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The Heroic Mr. Darcy's Bad Manners
A wealthy Elizabeth Bennet navigates the ton, old family feuds, counterfeit scandals, and falling head over heels in love with Mr Darcy.
Miss Elizabeth Bennet, headstrong and witty, is about to unleash her undying admiration onto one unsuspecting Mr Darcy.
Mr Darcy has one To find the lady who bewitched him at the masquerade. Unfortunately, he is clueless to the fact that the masked Queen Elizabeth and Miss Elizabeth are one and the same, which naturally leads him to put his foot in his mouth—repeatedly—until nothing but the consumption of an unrivalled amount of humble pie will redeem him.
Mr Darcy is given ample opportunity to pitch his woo when Mr Bennet enters London society as a peer of the realm, but Lord Matlock is furious, and an old family feud ignites rumours of a most serious nature. Mr Bennet certainly has a valid reason to hate town…
The Heroic Mr Darcy’s Bad Manners is a low angst, chaste novel but for kisses, ogling, and skinny-dipping, where Elizabeth falls head over heels in love and the Bennets are of elevated rank.
This work of fiction is created entirely from the author’s imagination. At no point in this body of work has Artificial Intelligence (AI) been employed to write it.
Miss Elizabeth Bennet, headstrong and witty, is about to unleash her undying admiration onto one unsuspecting Mr Darcy.
Mr Darcy has one To find the lady who bewitched him at the masquerade. Unfortunately, he is clueless to the fact that the masked Queen Elizabeth and Miss Elizabeth are one and the same, which naturally leads him to put his foot in his mouth—repeatedly—until nothing but the consumption of an unrivalled amount of humble pie will redeem him.
Mr Darcy is given ample opportunity to pitch his woo when Mr Bennet enters London society as a peer of the realm, but Lord Matlock is furious, and an old family feud ignites rumours of a most serious nature. Mr Bennet certainly has a valid reason to hate town…
The Heroic Mr Darcy’s Bad Manners is a low angst, chaste novel but for kisses, ogling, and skinny-dipping, where Elizabeth falls head over heels in love and the Bennets are of elevated rank.
This work of fiction is created entirely from the author’s imagination. At no point in this body of work has Artificial Intelligence (AI) been employed to write it.
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Published May 18, 2025
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About the author
Elin Eriksen
24 books161 followers Elin Eriksen is a Norwegian author of Austenesque dramas, a proud mother of four children, a grandmother to a beautiful girl and happily married to her own Mr Darcy.
She has exchanged chemical analysis of explosives and pharmaceuticals to stay at home with her children and write chaste and steamy, dramatic stories from the Regency era, Viking era and modern era, taking great liberties with the characters and the plot of canon.
Elin likes to visualise by making boards of every story on Pinterest under the name elin.haraldsdatt.
Future releases:
2021:
August: Lord Harpenden's Daughter, the Bennets of elevated rank trope. A new story, not previously posted on the free sites. Thou, to whose eyes I bend...
October: Veni Vidi Vicious, Pride and Prejudice in the Viking era. Forced marriage scenario. Extended edition.
December: Baby Blue Eyes, what would make Mr Darcy use disguise and decite? Babe blue eyes...
2022:
The Beastly Mr Darcy
Master of Puppets
Brother Dearest
For the Love of A Highland Thistle
Convenience of that kind
Unforgivable
2023:
Two Components
Where Love Resides
Oblivion
The Salmon Lord
(2022 and 2023 may be altered.)
She has exchanged chemical analysis of explosives and pharmaceuticals to stay at home with her children and write chaste and steamy, dramatic stories from the Regency era, Viking era and modern era, taking great liberties with the characters and the plot of canon.
Elin likes to visualise by making boards of every story on Pinterest under the name elin.haraldsdatt.
Future releases:
2021:
August: Lord Harpenden's Daughter, the Bennets of elevated rank trope. A new story, not previously posted on the free sites. Thou, to whose eyes I bend...
October: Veni Vidi Vicious, Pride and Prejudice in the Viking era. Forced marriage scenario. Extended edition.
December: Baby Blue Eyes, what would make Mr Darcy use disguise and decite? Babe blue eyes...
2022:
The Beastly Mr Darcy
Master of Puppets
Brother Dearest
For the Love of A Highland Thistle
Convenience of that kind
Unforgivable
2023:
Two Components
Where Love Resides
Oblivion
The Salmon Lord
(2022 and 2023 may be altered.)
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February 6, 2026
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars.
In this story our Elizabeth goes by several different names plus presents as Queen Elizabeth at a masquerade ball. Although she and Darcy spend much time together at that ball, she has on a full mask and then departs before the unveiling at midnight.
Elizabeth has carried a crush for Darcy for many years as he rescued her from a horse charging at her while in Derbyshire at age 9. So when they meet for a third time at the Meryton Assembly she is devastated by "that insult".
This variation has a few new characters: one being Mrs. Maeve Bennet who gives Elizabeth advice often. This grandmother calls Elizabeth "Eilis". And it is not Bingley whom Jane marries.
