DNF @38pgs.
First, the author's voice is that of a tween. It's not pleasant to read.
Second, the sheer amount of sentence fragments is enough to drive anyone crazy. HOW does this stuff get published?!?!?! Absolutely terrible writing.
Third, he's not a small-town bachelor, he's from CHICAGO, for the love of Mike. The title *doesn't* fit. She has short black hair - the cover *doesn't* fit. You don't have to read more than the first SIX PAGES to get this information, so I'm wondering why it's all WRONG on the cover/title?
Fourth, she would NOT be keeping vulnerable baby otters in her house for a zoo if 1) she's not working for the zoo and 2) she's not there all day to take care of them. Not. A. Chance. Zoos don't just take random animals from people. Especially where common and indigenous animals are concerned - they have breeding programs, for that.
Fifth, he's cranky, bossy, arrogant, and awful. He hates his family, cares only about work, and is flirty because 'hey, hey, baby'... but that's NOT admirable. In *any* way.
Sixth, in the first 38 pages, the ONLY mention of anything spiritual is a bunch of five word prayers - the kind pagans send up - when a TORNADO rips the roof off their heads and drops a tree on them. INSIDE a restaurant. There's no faith driving this train wreck.
Like I said, bad writing. The characterizations aren't pleasant, the dialogue is choppy, the writing is fragmented, the action isn't built upon it's just dumped on the reader, and I just saw NO reason to continue. It's hit or miss with 'Love Inspired' - this was a miss by MILES and MILES.