommon engagement that was the result of childhood silliness, using it to ward off undesired suitors.
WHEN FITZWILLIAM DARCY arrives in Hertfordshire, it is clear the proud, unpleasant gentleman is in dire need of Elizabeth’s help. To help put him at ease, and encourage him to accept her friendship, she tells him she is spoken for and thus can have no designs on him. As circumstances—and Darcy’s unwitting comfort in Elizabeth’s company—throw them together, however, she glimpses a side of him hidden from the world—his quiet generosity, self-deprecating humour, and deep sense of honour. Soon recognizing that she is falling in love with Mr Darcy, she regrets ever having spoken of Frederick.
WHEN THE DASHING CAPTAIN WENTWORTH arrives at Netherfield Park, Darcy and Elizabeth are both unprepared for the revelations that come to light. Can they be persuaded to overcome their fears and tear down their walls to claim the love they both long for? Or will guilt and the pain of past betrayals keep them apart forever?
Such Persuasions as These is a Pride and Prejudice Variation with just a splash of Persuasion. It is a friends to lovers romance. Content is closed door and angst is moderate.
WHEN FITZWILLIAM DARCY arrives in Hertfordshire, it is clear the proud, unpleasant gentleman is in dire need of Elizabeth’s help. To help put him at ease, and encourage him to accept her friendship, she tells him she is spoken for and thus can have no designs on him. As circumstances—and Darcy’s unwitting comfort in Elizabeth’s company—throw them together, however, she glimpses a side of him hidden from the world—his quiet generosity, self-deprecating humour, and deep sense of honour. Soon recognizing that she is falling in love with Mr Darcy, she regrets ever having spoken of Frederick.
WHEN THE DASHING CAPTAIN WENTWORTH arrives at Netherfield Park, Darcy and Elizabeth are both unprepared for the revelations that come to light. Can they be persuaded to overcome their fears and tear down their walls to claim the love they both long for? Or will guilt and the pain of past betrayals keep them apart forever?
Such Persuasions as These is a Pride and Prejudice Variation with just a splash of Persuasion. It is a friends to lovers romance. Content is closed door and angst is moderate.
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August 26, 2025
A bitter and suspicious Darcy.
“I should have left you to the solace of your bitterness and disdain. You deserve one another.”
Elizabeth says this to Darcy and it pretty much sums up the undercurrent of the story.
Darcy calls out Wickham after Ramsgate and both are injured. Angry and in physical pain, it's an even more bitter Darcy who greets Meryton at the Assembly. Our dear girl tries to help him. To put him at ease she assures him she's off the market. And a friendship is born. But, it leads to deeper feelings, which only ends up being a recipe for disaster when truth is revealed.
Darcy was particularly harsh in this variation. He starts out darkly bitter and reverts back to it with what he believes to be Elizabeth's further betrayal, at which point he pulls no punches.
Wentworth, a childhood friend and with his own despair to overcome, plays pied piper for Bingley and Darcy. I loved the added dynamics of this brother type personality for the Bennet girls.
Ultimately, Darcy figures himself out, and makes a change, but it was hard for me to like him by that point. Perhaps I needed to see him grovel much more.
There is adorable mascot in the form of a lap loving cat. It seems to have a gift for easing confessions out the library visitors.
A solid second offering from this author. I look forward to reading more of her work in the future.
“I should have left you to the solace of your bitterness and disdain. You deserve one another.”
Elizabeth says this to Darcy and it pretty much sums up the undercurrent of the story.
Darcy calls out Wickham after Ramsgate and both are injured. Angry and in physical pain, it's an even more bitter Darcy who greets Meryton at the Assembly. Our dear girl tries to help him. To put him at ease she assures him she's off the market. And a friendship is born. But, it leads to deeper feelings, which only ends up being a recipe for disaster when truth is revealed.
Darcy was particularly harsh in this variation. He starts out darkly bitter and reverts back to it with what he believes to be Elizabeth's further betrayal, at which point he pulls no punches.
Wentworth, a childhood friend and with his own despair to overcome, plays pied piper for Bingley and Darcy. I loved the added dynamics of this brother type personality for the Bennet girls.
Ultimately, Darcy figures himself out, and makes a change, but it was hard for me to like him by that point. Perhaps I needed to see him grovel much more.
There is adorable mascot in the form of a lap loving cat. It seems to have a gift for easing confessions out the library visitors.
A solid second offering from this author. I look forward to reading more of her work in the future.
July 14, 2025
What does a peculiar engagement, the Netherfield library and a cat have to do with bringing Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy together?
“Time itself slowed. Darcy’s limbs released all strength as an inky void gathered in his periphery. The sky above him tilted. The horizon went askew. Then everything was dark.” (quote from the book)
With a dramatic opening between Mr. Darcy and Mr. Wickham in the Prologue, we are left wondering what has happened to both men. It is not until the second chapter that we learn Mr. Darcy’s fate. It is written all over his face and in his attitude.
“Lizzy, look here – Freddie has finally got his own ship!” (quote from the book)
There is a delightful and unique premise that unfolds within this book! The Bennet family has a close relationship with Captain Frederick Wentworth. So close that he proposed to Elizabeth Bennet, his partner in adventure. Elizabeth has been able to use this attachment to ward off unwanted gentlemen. It is at the assembly that she again uses their ‘peculiar’ engagement toward Mr. Darcy.
“You are in no danger from me, for I have long been spoken for.” (quote from the book)
I love how the story flowed. In spite of his insult, Elizabeth has empathy for Mr. Darcy and sees what others do not. She decides to help him, and the friendship that builds between them was a thing of beauty. You can feel the simmering tentacles of tension sparking betwixt them as they draw closer to each other. Though each work very hard at denying the connection.