Eventually Darcy does realize his mistake and has much to make up for as he has noticed how Elizabeth has been avoiding him.
There are several interesting threads: one having to do with Mr. Bennet's sister. (I won't even try to go into that as it is complicated.) We also have Mr. Bennet becoming a member of the peerage and having to spend time in London as he now has to participate in parliament. Thus one of Elizabeth's names is "Lady Elizabeth".
I have most all of this author's stories and recommend this one also. I found I had to pay close attention as to who was who as the story progressed.
In this story our Elizabeth goes by several different names plus presents as Queen Elizabeth at a masquerade ball. Although she and Darcy spend much time together at that ball, she has on a full mask and then departs before the unveiling at midnight.
Elizabeth has carried a crush for Darcy for many years as he rescued her from a horse charging at her while in Derbyshire at age 9. So when they meet for a third time at the Meryton Assembly she is devastated by "that insult".
This variation has a few new characters: one being Mrs. Maeve Bennet who gives Elizabeth advice often. This grandmother calls Elizabeth "Eilis". And it is not Bingley whom Jane marries.
Eventually Darcy does realize his mistake and has much to make up for as he has noticed how Elizabeth has been avoiding him.
There are several interesting threads: one having to do with Mr. Bennet's sister. (I won't even try to go into that as it is complicated.) We also have Mr. Bennet becoming a member of the peerage and having to spend time in London as he now has to participate in parliament. Thus one of Elizabeth's names is "Lady Elizabeth".
I have most all of this author's stories and recommend this one also. I found I had to pay close attention as to who was who as the story progressed.
May 29, 2025
My Rating: 4.5* rounded up to 5*
A mad horse. A masquerade ball. A sad and shocking scandal. And finding true love.
Hang on, you are in for a wild ride with many bumps and blunders along the way!
“If it is a gentleman, I suggest that you do not appear too eager and allow him to
approach you. Nothing lingers longer than a bad reputation.”(quote from the book)
What if the Bennets had better connections? I enjoy this trope as it opens up so many possibilities, especially when Netherfield Park is let at last and those leasing it are supercilious at best and rude at worst. The community of Meryton protects their own.
“She must have cast a spell on him because it was exactly the opposite of his usual behaviour. He, who prided himself on being impossible to trap, would not mind so much if it were Queen Elizabeth who ensnared him.” (quote from the book)
Elizabeth is smitten very early on with Fitzwilliam Darcy. Dressed as Queen Elizabeth at a masquerade ball with a full face mask, she will not reveal herself until the stroke of midnight. Unfortunately, she and her aunt and uncle must leave early. He still does not know who she is other than who she was with. Darcy calls on her the next day, but the knocker is down…and soon the house is closed. He has no idea where she has gone though he keeps searching.
“Love is complicated and may begin with more pain than pleasure, but I assure you, it is worth it in the end. Do not despair yet.” (quote from the book)
And so begins their tumultuous journey. One that I fully enjoyed. There is laughter and insults and some enticing visuals along with heartbreak and shocking family secrets. I was captured from the beginning.
I highly recommend this latest novel by Ms. Eriksen.
Do note that the word ‘titbit’ is the English spelling as ‘tidbit’ is the American version. So don’t be distracted by it when it pops up!
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving my review.
A mad horse. A masquerade ball. A sad and shocking scandal. And finding true love.
Hang on, you are in for a wild ride with many bumps and blunders along the way!
“If it is a gentleman, I suggest that you do not appear too eager and allow him to
approach you. Nothing lingers longer than a bad reputation.”(quote from the book)
What if the Bennets had better connections? I enjoy this trope as it opens up so many possibilities, especially when Netherfield Park is let at last and those leasing it are supercilious at best and rude at worst. The community of Meryton protects their own.
“She must have cast a spell on him because it was exactly the opposite of his usual behaviour. He, who prided himself on being impossible to trap, would not mind so much if it were Queen Elizabeth who ensnared him.” (quote from the book)
Elizabeth is smitten very early on with Fitzwilliam Darcy. Dressed as Queen Elizabeth at a masquerade ball with a full face mask, she will not reveal herself until the stroke of midnight. Unfortunately, she and her aunt and uncle must leave early. He still does not know who she is other than who she was with. Darcy calls on her the next day, but the knocker is down…and soon the house is closed. He has no idea where she has gone though he keeps searching.
“Love is complicated and may begin with more pain than pleasure, but I assure you, it is worth it in the end. Do not despair yet.” (quote from the book)
And so begins their tumultuous journey. One that I fully enjoyed. There is laughter and insults and some enticing visuals along with heartbreak and shocking family secrets. I was captured from the beginning.
I highly recommend this latest novel by Ms. Eriksen.
Do note that the word ‘titbit’ is the English spelling as ‘tidbit’ is the American version. So don’t be distracted by it when it pops up!
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving my review.
June 21, 2025
Let the punishment fit the crime. — W. S. Gilbert
A rescue in childhood.
A meeting in disguise at a Masquerade.
Is it any wonder that when Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet meet for the third time in Meryton, one of them does not recognize the other?
