I don't even know where to start, it could've been so much better. I had a couple issues with the storyline/characters but nothing unforgivable. But honestly I want to give it 1 star just for all the mistakes and errors in here. This book is way too short to have so many mistakes. It seriously needs an editor. There were words randomly there for no reason, and wrongly placed/used words, whole sentences didn't make sense. There was a part in book four where he introduced his uncle, and then the next paragraph it said father instead , then back to uncle the rest of the times. There were missing quotation marks, Then at the end there was a dialogue order didn't make any sense.
It said:::
"He was embezzling money from the company and for the most part covering his tracks. I didn't know about it, because these were the things he was in charge of. Elena was helping him launder money and apparently they had gotten in too deep."
"Which is why they set you up and tried to blackmail you."
"Mmhmm. My uncle wired me up and all I had to do was get a confession."
"Actually, it was. Once they admitted to extortion that was all they needed.........." (See? the last one makes sense too, just not right there! It's like a whole piece was missing from the conversation.)
And I could get over that if the errors weren't so excessive.....but there were way too many and it took away from the book a lot, I had to re-read whole paragraphs and decode the intended meaning way to often. It was very frustrating. Right now I'm giving it three stars for story, because I could've liked so much more if a few things were tweaked, but I cant get over all the errors, so my rating may change.