“I have been betrayed by those whom I trusted most, and such sins I cannot find it in myself to forgive.” (quote from the book)
However, we all know a reckoning is coming…in the form of Captain Frederick Wentworth. But it is not how either Mr. Darcy or Elizabeth expected. Oh, the repercussions Captain Wentworth’s arrival causes! An epic confrontation between Elizabeth and Darcy. It was painful and each needed to go lick their wounds and try to recover.
“This was the sort of pride that just might cost him the love of a worthy woman.” (quote from the book)
For the most part, this is a gentle and endearing read. The little angst there is, is handled with a deft hand. Yes, we have Miss Bingley manipulating situations to her best advantage, and, of course, Mr. Wickham playing the victim. Then there is Mr. Collins opening mouth and inserting foot. However, I quite liked what the trajectory of his story was. Including Captain Wentworth as a key element to the story was icing on the cake. And let’s not forget ‘Italics’ the cat!
I thoroughly enjoyed this second book of Ms. Stratford. Her debut novel, ‘Some Particular Evil’ was a gem!
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving my review.
August 14, 2025
YES!
YES!
YES!
Ya gotta read this one.
'Nuff said.
YES!
YES!
Ya gotta read this one.
'Nuff said.
July 29, 2025
A highly entertaining P&P and Persuasion crossover. Frederick Wentworth and the Bennets have been friends for years and Elizabeth has used their assumed engagement to fend off unwanted suitors. When she meets Darcy at the Meryton assembly, she uses her betrothed status to make him feel comfortable and proceeds to help him navigate Hertfordshire society. Then Wentworth shows up again and things start to get complicated. I enjoyed everything about this story and heartily recommend it.
I received an advanced review copy for free and I am voluntarily leaving this review.
I received an advanced review copy for free and I am voluntarily leaving this review.
September 19, 2025
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In Such Persuasions as These, Mr. Darcy arrives in Hertfordshire recovering from a recent injury, in a foul mood and quickly earning the neighborhood’s dislike. Seeing past his aloofness, Elizabeth steps in to help, but to avoid any suspicion of being a fortune hunter, she claims to be engaged to her longtime friend, Captain Wentworth. Because of this little deception, instead of sparring, she and Darcy build a bond through honest conversations and shared moments, until Wentworth himself returns, forcing them to confront truths that could change their relationship.
I absolutely loved the premise of this book because it brought my second favorite Austen hero into the world of my favorite Austen novel. Having Captain Wentworth in this story was a treat, and even though he shares a special relationship with Elizabeth, I particularly enjoyed seeing how quickly he formed a bond with Bingley and Darcy. The camaraderie that is developed between them is delightful, and I loved seeing how they supported each other in their romantic pursuits.
The premise also allowed Elizabeth and Darcy to build a beautiful and solid friendship that was based on meaningful dialogue, shared views of the world, and romantic moments. Their relationship, and especially how it was developed, is my favorite aspect of the book because their relationship feels not only believable, but also gradual, profound, and grounded in real interactions. On top of that, the author’s skill in crafting each scene and linking conversations together makes the book very emotional, I could feel everything the characters were experiencing, and that kept me glued to the book from the beginning until the end.
Darcy and Elizabeth’s relationship is truly beautiful in this book, and even their arguments and disagreements are powerful and well-executed. I especially loved Darcy’s reaction when he discovered the truth about Elizabeth and Wentworth, as well as the way Elizabeth handled the situation. Although Elizabeth is somewhat different in this book, more empathetic and widely liked, this moment highlights that, admirable as she is, she still has flaws. Seeing her inner turmoil and how she handles everything that is happening was really interesting.
Although I really enjoyed seeing Elizabeth reflect on her actions and feelings, and the mature way she analyzed situations, Darcy was my favorite character in this book. I loved how the author portrayed him as an honorable, resolute, and romantic man. The opening scene, which is absolutely incredible and grabs the reader from the start, sets the tone for who Darcy will be throughout the story. I absolutely enjoyed his loyalty to his family, his devotion to all his friends, Wentworth included, and the depth of his responses to Elizabeth. We see Darcy going from admiration to disappointment, anger, and love. The progression through all these emotions was both powerful and compelling and he was a true romantic hero 😊
Some secondary characters are interesting additions to this novel too, the Bingley/Jane and Mary/Collins romances were quite interesting, and even though I don’t think Wickham’s last action was truly necessary for the narrative, it did allow us to see an interesting side of Lydia as well.
Overall, Such Persuasions as These is a wonderful book that kept me hooked from the beggining until the end. It is incredibly well written; the characters are full of depth, and it gives us a truly swoon-worthy romance, full of emotion. I absolutely loved this book and highly recommend it! It’s one of the best I’ve read this year 😊
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In Such Persuasions as These, Mr. Darcy arrives in Hertfordshire recovering from a recent injury, in a foul mood and quickly earning the neighborhood’s dislike. Seeing past his aloofness, Elizabeth steps in to help, but to avoid any suspicion of being a fortune hunter, she claims to be engaged to her longtime friend, Captain Wentworth. Because of this little deception, instead of sparring, she and Darcy build a bond through honest conversations and shared moments, until Wentworth himself returns, forcing them to confront truths that could change their relationship.
I absolutely loved the premise of this book because it brought my second favorite Austen hero into the world of my favorite Austen novel. Having Captain Wentworth in this story was a treat, and even though he shares a special relationship with Elizabeth, I particularly enjoyed seeing how quickly he formed a bond with Bingley and Darcy. The camaraderie that is developed between them is delightful, and I loved seeing how they supported each other in their romantic pursuits.