Quote from the book: Mr. Darcy must have discovered her whereabouts and had come to find her under the guise of adviser to a friend looking for an estate.
Imagine Elizabeth’s disappointment.
Punishment is not for revenge, but to lessen crime and reform the criminal. — Elizabeth Fry
Quote from the book: “It was the greatest scandal that London’s superior society has ever experienced. The marquess’s niece, though he was but an Irish baron back then, married a friend of mine. Sir Arthur was a Scottish baronet with a modest estate in Dollar. She dabbled in counterfeit goods — Egyptian artefacts and coins to be precise. She was caught and convicted in a very public trial. It was the talk of town for years.”
Early in the story, we learn of animosity between the Bennets and Lord Matlock, uncle to Fitzwilliam Darcy. Another family is also hated. We are not to learn the reason so quickly.
Mr. Bennet’s sister and mother have prominent roles in the story.
If he has a conscience, he will suffer for his mistake. — Fyodor Dostoyevsky
Testimony has consequences, sometimes horrific. I was shocked at the punishment inflicted, thinking it had been outdated centuries earlier, yet a little research shows it was similar to an actual conviction in Regency times.
A mystery runs throughout the story. The heroic Mr. Darcy is part of the solution.
Good and evil, reward and punishment, are the only motives for a rational creature. — John Locke
A rescue in childhood.
A meeting in disguise at a Masquerade.
Is it any wonder that when Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet meet for the third time in Meryton, one of them does not recognize the other?
Quote from the book: Mr. Darcy must have discovered her whereabouts and had come to find her under the guise of adviser to a friend looking for an estate.
Imagine Elizabeth’s disappointment.
Punishment is not for revenge, but to lessen crime and reform the criminal. — Elizabeth Fry
Quote from the book: “It was the greatest scandal that London’s superior society has ever experienced. The marquess’s niece, though he was but an Irish baron back then, married a friend of mine. Sir Arthur was a Scottish baronet with a modest estate in Dollar. She dabbled in counterfeit goods — Egyptian artefacts and coins to be precise. She was caught and convicted in a very public trial. It was the talk of town for years.”
Early in the story, we learn of animosity between the Bennets and Lord Matlock, uncle to Fitzwilliam Darcy. Another family is also hated. We are not to learn the reason so quickly.
Mr. Bennet’s sister and mother have prominent roles in the story.
If he has a conscience, he will suffer for his mistake. — Fyodor Dostoyevsky
Testimony has consequences, sometimes horrific. I was shocked at the punishment inflicted, thinking it had been outdated centuries earlier, yet a little research shows it was similar to an actual conviction in Regency times.
A mystery runs throughout the story. The heroic Mr. Darcy is part of the solution.
Good and evil, reward and punishment, are the only motives for a rational creature. — John Locke
November 6, 2025
The Making—and Remaking—of a Hero
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, Elin Eriksen’s The Heroic Mr Darcy’s Bad Manners is a thoroughly entertaining twist on the classic tale, where a past rescue, a hidden identity, and a cascade of social blunders set the stage for a delightful slow-burn romance. Elizabeth Bennet may become wealthy and titled in this story, but her heart still belongs to the young gentleman who once saved her life—and later charmed her at a London masquerade. It is only upon their second meeting, in Hertfordshire, that her opinion begins to sour, as Darcy’s behaviour toward those beneath him—including herself—shatters the image she once held of him.
Darcy, meanwhile, is vexed to find himself drawn to a country miss he believes beneath his notice, not realising she is the very lady he cannot forget. Now he must face the fact that he has driven away the only woman he ever wished to marry, and he must confront the damage done and begin to earn Elizabeth’s good opinion all over again. He slowly begins to redeem himself, and through one final, heartfelt gesture to defend justice and Elizabeth’s family name, he risks his own name to bring justice where it was long denied, revealing a depth of character Elizabeth cannot ignore—and proves that the hero she once loved never truly disappeared; he simply had to find his way back.
There’s a strong supporting cast too—not-so-bad Bennet parents, and Elizabeth’s loving grandmother Bennet and her friend, Darcy’s no-nonsense aunt Eudora, play welcome roles in helping things along. Jane ends up with Colonel Fitzwilliam in a natural, well-paced pairing, while Bingley fades from contention, his capriciousness speaking for itself. And though Elizabeth has already made up her mind to choose Darcy, it is rather satisfying to watch their loved ones nudge them in the right direction just the same.
Eriksen’s affection for these characters—old and new—shines through, and with each new book, her storytelling becomes more confident and engaging.
Highly recommend.
Kisses only.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review, but my preordered copy came through on my Kindle before I had a chance to read the arc.
Audiobook -November 1, 2025
Elizabeth Grace—one of my favourite audiobook performers who really knows her craft. Her Darcy voice is soooo Darcy. Her variety and range of voices always leaves you without doubt a different character is speaking. I love her.
