I LOVE Kaylee Ryan's books. I loved this book, but I just couldn't get past the errors. Besides the extra words thrown in here and there that got missed because they were spelled correctly or words that didn't make sense because again, they were spelled correctly, and auto correct couldn't catch them. However, there were 2 huge errors my brain couldn't let go of. Hence, the 3 star rating.
The 1st one was Allison telling Hailey she refused to let Liam stay in the bathroom while taking the pregnancy test.
Chapter 47
“Well, I didn’t have to worry about that. Liam found out I was late and hauled my ass up to the bathroom and stood outside the door. He wanted to stay in there with me. I refused.” I laugh remember his excitement.
Chapter 19
I tear open the packing that is holding the test and pull off the cap. I walk toward the toilet. Liam turns and I grab his arm. “Stay,” I say. He leans down to kiss my forehead. “I’m just going to go get my phone for the timer.” I nod in agreement and watch as he walks out the door. I stand there by the toilet with the test in my hand................
Liam comes rushing back into the room; he was gone maybe thirty seconds. He holds up his phone where his stopwatch app is already opened. He’s wearing a huge grin across his face. “Let’s do this,” I say as I sit on the toilet and start the awkwardness that is peeing on a stick with your husband watching. Who can pee on command with an audience? “Allie, I can step out,” he tells me. “No. You said we are in this together. I need you here,” I tell him........ Finally, I’m able to do my business. Liam hands me the cap and I place it back on the end of the stick, lying it flat on the bathroom counter.
The 2nd big error is
Chapter 53
Sophia's 6th birthday party.
Chapter 54 Hailey
The three to one ratio is just not cutting it, especially when my husband fits in so well with our four-and-a-half-year-old and our two-year-old. Henry and Jaxon are currently chasing their dad with the water hose on the back deck.
How can Henry be only 4 1/2 he was only born 6 months after Sophia. So either he should be 5 1/2 or it should be Sophia's 5th birthday party.
I'm usually not one to knit pick things apart. I'm just a very detailed oriented person and these details had me WTFing like never before. I'm sorry this is just the way my brain works. I can't help it.
I still love Kaylee Ryan she's still my favorite author, but I couldn't get past these errors. I wish someone would've read the book and caught this before it was published.