The premise also allowed Elizabeth and Darcy to build a beautiful and solid friendship that was based on meaningful dialogue, shared views of the world, and romantic moments. Their relationship, and especially how it was developed, is my favorite aspect of the book because their relationship feels not only believable, but also gradual, profound, and grounded in real interactions. On top of that, the author’s skill in crafting each scene and linking conversations together makes the book very emotional, I could feel everything the characters were experiencing, and that kept me glued to the book from the beginning until the end.
Darcy and Elizabeth’s relationship is truly beautiful in this book, and even their arguments and disagreements are powerful and well-executed. I especially loved Darcy’s reaction when he discovered the truth about Elizabeth and Wentworth, as well as the way Elizabeth handled the situation. Although Elizabeth is somewhat different in this book, more empathetic and widely liked, this moment highlights that, admirable as she is, she still has flaws. Seeing her inner turmoil and how she handles everything that is happening was really interesting.
Although I really enjoyed seeing Elizabeth reflect on her actions and feelings, and the mature way she analyzed situations, Darcy was my favorite character in this book. I loved how the author portrayed him as an honorable, resolute, and romantic man. The opening scene, which is absolutely incredible and grabs the reader from the start, sets the tone for who Darcy will be throughout the story. I absolutely enjoyed his loyalty to his family, his devotion to all his friends, Wentworth included, and the depth of his responses to Elizabeth. We see Darcy going from admiration to disappointment, anger, and love. The progression through all these emotions was both powerful and compelling and he was a true romantic hero 😊
Some secondary characters are interesting additions to this novel too, the Bingley/Jane and Mary/Collins romances were quite interesting, and even though I don’t think Wickham’s last action was truly necessary for the narrative, it did allow us to see an interesting side of Lydia as well.
Overall, Such Persuasions as These is a wonderful book that kept me hooked from the beggining until the end. It is incredibly well written; the characters are full of depth, and it gives us a truly swoon-worthy romance, full of emotion. I absolutely loved this book and highly recommend it! It’s one of the best I’ve read this year 😊
August 15, 2025
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars
This is an impressive Pride and Prejudice/Persuasion mash-up. The storyline follows P&P, but adding "Freddie" Wentworth as Elizabeth Bennet's lifelong friend is an inspired idea that affects the outcomes of both stories.
This particular Lizzy Bennet actually is good at sketching characters, recognizing that Mr. Darcy is obviously (to her) in pain when she first sees him at the Meryton assembly. (He is recovering from an injury suffered in a duel with Wickham in Ramsgate.) Rather than taking his insulting words regarding her personally, she understands that for some reason he is hiding his affliction from his friend Mr. Bingley but is not well enough to dance. His haughty manner and dismissive comment, which was overheard by others in addition to herself, will surely make him a pariah in the neighborhood if she doesn't assist him... so she does.
When she approaches Darcy, he assumes she is another typical fortune hunter but is reassured when she discloses that she has no personal interest in him, as she is betrothed to a naval officer named Wentworth, who is currently at sea. This relaxes Darcy enough to allow her to lead him around the room, introducing him to her neighbors and initiating topics of conversation in which he can comfortably engage. By the end of the assembly, he and the Meryton community have formed mutually positive impressions.
From that point forward, when Miss Elizabeth and he are both in attendence at the same social function, he seeks her out to smooth his way with her neighbors. This changes the dynamics between them considerably. It's not long before they develop deeper feelings for each other, making it appear that they might be on the way to an early HEA.
But then Captain Wentworth returns from sea bearing news, and his appearance immediately changes everything.
Ms. Stafford is quickly becoming an author to watch for. Her writing style is as engaging as the plot. Here, she's made Elizabeth's character a bit softer and Darcy's a bit harsher than JA's creations but not excessively so. His reaction to a perceived deception is somewhat over the top, but it serves to push the storyline forward. And I love that things are resolved in such a way that Captain Wentworth gets an earlier HEA than in canon.
Content is clean.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This is an impressive Pride and Prejudice/Persuasion mash-up. The storyline follows P&P, but adding "Freddie" Wentworth as Elizabeth Bennet's lifelong friend is an inspired idea that affects the outcomes of both stories.
This particular Lizzy Bennet actually is good at sketching characters, recognizing that Mr. Darcy is obviously (to her) in pain when she first sees him at the Meryton assembly. (He is recovering from an injury suffered in a duel with Wickham in Ramsgate.) Rather than taking his insulting words regarding her personally, she understands that for some reason he is hiding his affliction from his friend Mr. Bingley but is not well enough to dance. His haughty manner and dismissive comment, which was overheard by others in addition to herself, will surely make him a pariah in the neighborhood if she doesn't assist him... so she does.
When she approaches Darcy, he assumes she is another typical fortune hunter but is reassured when she discloses that she has no personal interest in him, as she is betrothed to a naval officer named Wentworth, who is currently at sea. This relaxes Darcy enough to allow her to lead him around the room, introducing him to her neighbors and initiating topics of conversation in which he can comfortably engage. By the end of the assembly, he and the Meryton community have formed mutually positive impressions.
From that point forward, when Miss Elizabeth and he are both in attendence at the same social function, he seeks her out to smooth his way with her neighbors. This changes the dynamics between them considerably. It's not long before they develop deeper feelings for each other, making it appear that they might be on the way to an early HEA.
But then Captain Wentworth returns from sea bearing news, and his appearance immediately changes everything.
Ms. Stafford is quickly becoming an author to watch for. Her writing style is as engaging as the plot. Here, she's made Elizabeth's character a bit softer and Darcy's a bit harsher than JA's creations but not excessively so. His reaction to a perceived deception is somewhat over the top, but it serves to push the storyline forward. And I love that things are resolved in such a way that Captain Wentworth gets an earlier HEA than in canon.
Content is clean.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
August 18, 2025
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This pride and prejudice variation begins at the Meryton Assembly and ends with the Netherfield Park Ball.