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, Elin Eriksen’s The Heroic Mr Darcy’s Bad Manners is a thoroughly entertaining twist on the classic tale, where a past rescue, a hidden identity, and a cascade of social blunders set the stage for a delightful slow-burn romance. Elizabeth Bennet may become wealthy and titled in this story, but her heart still belongs to the young gentleman who once saved her life—and later charmed her at a London masquerade. It is only upon their second meeting, in Hertfordshire, that her opinion begins to sour, as Darcy’s behaviour toward those beneath him—including herself—shatters the image she once held of him.
Darcy, meanwhile, is vexed to find himself drawn to a country miss he believes beneath his notice, not realising she is the very lady he cannot forget. Now he must face the fact that he has driven away the only woman he ever wished to marry, and he must confront the damage done and begin to earn Elizabeth’s good opinion all over again. He slowly begins to redeem himself, and through one final, heartfelt gesture to defend justice and Elizabeth’s family name, he risks his own name to bring justice where it was long denied, revealing a depth of character Elizabeth cannot ignore—and proves that the hero she once loved never truly disappeared; he simply had to find his way back.
There’s a strong supporting cast too—not-so-bad Bennet parents, and Elizabeth’s loving grandmother Bennet and her friend, Darcy’s no-nonsense aunt Eudora, play welcome roles in helping things along. Jane ends up with Colonel Fitzwilliam in a natural, well-paced pairing, while Bingley fades from contention, his capriciousness speaking for itself. And though Elizabeth has already made up her mind to choose Darcy, it is rather satisfying to watch their loved ones nudge them in the right direction just the same.
Eriksen’s affection for these characters—old and new—shines through, and with each new book, her storytelling becomes more confident and engaging.
Highly recommend.
Kisses only.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review, but my preordered copy came through on my Kindle before I had a chance to read the arc.
Audiobook -November 1, 2025
Elizabeth Grace—one of my favourite audiobook performers who really knows her craft. Her Darcy voice is soooo Darcy. Her variety and range of voices always leaves you without doubt a different character is speaking. I love her.
June 12, 2025
Lots of fun and clever twists on Pride and Prejudice here with nods to Cinderella as well as Romeo and Juliet.
Darcy doesn't realize it, but by the time he sees her at the Meryton Assembly he's already met Elizabeth-- twice!
The first time, she's only nine years old, and he heroically gets her out of the way when a wild horse is charging at her. The second time is ten years later at a masquerade ball in London, which she attends with her great-uncle (an Irish earl who has a seat in Parliament) and her grandmother (his sister). Elizabeth recognizes Darcy but is introduced to him, in accordance with her costume and mask, as Queen Elizabeth. He doesn't connect the bewitching young woman with the girl he saved ten years ago. The two share a magical evening dancing and talking, and both are well on the way to falling in love. But Elizabeth has to leave quite suddenly with her relations before the midnight unmasking. There's no glass slipper, but Darcy is left with an indelible memory, a determination to find her... and the wrong name: Eilis, her grandmother's pet name for her.
Ironically, part of Darcy's distraction when he comes to Hertfordshire is that his trip to Ramsgate to save Georgiana from eloping with George Wickham prevented him from searching for Eilis, and now he's fulfilling his promise to help Bingley, further delaying his search.
Elizabeth learns that Darcy will be staying at Netherfield and anticipates a glorious reunion at the assembly. At first she finds excuses for his haughty behavior. Then, not only does he fail to recognize her, he utters his infamous insult. Crushed, Elizabeth decides to avoid him in the future as much as possible. THAT gets his attention!
The Romeo and Juliet element of the story comes later. Mr. Bennet has good reason to hate London due to a scandal that enveloped his family years ago. And it's a branch of the Fitzwilliam family that's to blame, giving Mr. Darcy another opportunity to be heroic if he defies his family.
Additional storylines emerge in this well-constructed novel; they are nicely interwoven to create a compelling plot. Characters are believably written, and the overall quality of the writing is better than the majority of JAFF. This is doubly impressive because English is not Ms. Eriksen's native language. IMO, this is her best book yet.
Content is clean.
I received a free copy via BookSprout and am voluntarily leaving a review
Darcy doesn't realize it, but by the time he sees her at the Meryton Assembly he's already met Elizabeth-- twice!
The first time, she's only nine years old, and he heroically gets her out of the way when a wild horse is charging at her. The second time is ten years later at a masquerade ball in London, which she attends with her great-uncle (an Irish earl who has a seat in Parliament) and her grandmother (his sister). Elizabeth recognizes Darcy but is introduced to him, in accordance with her costume and mask, as Queen Elizabeth. He doesn't connect the bewitching young woman with the girl he saved ten years ago. The two share a magical evening dancing and talking, and both are well on the way to falling in love. But Elizabeth has to leave quite suddenly with her relations before the midnight unmasking. There's no glass slipper, but Darcy is left with an indelible memory, a determination to find her... and the wrong name: Eilis, her grandmother's pet name for her.
Ironically, part of Darcy's distraction when he comes to Hertfordshire is that his trip to Ramsgate to save Georgiana from eloping with George Wickham prevented him from searching for Eilis, and now he's fulfilling his promise to help Bingley, further delaying his search.