Fitzwilliam Darcy, slowly recovering from a duelling wound, reluctantly attends the Assembly with his friend, Charles Bingley.
When he utters the famous insult, Elizabeth Bennet has already noticed that he is grumpy because he is in pain.
She puts Darcy at ease, reassuring him that she is already betrothed, so not interested in compromising him. A friendship develops between them.
This Darcy is sweet and funny (although he has a vicious tongue when he thinks he has been betrayed). Both Darcy and Elizabeth are falling in love. He struggles with the knowledge that she belongs to another, while she desperately wishes that she never mentioned her peculiar betrothal.
I really enjoyed this. I liked the introduction of Captain Frederick Wentworth as Elizabeth's childhood best friend. A good read.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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This pride and prejudice variation begins at the Meryton Assembly and ends with the Netherfield Park Ball.
Fitzwilliam Darcy, slowly recovering from a duelling wound, reluctantly attends the Assembly with his friend, Charles Bingley.
When he utters the famous insult, Elizabeth Bennet has already noticed that he is grumpy because he is in pain.
She puts Darcy at ease, reassuring him that she is already betrothed, so not interested in compromising him. A friendship develops between them.
This Darcy is sweet and funny (although he has a vicious tongue when he thinks he has been betrayed). Both Darcy and Elizabeth are falling in love. He struggles with the knowledge that she belongs to another, while she desperately wishes that she never mentioned her peculiar betrothal.
I really enjoyed this. I liked the introduction of Captain Frederick Wentworth as Elizabeth's childhood best friend. A good read.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
July 31, 2025
A Worthy Crossover and a Writer to Watch
4.5* rounded up
Such Persuasions as These is a Pride and Prejudice/Persuasion crossover that caught my attention from the very start with a prologue that left me eager to discover what would unfold next.
The premise is quite original—Elizabeth claims an engagement to Captain Wentworth to fend off unwanted suitors and, in Darcy’s case, to alleviate his usual fear of entrapment by fortune hunters. Recognizing his unease, she mentions it to Darcy simply to put him at ease in company.
A unique aspect of this variation is that the entire story takes place before and during the Netherfield Ball, yet I never missed the usual Pride and Prejudice milestones. It felt complete, contained, and thoroughly engaging, as the friendship between Darcy and Elizabeth develops with page time mostly devoted to them or their introspections.
I especially liked how Captain Wentworth was worked into the plot. His presence brings a Persuasion flavour that complements the main story beautifully, without stealing the focus from ODC. Captain Wentworth introduces a sense of rivalry for Darcy, and he also lends a hand to him and Bingley as events unfold. The captain eventually gets a happy ending of his own too, thanks to Darcy.
If I had a slight hesitation, it would be the whole ‘deception’ bit and what happens when Darcy finds out the truth. It’s hard to explain, and maybe it’s just me, but it felt a little much ado about nothing. Elizabeth never actually tells him, though she tries, and Darcy overreacts when the truth comes out. With everything they’d already shared, that particular aspect of the plot didn’t quite work for me. Still, the story needed a turning point, and that minor hesitation aside, it was well expressed and didn’t take away from how much I enjoyed the book.
But it’s truly the author’s writing and her clear and strong command of language and storytelling that impresses me most. It isn’t flowery or padded with meaningless filler. Her narrative stays focused, and every scene moves the story forward. The dialogue feels natural, and I never found myself skimming through or losing interest. I loved her debut novel, Some Particular Evil, and now, with two books to her name, it’s easy to see that Emilia Stratford’s storytelling is focused, clever, and thoroughly absorbing—she’s quickly becoming a favourite.
Oh! I can’t forget to mention a library-dwelling cat who may or may not be a matchmaking genius—an utterly charming touch.
Highly recommend.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. I’ve preordered the published version for my Kindle library.
4.5* rounded up
Such Persuasions as These is a Pride and Prejudice/Persuasion crossover that caught my attention from the very start with a prologue that left me eager to discover what would unfold next.
The premise is quite original—Elizabeth claims an engagement to Captain Wentworth to fend off unwanted suitors and, in Darcy’s case, to alleviate his usual fear of entrapment by fortune hunters. Recognizing his unease, she mentions it to Darcy simply to put him at ease in company.
A unique aspect of this variation is that the entire story takes place before and during the Netherfield Ball, yet I never missed the usual Pride and Prejudice milestones. It felt complete, contained, and thoroughly engaging, as the friendship between Darcy and Elizabeth develops with page time mostly devoted to them or their introspections.
I especially liked how Captain Wentworth was worked into the plot. His presence brings a Persuasion flavour that complements the main story beautifully, without stealing the focus from ODC. Captain Wentworth introduces a sense of rivalry for Darcy, and he also lends a hand to him and Bingley as events unfold. The captain eventually gets a happy ending of his own too, thanks to Darcy.
If I had a slight hesitation, it would be the whole ‘deception’ bit and what happens when Darcy finds out the truth. It’s hard to explain, and maybe it’s just me, but it felt a little much ado about nothing. Elizabeth never actually tells him, though she tries, and Darcy overreacts when the truth comes out. With everything they’d already shared, that particular aspect of the plot didn’t quite work for me. Still, the story needed a turning point, and that minor hesitation aside, it was well expressed and didn’t take away from how much I enjoyed the book.
But it’s truly the author’s writing and her clear and strong command of language and storytelling that impresses me most. It isn’t flowery or padded with meaningless filler. Her narrative stays focused, and every scene moves the story forward. The dialogue feels natural, and I never found myself skimming through or losing interest. I loved her debut novel, Some Particular Evil, and now, with two books to her name, it’s easy to see that Emilia Stratford’s storytelling is focused, clever, and thoroughly absorbing—she’s quickly becoming a favourite.