Elizabeth learns that Darcy will be staying at Netherfield and anticipates a glorious reunion at the assembly. At first she finds excuses for his haughty behavior. Then, not only does he fail to recognize her, he utters his infamous insult. Crushed, Elizabeth decides to avoid him in the future as much as possible. THAT gets his attention!
The Romeo and Juliet element of the story comes later. Mr. Bennet has good reason to hate London due to a scandal that enveloped his family years ago. And it's a branch of the Fitzwilliam family that's to blame, giving Mr. Darcy another opportunity to be heroic if he defies his family.
Additional storylines emerge in this well-constructed novel; they are nicely interwoven to create a compelling plot. Characters are believably written, and the overall quality of the writing is better than the majority of JAFF. This is doubly impressive because English is not Ms. Eriksen's native language. IMO, this is her best book yet.
Content is clean.
I received a free copy via BookSprout and am voluntarily leaving a review
December 2, 2025
So proud of you, Elin, on this excellent book.
June 13, 2025
Wonderful
A re-imagining of P&P in which Mr Bennett's mother, and her brother Lord Limerick, are alive, giving the Bennetts noble connections. Elizabeth stays with her grandmother and great uncle at their townhome in London, and she meets Darcy at a masquerade ball. She's already encountered him as a child when he saves her from being trampled by a horse, which action inspires a hero worship in her. Elizabeth is dismayed when Darcy doesn't remember her, and when he eventually delivers the infamous insult at the Meryton assembly. Meanwhile, Darcy is enchanted by the masked woman he meets at the ball in London, but never learns who she is. Time and again Darcy insults Elizabeth in different ways, not knowing that she's the one he's been searching for.
There's a lot more going on besides the rocky romance of ODC. A long standing feud between the Matlock and the Bennett families threatens many budding relationships. It's sort of akin to a Romeo and Juliet type of story, where family feuds get in the way of young love. The romance is lovely, and the witty banter between characters is superb. My only concern with the story is the character of Elizabeth. For my taste, she's too flighty, prone to weak knees and swooning, and powerless in the presence of a handsome man. However, the overall quality of the story is too good to care much about it.
The book is very well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
A re-imagining of P&P in which Mr Bennett's mother, and her brother Lord Limerick, are alive, giving the Bennetts noble connections. Elizabeth stays with her grandmother and great uncle at their townhome in London, and she meets Darcy at a masquerade ball. She's already encountered him as a child when he saves her from being trampled by a horse, which action inspires a hero worship in her. Elizabeth is dismayed when Darcy doesn't remember her, and when he eventually delivers the infamous insult at the Meryton assembly. Meanwhile, Darcy is enchanted by the masked woman he meets at the ball in London, but never learns who she is. Time and again Darcy insults Elizabeth in different ways, not knowing that she's the one he's been searching for.
There's a lot more going on besides the rocky romance of ODC. A long standing feud between the Matlock and the Bennett families threatens many budding relationships. It's sort of akin to a Romeo and Juliet type of story, where family feuds get in the way of young love. The romance is lovely, and the witty banter between characters is superb. My only concern with the story is the character of Elizabeth. For my taste, she's too flighty, prone to weak knees and swooning, and powerless in the presence of a handsome man. However, the overall quality of the story is too good to care much about it.
The book is very well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
June 3, 2025
Elizabeth meets Darcy in Lambton when she is young. He saves her from a mad horse, so he leaves quite an impression. Afterwards she has tea with Anne Darcy and makes an impression on her.
Fast forward while staying with relations in town she meets Darcy again at a masquarade ball and they spend a few enchanting hours in each other company. He is not disguised but she wears very high heels and her hair is colored red. Due to her uncles sudden sickness, she leaves before she can be revealed. Also due to her uncles illness, he can't call on her. So he only knows her Irish form of name.
Thus when he joins Bingley in Meryton, he can't recognize her, and before she can reveal herself, he insults her in the usual way. Darcy is torn between his attraction to Elizabeth and alter ego from the ball.
Thomas Bennett is elevated to Earl, this brings forth an old scandal that involves Thomas's twin sister. Unfortunately the scandal also involves the Earl of Matlock, so he is strongly discourage the match.
All in all a very enjoyable story though some of the misunderstandings and obstacles are a litte silly.
I received a free copy through booksprout in exchange for an honest review
Fast forward while staying with relations in town she meets Darcy again at a masquarade ball and they spend a few enchanting hours in each other company. He is not disguised but she wears very high heels and her hair is colored red. Due to her uncles sudden sickness, she leaves before she can be revealed. Also due to her uncles illness, he can't call on her. So he only knows her Irish form of name.
Thus when he joins Bingley in Meryton, he can't recognize her, and before she can reveal herself, he insults her in the usual way. Darcy is torn between his attraction to Elizabeth and alter ego from the ball.
Thomas Bennett is elevated to Earl, this brings forth an old scandal that involves Thomas's twin sister. Unfortunately the scandal also involves the Earl of Matlock, so he is strongly discourage the match.
All in all a very enjoyable story though some of the misunderstandings and obstacles are a litte silly.
I received a free copy through booksprout in exchange for an honest review
July 3, 2025
Darcy just can’t get out of his own way in his pursuit of the love of his life 🥰
July 10, 2025
4.5*
Elin Erikson has never failed to deliver an interesting variation and this is no exception. A ODC meets early, forgotten meetings, a connected Elizabeth - tropes filled with lots of possibilities and we get them here. Intrigue, scandal, and a Heroic Mr Darcy. A very good read.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Elin Erikson has never failed to deliver an interesting variation and this is no exception. A ODC meets early, forgotten meetings, a connected Elizabeth - tropes filled with lots of possibilities and we get them here. Intrigue, scandal, and a Heroic Mr Darcy. A very good read.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
February 12, 2026
There's creative plotting, but a rigorous editor would really help with continuity, word choice and stylistic consistency.
August 19, 2025
Imaginative
I like this variations in which the Bennets end being nobles. I feel that Darcy acquitted himself pretty well after all of his blunders and also enjoyed the hidden tragedy and its resolution.
I like this variations in which the Bennets end being nobles. I feel that Darcy acquitted himself pretty well after all of his blunders and also enjoyed the hidden tragedy and its resolution.
May 23, 2025
A disappointment
I am a true fan of Elin Eriksen. But this story had me feeling sad at the way E has hidden herself from D. And for D, not to try harder to mend things sooner. Having to wait until the end of the story for a completion was a bit much for me. To see Jane married before Elizabeth... Shows Elizabeth's courage doesn't always rise when intimidated.
I am a true fan of Elin Eriksen. But this story had me feeling sad at the way E has hidden herself from D. And for D, not to try harder to mend things sooner. Having to wait until the end of the story for a completion was a bit much for me. To see Jane married before Elizabeth... Shows Elizabeth's courage doesn't always rise when intimidated.
June 27, 2025
I struggled to finish this variation. This author is usually more original. The references to Jane Austen's novel or to the 95 adaptation are heavy (quotes from both). This would usually suit me but the context is so different (the Bennets are wealthy, well connected and titled ; Elizabeth and Darcy are immediately attracted to each other) that the similarities with both the novel and the adaptation felt odd. The author didn't really bother to give the reader a good mystery to chew on. And what happened to the baddies? Not much compared to the gruesome fate of their victim.
August 12, 2025
It just dragged on...but had good bones
I liked the heroic acts especially in the beginning. It set the stage for Elizabeth's fantasy love. The titles without overwhelming wealth were an interesting twist. Sometimes it was difficult to know if Elizabeth loved him or not, which is where this story dragged on the most. I have a hard time believing the grandmother would even allow Mr. Bingley in the house or that Elizabeth would not have told Jane after witnessing his bad behavior! The
Lydia/Wickham conclusion was unsettling and the epilogue was too long. Lastly, I dislike when authors use other Austen characters. In this book, Mr. Knightly had no real purpose and rather defied reasoning on how Elizabeth would know Emma or him.
I liked the heroic acts especially in the beginning. It set the stage for Elizabeth's fantasy love. The titles without overwhelming wealth were an interesting twist. Sometimes it was difficult to know if Elizabeth loved him or not, which is where this story dragged on the most. I have a hard time believing the grandmother would even allow Mr. Bingley in the house or that Elizabeth would not have told Jane after witnessing his bad behavior! The
Lydia/Wickham conclusion was unsettling and the epilogue was too long. Lastly, I dislike when authors use other Austen characters. In this book, Mr. Knightly had no real purpose and rather defied reasoning on how Elizabeth would know Emma or him.
May 21, 2025
Another winner
Elon has a unique way of writing. There is always humor and love and loyalty in her stories. I do love some of the small by plays that mean so much - the silver button and the ribbon. It is those simple expressions that mean so much and add tremendously to the story and romance. The reader relates, remembering their own special tokens.
Elon has a unique way of writing. There is always humor and love and loyalty in her stories. I do love some of the small by plays that mean so much - the silver button and the ribbon. It is those simple expressions that mean so much and add tremendously to the story and romance. The reader relates, remembering their own special tokens.
June 8, 2025
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. This is a Pride and Prejudice variation. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a low angst, chaste novel but for kisses, ogling, and skinny-dipping, where Elizabeth falls head over heels in love and the Bennets are of elevated rank. A wealthy, headstrong, and witty Elizabeth Bennet navigates the ton, old family feuds, counterfeit scandals, and falling head over heels in love with Mr Darcy, and she is about to unleash her undying admiration onto him and he doesn’t expect a thing.
Mr Darcy has one mission, to find the lady who bewitched him at the masquerade. Unfortunately, he is clueless to the fact that the masked Queen Elizabeth and Miss Elizabeth are one and the same, which naturally leads him to put his foot in his mouth, repeatedly, until nothing but the consumption of an unrivalled amount of humble pie will redeem him. Mr Darcy is given ample opportunity to pitch his woo when Mr Bennet enters London society as a peer of the realm, but Lord Matlock is furious, and an old family feud ignites rumours of a most serious nature. Mr Bennet certainly has a valid reason to hate town. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. This is a Pride and Prejudice variation. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a low angst, chaste novel but for kisses, ogling, and skinny-dipping, where Elizabeth falls head over heels in love and the Bennets are of elevated rank. A wealthy, headstrong, and witty Elizabeth Bennet navigates the ton, old family feuds, counterfeit scandals, and falling head over heels in love with Mr Darcy, and she is about to unleash her undying admiration onto him and he doesn’t expect a thing.