Oh! I can’t forget to mention a library-dwelling cat who may or may not be a matchmaking genius—an utterly charming touch.
Highly recommend.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. I’ve preordered the published version for my Kindle library.
August 15, 2025
Since her childhood Elizabeth finds herself in a peculiar engagement to young Fredrick Wentworth. Now they are both grown and Wentworth is on the brick to make a fortune in the navy.
When the Netherfield party arrives in Meryton Elizabeth senses that Fitzwilliam Darcy is in dire need of her help, he is uncomfortable in company and haunted by ghosts from his past. To put him at ease and to prove that she is not another fortune hunter, Elizabeth tells him about the engagement. Soon a deep friendship between them is established but when Elizabeth feels the first blossoms of love she regrets ever telling Darcy of Wentworth.
When Wentworth comes to visit Longbourn with some news, everything could change for Darcy and Elizabeth. Will they be able to overcome their fears and prejudices? Or will Wentworth’s revelation change nothing? And what about Wentworth himself?
The story was very well written by the author Emilia Stratford. I enjoyed her style of writing very much. This book is her second book and I like it as much as I loved her first book (Some particular evil).
In this variation Fredrick Wentworth is, besides Elizabeth and Darcy, one of the main characters. He is, in a way, engaged to Elizabeth and an old family friend of the Bennet family. I really enjoyed seeing him interact in Meryton and as a friend of the Bennets. I like the idea of a close bond between him and Elizabeth and I enjoyed seeing them in each other’s confidence and telling each other about all topics they have on their hearts.
Fortunately for Elizabeth and Darcy not all is as it seems to be at the beginning. It takes them a really long while and much help from Wentworth, but in the end, Darcy and Elizabeth, as well as Wentworth, find their happiness.
One of my favorite characters was, for sure, Italics, the feline master of Netherfield’s library. I enjoyed ODC interactions with the cat. The cat is the one who gets to know all secrets, all secret feelings and all anger. But with its presence the cat is able to smooth the affected person and give them peace, comfort and clarity. There are many beautiful scenes with Darcy, Elizabeth and Italics in the library.
I like that Darcy and Elizabeth start as friends in this story and slowly fall for each other. They get to know each other by heart before there is love between them. But because of Elizabeth's engagement to Wentworth their way isn’t a smooth one. There is much heartbreak for both of them. These feelings of despair were very well described by the author. I really felt for Darcy and Elizabeth. But there is not only heartbreak between them, there are also many magical moments between them in the book. Most of them take place in Netherfield’s library (with Italics) but I also like their midnight time-killing (they play cards) and their near kiss ;-)
Wickham and Caroline are part of the story and as usual they try to harm Darcy and Elizabeth, but most of the time Elizabeth’s engagement to Wentworth and Darcy and Elizabeth’s feelings after Wentworth's revelation keeps ODC apart.
If you like to know how Elizabeth’s childhood engagement to Fredrick Wentworth will affect the relationship of Darcy and Elizabeth you should definitely read this excellent book.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of this book via booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
When the Netherfield party arrives in Meryton Elizabeth senses that Fitzwilliam Darcy is in dire need of her help, he is uncomfortable in company and haunted by ghosts from his past. To put him at ease and to prove that she is not another fortune hunter, Elizabeth tells him about the engagement. Soon a deep friendship between them is established but when Elizabeth feels the first blossoms of love she regrets ever telling Darcy of Wentworth.
When Wentworth comes to visit Longbourn with some news, everything could change for Darcy and Elizabeth. Will they be able to overcome their fears and prejudices? Or will Wentworth’s revelation change nothing? And what about Wentworth himself?
The story was very well written by the author Emilia Stratford. I enjoyed her style of writing very much. This book is her second book and I like it as much as I loved her first book (Some particular evil).
In this variation Fredrick Wentworth is, besides Elizabeth and Darcy, one of the main characters. He is, in a way, engaged to Elizabeth and an old family friend of the Bennet family. I really enjoyed seeing him interact in Meryton and as a friend of the Bennets. I like the idea of a close bond between him and Elizabeth and I enjoyed seeing them in each other’s confidence and telling each other about all topics they have on their hearts.
Fortunately for Elizabeth and Darcy not all is as it seems to be at the beginning. It takes them a really long while and much help from Wentworth, but in the end, Darcy and Elizabeth, as well as Wentworth, find their happiness.
One of my favorite characters was, for sure, Italics, the feline master of Netherfield’s library. I enjoyed ODC interactions with the cat. The cat is the one who gets to know all secrets, all secret feelings and all anger. But with its presence the cat is able to smooth the affected person and give them peace, comfort and clarity. There are many beautiful scenes with Darcy, Elizabeth and Italics in the library.
I like that Darcy and Elizabeth start as friends in this story and slowly fall for each other. They get to know each other by heart before there is love between them. But because of Elizabeth's engagement to Wentworth their way isn’t a smooth one. There is much heartbreak for both of them. These feelings of despair were very well described by the author. I really felt for Darcy and Elizabeth. But there is not only heartbreak between them, there are also many magical moments between them in the book. Most of them take place in Netherfield’s library (with Italics) but I also like their midnight time-killing (they play cards) and their near kiss ;-)
Wickham and Caroline are part of the story and as usual they try to harm Darcy and Elizabeth, but most of the time Elizabeth’s engagement to Wentworth and Darcy and Elizabeth’s feelings after Wentworth's revelation keeps ODC apart.
If you like to know how Elizabeth’s childhood engagement to Fredrick Wentworth will affect the relationship of Darcy and Elizabeth you should definitely read this excellent book.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of this book via booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 25, 2025
An original and well thought version
A great idea that is the cause of things going in an unexpected direction. The addition of a childhood friendship with Frederick Wentworth is a great way for Elizabeth and Darcy to begin their relationship without the usual expectation. A most entertaining and enjoyable story!
A great idea that is the cause of things going in an unexpected direction. The addition of a childhood friendship with Frederick Wentworth is a great way for Elizabeth and Darcy to begin their relationship without the usual expectation. A most entertaining and enjoyable story!
September 2, 2025
Wonderful
Elizabeth's childhood friend is Frederick Wentworth. As young children, he declares his intentions to marry Lizzy. When Elizabeth is sixteen, he gives her permission to use his early declaration if she needs to ward off unwanted suitors. At the Meryton assembly, Elizabeth uses it to put Darcy at ease, and allow her to befriend him with impunity. Elizabeth and Darcy become good friends, but when the now Captain Wentworth comes for a visit, Darcy believes that Elizabeth is engaged to him. Elizabeth and Darcy have both started to feel strongly about each other.
Although there were a couple of serious plot holes in the story, this book was fun to read. I love the character of Captain Wentworth as a very Bingley-like, engaging gentleman. We're given a swoon worthy Darcy, with the exception of one notable episode. Elizabeth is fabulous. I like these variations wherein Elizabeth sees through Darcy's curmudgeonly behavior at the assembly, and decides to just overcome it. It lets us skip a lot of the usual acrimony between them.
The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly for a heartwarming story with just the right amount of drama.
Elizabeth's childhood friend is Frederick Wentworth. As young children, he declares his intentions to marry Lizzy. When Elizabeth is sixteen, he gives her permission to use his early declaration if she needs to ward off unwanted suitors. At the Meryton assembly, Elizabeth uses it to put Darcy at ease, and allow her to befriend him with impunity. Elizabeth and Darcy become good friends, but when the now Captain Wentworth comes for a visit, Darcy believes that Elizabeth is engaged to him. Elizabeth and Darcy have both started to feel strongly about each other.
Although there were a couple of serious plot holes in the story, this book was fun to read. I love the character of Captain Wentworth as a very Bingley-like, engaging gentleman. We're given a swoon worthy Darcy, with the exception of one notable episode. Elizabeth is fabulous. I like these variations wherein Elizabeth sees through Darcy's curmudgeonly behavior at the assembly, and decides to just overcome it. It lets us skip a lot of the usual acrimony between them.
The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly for a heartwarming story with just the right amount of drama.
July 28, 2025
Implacable Resentment and Abhorrent Disguises
4.5* rounded up
With this sophomore release, Ms. Stratford showcases her talent and developing command of Jane Austen's canon characters and their traits. Here we have Persuasion's Captain Frederick Wentworth added to the mix and providing a welcome bit of gallantry to the usual Pride and Prejudice cast. I found the stories about young Lizzy especially endearing.
There are forty-five chapters and an epilogue, but each one is concise and moves the action along quickly; the ultimate chapter takes place during the Netherfield Ball with a happily ever after for our dear couple.
If you enjoy witty dialogue, romantic interludes, and quick resolution to misunderstandings, I recommend this book to you.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
4.5* rounded up
With this sophomore release, Ms. Stratford showcases her talent and developing command of Jane Austen's canon characters and their traits. Here we have Persuasion's Captain Frederick Wentworth added to the mix and providing a welcome bit of gallantry to the usual Pride and Prejudice cast. I found the stories about young Lizzy especially endearing.
There are forty-five chapters and an epilogue, but each one is concise and moves the action along quickly; the ultimate chapter takes place during the Netherfield Ball with a happily ever after for our dear couple.
If you enjoy witty dialogue, romantic interludes, and quick resolution to misunderstandings, I recommend this book to you.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
August 19, 2025
power of friendship
What a fun idea – melding characters and details from Pride and Prejudice with Persuasion made for a very interesting variation! Introducing Wentworth as a close childhood friend of Lizzie allowed for this beloved story to follow the pattern of misunderstandings and assumptions in a very different way. Loved it!
What a fun idea – melding characters and details from Pride and Prejudice with Persuasion made for a very interesting variation! Introducing Wentworth as a close childhood friend of Lizzie allowed for this beloved story to follow the pattern of misunderstandings and assumptions in a very different way. Loved it!
September 11, 2025
I loved it!
Warning: Contains scenes that would scandalize the ton. Readers of a delicate constitution are advised to keep their fans and vinaigrettes close at hand.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is a Pride and Prejudice Variation with just a splash of Persuasion. It’s a friends to lovers romance, content is closed door and angst is moderate.
Everyone in Merton knows of Elizabeth Bennet’s peculiar betrothal with Captain Frederick Wentworth. Elizabeth has relished the uncommon engagement that was the result of childhood silliness, using it to ward off undesired suitors. When Fitzwilliam Darcy arrives in Hertfordshire, it is clear the proud, unpleasant gentleman is in dire need of Elizabeth’s help. To help put him at ease, and encourage him to accept her friendship, she tells him she is spoken for and thus can have no designs on him. As circumstances, and Darcy’s unwitting comfort in Elizabeth’s company, throw them together, however, she glimpses a side of him hidden from the world, his quiet generosity, self-deprecating humour, and deep sense of honour. Soon recognizing that she is falling in love with Mr Darcy, she regrets ever having spoken of Frederick. When the dashing Captain Wentworth arrives at Netherfield Park, Darcy and Elizabeth are both unprepared for the revelations that come to light. Can they be persuaded to overcome their fears and tear down their walls to claim the love they both long for, or will guilt and the pain of past betrayals keep them apart forever? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
Warning: Contains scenes that would scandalize the ton. Readers of a delicate constitution are advised to keep their fans and vinaigrettes close at hand.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is a Pride and Prejudice Variation with just a splash of Persuasion. It’s a friends to lovers romance, content is closed door and angst is moderate.