Mr Darcy has one mission, to find the lady who bewitched him at the masquerade. Unfortunately, he is clueless to the fact that the masked Queen Elizabeth and Miss Elizabeth are one and the same, which naturally leads him to put his foot in his mouth, repeatedly, until nothing but the consumption of an unrivalled amount of humble pie will redeem him. Mr Darcy is given ample opportunity to pitch his woo when Mr Bennet enters London society as a peer of the realm, but Lord Matlock is furious, and an old family feud ignites rumours of a most serious nature. Mr Bennet certainly has a valid reason to hate town. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
June 25, 2025
Actually 4.5 stars …..
Initially this book would have been rated at 3 stars because this reader had difficulty getting interested and drawn into the story. That changed as more of the plot unfolded and history was revealed. There were some issues keeping the book from a favorites list. Without providing spoilers, Elizabeth was too quick to form and hold resentments and appeared quite immature at times. Darcy first appeared like a blind, lovesick youth and then as somewhat pessimistic and too ready to give up. Of course the HEA moment arrived with mostly satisfying consequences all around.
Despite the seemingly negative impact, this book is very good and is highly recommended for its unique storyline where bad acts committed by previous generations significantly influenced the present.
Initially this book would have been rated at 3 stars because this reader had difficulty getting interested and drawn into the story. That changed as more of the plot unfolded and history was revealed. There were some issues keeping the book from a favorites list. Without providing spoilers, Elizabeth was too quick to form and hold resentments and appeared quite immature at times. Darcy first appeared like a blind, lovesick youth and then as somewhat pessimistic and too ready to give up. Of course the HEA moment arrived with mostly satisfying consequences all around.
Despite the seemingly negative impact, this book is very good and is highly recommended for its unique storyline where bad acts committed by previous generations significantly influenced the present.
June 29, 2025
Light, witty and delightfully charming.
This is definitely Ms Eriksen's best book so for - the writing is excellent and the editing is tight. This is an author who cares about her craft.
The characters are plausible and recognisable and the story rolls forward at a steady pace with humour and romance as well as excellent character development. Poor Darcy suffers from a terrible case of foot-in-mouth, compounded by his disgraceful cousins and uncle. With relatives like this he can't be too critical of the behaviour of others.
There is an excellent balance between dialogue and narrative and the little insights into the thoughts of the characters made me smile again and again.
I heartily recommend this book.
This is definitely Ms Eriksen's best book so for - the writing is excellent and the editing is tight. This is an author who cares about her craft.
The characters are plausible and recognisable and the story rolls forward at a steady pace with humour and romance as well as excellent character development. Poor Darcy suffers from a terrible case of foot-in-mouth, compounded by his disgraceful cousins and uncle. With relatives like this he can't be too critical of the behaviour of others.
There is an excellent balance between dialogue and narrative and the little insights into the thoughts of the characters made me smile again and again.
I heartily recommend this book.
December 10, 2025
What I liked about the book was that you see how Elizabeth fell in love first through Darcy's heroic efforts. I also loved that at the masquerade ball, Darcy was lost to Elizabeth. He fell in love with her. He had eyes for no one else but Elizabeth's. I also liked that Jane fell in love with someone other than Bingley. (She deserves more than Bingley offers).
I also loved that the dialogue is witty and the playful tones made it an easy, enjoyable read.
One issue I had was that I felt like Elizabeth judged too harshly. She had a hard time imagining any other possibilities than what she perceived was right. She had a herculean effect to see past that. She ultimatumly had to get out of her own way so she could have a happy ending.
I also loved that the dialogue is witty and the playful tones made it an easy, enjoyable read.
One issue I had was that I felt like Elizabeth judged too harshly. She had a hard time imagining any other possibilities than what she perceived was right. She had a herculean effect to see past that. She ultimatumly had to get out of her own way so she could have a happy ending.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 24, 2025
“Darcy’s reserve makes him ill-qualified to recommend himself to strangers,”
“Unless he is paid.”
I love a masquerade!! I should like to think that the lively and witty Elizabeth shine at a masquerade. This Elizabeth had enjoyed the festive season in town and was properly guided and guarded by her grandmother Bennet.
For Darcy to explained the situation to Colonel Fitswilliam, Ch13 contains too much of the repetition of the history between D&E which we just read through, and to cut down some of the length might be nice IMHO.
Darcy had successfully saved the Bennet’s reputation and respectability once again as in canon but for different reason. HEA guaranteed.
“Unless he is paid.”
I love a masquerade!! I should like to think that the lively and witty Elizabeth shine at a masquerade. This Elizabeth had enjoyed the festive season in town and was properly guided and guarded by her grandmother Bennet.