Everyone in Merton knows of Elizabeth Bennet’s peculiar betrothal with Captain Frederick Wentworth. Elizabeth has relished the uncommon engagement that was the result of childhood silliness, using it to ward off undesired suitors. When Fitzwilliam Darcy arrives in Hertfordshire, it is clear the proud, unpleasant gentleman is in dire need of Elizabeth’s help. To help put him at ease, and encourage him to accept her friendship, she tells him she is spoken for and thus can have no designs on him. As circumstances, and Darcy’s unwitting comfort in Elizabeth’s company, throw them together, however, she glimpses a side of him hidden from the world, his quiet generosity, self-deprecating humour, and deep sense of honour. Soon recognizing that she is falling in love with Mr Darcy, she regrets ever having spoken of Frederick. When the dashing Captain Wentworth arrives at Netherfield Park, Darcy and Elizabeth are both unprepared for the revelations that come to light. Can they be persuaded to overcome their fears and tear down their walls to claim the love they both long for, or will guilt and the pain of past betrayals keep them apart forever? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
November 23, 2025
It’s such a fun read! I enjoyed it and would definitely recommend!
September 16, 2025
Cute mashup of Pride and Prejudice/Persuasion.
October 28, 2025
Sweet!
I absolutely loved this story. Entirely plausible, engaging, well paced, and true to the character of the original. I highly recommend it!
I absolutely loved this story. Entirely plausible, engaging, well paced, and true to the character of the original. I highly recommend it!
August 26, 2025
Well written, and an interesting view of Elizabeth getting things wrong and Darcy being Darcy but with a lighter and more open approach.
Using Wentworth in a very new approach was delightful ...
and I must say Wickham was dastardly.
Enjoy
Using Wentworth in a very new approach was delightful ...
and I must say Wickham was dastardly.
Enjoy
October 26, 2025
Colonel Wentworth is well used in this P&P variation. The incorporation of Persuasion and P&P text is nicely handled -- well written and entertaining.
October 11, 2025
Interesting intertwining of Pride and Prejudice with Persuasion.
August 14, 2025
Mostly low-angst. As a section, about 19% of the book was emotionally charged enough to cause my lower lip to tremble and my eyes to get misty.
Some may think that Darcy overreacted upon learning of Elizabeth's little deception. She only meant to put him at ease. How was she supposed to know they would become such friends? But Darcy had recently been cruelly betrayed. His physical wound may have healed, but his emotional wounds were only beginning to close due to Elizabeth's kindness/ Upon learning of her perceived deception, that wound rips wide open. He reacts instinctively - irrationally lashing out at her in an effort of self-preservation.
I love Elizabeth's empathic personality. She instinctively knows his hurts and seeks to alleviate his pain. She instinctively knows he will be hurt when he discovers her little deception. She is
heartbroken by his harsh rejection and cruel words. But, she understands where his reaction comes from. She still loves him. She can't hate him. She can't stand to hear him disparaged.
The mood slowly brightens after Captain Wentworth lances Darcy's pride and feelings of betrayal like a boil. As the poison leeches out of his mind, Darcy's thoughts begin to clear. His mind catches up with his heart, which never forgot that Elizabeth was his truest friend.
The content is clean and sweet. There are happily ever afters for Darcy/Elizabeth, Bingley/Jane, Wenthworth/Anne, and even for Mary and Mr. Collins. I give it five stars because it's a story I will reread.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Some may think that Darcy overreacted upon learning of Elizabeth's little deception. She only meant to put him at ease. How was she supposed to know they would become such friends? But Darcy had recently been cruelly betrayed. His physical wound may have healed, but his emotional wounds were only beginning to close due to Elizabeth's kindness/ Upon learning of her perceived deception, that wound rips wide open. He reacts instinctively - irrationally lashing out at her in an effort of self-preservation.
I love Elizabeth's empathic personality. She instinctively knows his hurts and seeks to alleviate his pain. She instinctively knows he will be hurt when he discovers her little deception. She is
heartbroken by his harsh rejection and cruel words. But, she understands where his reaction comes from. She still loves him. She can't hate him. She can't stand to hear him disparaged.
The mood slowly brightens after Captain Wentworth lances Darcy's pride and feelings of betrayal like a boil. As the poison leeches out of his mind, Darcy's thoughts begin to clear. His mind catches up with his heart, which never forgot that Elizabeth was his truest friend.
The content is clean and sweet. There are happily ever afters for Darcy/Elizabeth, Bingley/Jane, Wenthworth/Anne, and even for Mary and Mr. Collins. I give it five stars because it's a story I will reread.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
August 10, 2025
I was instantly pulled into the story of Elizabeth and Darcy in Such Persuasions as These. In this story, which is a mashup between Pride and Prejudice and Persuasion, Elizabeth is a very discerning and observant person and she immediately notices Darcy's struggles at the Meryton Assembly. She offers assistance and their friendship develops into much deeper feelings. Things become complicated for ODC when Lizzy's childhood friend, Frederick Wentworth, now a captain in the Navy, arrives for a visit. The misunderstandings beween Elizabeth and Darcy, that were increased with the assistance of the mean Miss Bingley and the vile Wickham caused so much angst to Elizabeth and Darcy, and their contribution to the twists and turns in the plot are superb. The writing style is wonderful witty and humorous. There were delightful moments I could not stop laughing. I loved flirty Darcy. He is swoonworthy in this story. It was such a delight having a glimpse at the person behind the mask, when he could be himself while talking to Elizabeth, or confessing his love for her while talking to Italics, the Netherfield Library cat.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
abandoned
September 3, 2025DNF at 54%
This book has similar issues as authors other book - Some particular evil and truly horrible Darcy. Here also he is weak, idiotic, clueless and nowhere near canon Darcy. In that book, I didn't mind because Darcy's family background was much worse, so it made those changes realistic. And, even though he was idiotic, arrogant etc he was much in love with Elizabeth and came off as extremely dedicated to her even after the rejection, which made his other faults bearable. But this Darcy unfortunately has nothing redeemable and his thoughts / behaviours towards Elizabeth also aren't enjoyable to read. In the chapter i stopped reading, he is angry with Elizabeth for lying to him about her engagement, even though just previous day she said to him about the lack of seriousness of the proposals and even tried to confess something. If he cannot understand even after this, and still gets angry and thinks horrible of her, all I can think is this Darcy has no intelligence honestly.