For Darcy to explained the situation to Colonel Fitswilliam, Ch13 contains too much of the repetition of the history between D&E which we just read through, and to cut down some of the length might be nice IMHO.
Darcy had successfully saved the Bennet’s reputation and respectability once again as in canon but for different reason. HEA guaranteed.
January 23, 2026
Darcy’s fixation causes issues
4 1/2 rounded up
Elizabeth meets a heroic Darcy as a child and he becomes her heartfelt “The One”. He, unknowingly, meets her again at a masquerade ball, but this time he falls for her. Upon their third encounter, he is focused on who he perceived he met at the masquerade and didn’t realize she is the same individual he meets at the assembly, thus famous insult happens, crushing Elizabeth’s heart.
There are some fascinating twists and turns in this story and I love the new characters and how much family history is intertwined. I can easily see myself reading or listening to this wonderful audiobook again.
4 1/2 rounded up
Elizabeth meets a heroic Darcy as a child and he becomes her heartfelt “The One”. He, unknowingly, meets her again at a masquerade ball, but this time he falls for her. Upon their third encounter, he is focused on who he perceived he met at the masquerade and didn’t realize she is the same individual he meets at the assembly, thus famous insult happens, crushing Elizabeth’s heart.
There are some fascinating twists and turns in this story and I love the new characters and how much family history is intertwined. I can easily see myself reading or listening to this wonderful audiobook again.
June 14, 2025
Enjoyed It
What I liked:
- The storyline held my interest.
- I enjoy stories about wealthy/ well-connected Bennets.
- I like stories where Elizabeth pines for Darcy since it adds a fresh twist.
- Although it took a while (too long) for Darcy and Elizabeth to resolve their issues, the story had enough going on to keep me reading.
My only complaint is that Darcy never offered an apology; he only explained his reasoning, even after Elizabeth pointed out that he hadn't apologized. Bad Manners, Darcy!
What I liked:
- The storyline held my interest.
- I enjoy stories about wealthy/ well-connected Bennets.
- I like stories where Elizabeth pines for Darcy since it adds a fresh twist.
- Although it took a while (too long) for Darcy and Elizabeth to resolve their issues, the story had enough going on to keep me reading.
My only complaint is that Darcy never offered an apology; he only explained his reasoning, even after Elizabeth pointed out that he hadn't apologized. Bad Manners, Darcy!
June 8, 2025
Both enjoyable and poignant
This author never fails to add a touch of dark to her stories. They never overshadow the romance, but it's a reminder of life not always being puppies and rainbows.
A complex path for our dear couple to travel to their happy ever after. I love seeing her original characters in Mrs. Meave Bennet and her brother the Marques.
An excellent offering. Ms. Eriksen keeps getting better.
This author never fails to add a touch of dark to her stories. They never overshadow the romance, but it's a reminder of life not always being puppies and rainbows.
A complex path for our dear couple to travel to their happy ever after. I love seeing her original characters in Mrs. Meave Bennet and her brother the Marques.
An excellent offering. Ms. Eriksen keeps getting better.
June 26, 2025
Darcy and Elizabeth meet in childhood and then later at a masquerade ball. He does not remember her when they reunite in Meryton and he insults her repeatedly. Mr. Bennet inherits an earldom, changing the circumstances of his family. Then Darcy realizes and begins wooing. Charming, especially Jane and Richard. Felt a little forced, especially all the extra family members. Worth reading .
July 2, 2025
The Heroic Mr Darcy's Bad Manners
Another fun read from Eriksen.
A masquerade ball, where Darcy never sees who is behind the mask. So the famous insult still happens. Fascinating activities as the Bennets are elites...
Bingley is wishy washy and thank goodness Jane has a brain. The Matrix is are a surprise.
Wickham turns out fine by the end.
And many hea's.
Another fun read from Eriksen.
A masquerade ball, where Darcy never sees who is behind the mask. So the famous insult still happens. Fascinating activities as the Bennets are elites...
Bingley is wishy washy and thank goodness Jane has a brain. The Matrix is are a surprise.
Wickham turns out fine by the end.
And many hea's.
June 11, 2025
The heroic Mr. Darcy
He only has bad manners in Hertfordshire, and, I loved Elizabeth's reaction to them! What a lovely variation. I loved all the characters and the storyline. I look forward to more from this author.
He only has bad manners in Hertfordshire, and, I loved Elizabeth's reaction to them! What a lovely variation. I loved all the characters and the storyline. I look forward to more from this author.
July 27, 2025
Excellent story execpt...
This story was engaging and pulled me in from the beginning. My one critic is not enough Darcy and Elizabeth time. They were at odd pretty much the entire story. That frustrated me tremendously.
This story was engaging and pulled me in from the beginning. My one critic is not enough Darcy and Elizabeth time. They were at odd pretty much the entire story. That frustrated me tremendously.
May 27, 2025
I really liked this book very sweet.
June 18, 2025
I think I loved this JA alternate timeline the very well indeed. Now I may have to read some Marcus Aurelius and perhaps look at some Irish, too.
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