This book has similar issues as authors other book - Some particular evil and truly horrible Darcy. Here also he is weak, idiotic, clueless and nowhere near canon Darcy. In that book, I didn't mind because Darcy's family background was much worse, so it made those changes realistic. And, even though he was idiotic, arrogant etc he was much in love with Elizabeth and came off as extremely dedicated to her even after the rejection, which made his other faults bearable. But this Darcy unfortunately has nothing redeemable and his thoughts / behaviours towards Elizabeth also aren't enjoyable to read. In the chapter i stopped reading, he is angry with Elizabeth for lying to him about her engagement, even though just previous day she said to him about the lack of seriousness of the proposals and even tried to confess something. If he cannot understand even after this, and still gets angry and thinks horrible of her, all I can think is this Darcy has no intelligence honestly.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 12, 2025
“Why else would he behave so irrationally? Why else would he have felt so betrayed? Why else would he have been so hurt? He must be in love with me too.”
The mix-and-match of protagonists from JA’s different stories has always been a daring feat. I have always been intrigued by the endeavour but have been mostly disappointed in the end.
NOT THIS ONE!!
The best wingman for everyone, Captain Frederick Wentworth!!! The conversations between Darcy and Elizabeth, Elizabeth with Wentworth, and Wentworth with the gentlemen are all so good that I enjoyed each and every of them.
The comparison between Darcy and Sir Walter Elliot is brilliant and to the point and reminded me that Darcy might not be THEE Mr Darcy before he met Elizabeth.
Emilia Stratford, I am sure to follow.
The mix-and-match of protagonists from JA’s different stories has always been a daring feat. I have always been intrigued by the endeavour but have been mostly disappointed in the end.
NOT THIS ONE!!
The best wingman for everyone, Captain Frederick Wentworth!!! The conversations between Darcy and Elizabeth, Elizabeth with Wentworth, and Wentworth with the gentlemen are all so good that I enjoyed each and every of them.
The comparison between Darcy and Sir Walter Elliot is brilliant and to the point and reminded me that Darcy might not be THEE Mr Darcy before he met Elizabeth.
Emilia Stratford, I am sure to follow.
August 19, 2025
A well-written crossover between two beloved Austen novels - 4.25*
This is the second book by this author and is just as good as the first one. The premise is an interesting one as I would not have imagined a potential pairing as described here. The author pulls it off very well and it makes for a very diverting read.
The characters are well written and very recognisable despite their little wrinkles. Darcy is very grumpy at times, but then, to be honest so was the Austen original. Elizabeth charms him out of his moods in a most delightful fashion.
The writing is of a uniformly high quality. It is perhaps little slow at times but all in all an excellent read.
This is the second book by this author and is just as good as the first one. The premise is an interesting one as I would not have imagined a potential pairing as described here. The author pulls it off very well and it makes for a very diverting read.
The characters are well written and very recognisable despite their little wrinkles. Darcy is very grumpy at times, but then, to be honest so was the Austen original. Elizabeth charms him out of his moods in a most delightful fashion.
The writing is of a uniformly high quality. It is perhaps little slow at times but all in all an excellent read.
August 29, 2025
This is one of my favorite variations this year!
This is the type of books that I want to translate!!!
It's rare the variations that have Darcy and Elizabeth starting as friends, so I really enjoyed how that relationship started to grow. It presents some details that I normally don't see in other books.
Pride and Prejudice crossover with Persuasion is one of my favorite combinations. I only missed having Anne present in the story and not just like someone in the back, but the presence of Captain Wentworth was so really good accomplished. Won't give more details, but it's really worthy.
This is the type of books that I want to translate!!!
It's rare the variations that have Darcy and Elizabeth starting as friends, so I really enjoyed how that relationship started to grow. It presents some details that I normally don't see in other books.
Pride and Prejudice crossover with Persuasion is one of my favorite combinations. I only missed having Anne present in the story and not just like someone in the back, but the presence of Captain Wentworth was so really good accomplished. Won't give more details, but it's really worthy.
August 16, 2025
I really enjoyed it
This was well written and used much of what Austen wrote, just with a different slant to it. It made Elizabeth, Darcy and Mary all softer, and made Lydia a little less of an idiot. While I appreciated the inclusion of Wentworth, I was hoping for more of him and Anne. However, I loved that they got their HEA sooner.
This was well written and used much of what Austen wrote, just with a different slant to it. It made Elizabeth, Darcy and Mary all softer, and made Lydia a little less of an idiot. While I appreciated the inclusion of Wentworth, I was hoping for more of him and Anne. However, I loved that they got their HEA sooner.
September 2, 2025
4.25⭐️
November 5, 2025
Darcy's accusations were despicable. He should suffer more to gain Elizabeth's forgiveness
January 10, 2026
wonderful
So interesting and unique. A great love story between ODC. And only one villain to vanquish. Very well done. 😍
So interesting and unique. A great love story between ODC. And only one villain to vanquish. Very well done. 😍
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